I read the draft and support it. Suggest one wording change though: In the draft the term "trust anchor" is used when is should really be "secure entry point". At least to keep it in line with the dns-terminology draft and the fact that the KSK for the zone may not be a trust anchor.
Scott ________________________________ From: DNSOP <dnsop-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Bob Harold <rharo...@umich.edu> Sent: Tuesday, April 5, 2016 9:42 AM To: Ólafur Guðmundsson Cc: Tim Wicinski; dnsop Subject: Re: [DNSOP] Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 11:25 PM, Ólafur Guðmundsson <ola...@cloudflare.com<mailto:ola...@cloudflare.com>> wrote: Dear colleagues, a new version of the document has been posted that fixes few minor grammatical and spelling errors. this is version 02 URL: https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02.txt Status: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds/ Htmlized: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02 Diff: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds-02 Olafur On Sun, Apr 3, 2016 at 6:29 PM, Tim Wicinski <tjw.i...@gmail.com<mailto:tjw.i...@gmail.com>> wrote: This starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds Current versions of the draft is available here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-maintain-ds/ Please review the draft and offer relevant comments. Also, if someone feels the document is *not* ready for publication, please speak out with your reasons. Feel free to show up at DNSOP's Wednesday session and voice your approval or disapproval. This starts a two week Working Group Last Call process, and ends on 17 April 2016 thanks tim Looks good to me. One more typo: 5. Security considerations -- end of last sentence: "after a certain about of wait time - thus allowing a child administrator to cancel the request." "about" should be "amount"
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