Hi, My apologies for getting in some minor comments so late. I do not suggest any technical changes. However, at least to my eye, there are some little glitches and editorial changes I would suggest.
Among the glitches I see are incorrect internal cross references, old implementation key word boilerplate, no specification for assignment policy for one range of INFO-CODE values, misspelled words, etc. Editorial changes are somewhat of a matter of taste. In any case these are also marked in the attached. Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e...@gmail.com On Thu, Mar 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM The IESG <iesg-secret...@ietf.org> wrote: > > The IESG has received a request from the Domain Name System Operations WG > (dnsop) to consider the following document: - 'Extended DNS Errors' > <draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error-14.txt> as Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final > comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > last-c...@ietf.org mailing lists by 2020-04-02. Exceptionally, comments > may > be sent to i...@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the > beginning > of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines an extensible method to return additional > information about the cause of DNS errors. Though created primarily > to extend SERVFAIL to provide additional information about the cause > of DNS and DNSSEC failures, the Extended DNS Errors option defined in > this document allows all response types to contain extended error > information. Extended DNS Error information does not change the > processing of RCODEs. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > IETF-Announce mailing list > ietf-annou...@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce >
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