Lars Eggert via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> writes:
> DNS Error (EDE) {RFC8914} EDNS0 option of value (RFC EDITOR: TBD).
> {RFC8914} looks like a Markdown citation bug.
Yep. Fixed.
> ### Stray characters
>
> The text version of this document contains these HTML entities, which might
> indicate issues with its XML source: `č`, `Š`, and `Č`
Actually it's the markdown source -- I'll get the names fixed though.
> ### Grammar/style
>
> #### "Table of Contents", paragraph 1
> ```
> . . . . . . . . . . 10 Appendix D. Github Version of This Document . . . . .
> ^^^^^^
> ```
> The official name of this software platform is spelled with a capital
> "H".
Good point. Better yet though, I've added a note that the rfc editor
should remove that section anyway.
These are done (but more following):
> #### Section 1.1, paragraph 1
> ```
> lag [RFC5155], which specifies whether or not that NSEC3 record provides pro
> ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
> ```
> Consider shortening this phrase to just "whether". It is correct though if you
> mean "regardless of whether".
>
> #### Section 2.3, paragraph 1
> ```
> w, ftp, mail, imap, login, database, etc) can be used to quickly reveal a lar
> ^^^
> ```
> A period is needed after the abbreviation "etc.".
>
> #### Section 5, paragraph 1
> ```
> y Covering NSEC Records and DNSSEC On-line Signing", RFC 4470, DOI 10.17487/R
> ^^^^^^^
> ```
> Do not mix variants of the same word ("on-line" and "online") within a single
> text.
I'm very confused now. That section looks nothing like you above text,
nor is that text anywhere. And ditto with this one:
> #### Section 7.1, paragraph 2
> ```
> NSSEC zone enumeration algorithm", n.d.. Appendix A. Deployment measurements
> ^^
> ```
> Two consecutive dots.
Were you perhaps reading a different reference or something?
> #### "Appendix A.", paragraph 2
> ```
> Vixie * Tim Wicinski Appendix D. Github Version of This Document While this
> ^^^^^^
> ```
> The official name of this software platform is spelled with a capital
> "H".
I've marked that section to be deleted by the RFC Editor, but fixed that anyway.
--
Wes Hardaker
USC/ISI
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