I think the draft is good enough to be advanced.  Since it is on the 
Experimental track, there isn't too much risk.  It only affects the resolver 
that chooses to do it, not any other entity and doesn't change the DNS protocol.

Basic copy-edit comments:
1. Section 1. Introduction and background
        s/etc/etc.  (Depends on style guide used I guess)

2. Section 3 
        I would prefer the sentence on legal issues dropped.  It may decrease 
the usefulness of the logging, but maybe not the obligation to do it).

3. Section 3, paragraph 5
        "Other strange and illegal practices..."  Perhaps illegal is too strong 
of a word - replace with "unsafe"?  If it is illegal somewhere, keep the 
language as is.

        There also used to be a very poorly implemented load balancer that 
would always return A RR's for whatever qtype that was asked.  So a query for 
"example.com NS" would always return "www.example.com A".  A couple of .gov 
sites used them, but replaced them when deploying DNSSEC.  Not sure if they are 
still being used elsewhere.  Like the other broken load balancers, they are 
only found on leaf nodes so not a major stumbling block.

Security Considerations:
        While it does reduce the the amount of data seen by wire sniffers, it 
depends on where the wire sniffers are - if one is on the ISP somewhere in 
front of the recursive resolver, it could construct the entire query by 
recording all the minimized queries.  Maybe rewrite as "Minimising the amount 
of data sent also, in part, addresses the case of a wire sniffer on transit 
networks as well as the case of privacy violation by the servers."

also:  s/improvment/improvement


Scott

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