> On Dec 1, 2014, at 4:31 PM, Wes Hardaker <wjh...@hardakers.net> wrote: > > 神明達哉 <jin...@wide.ad.jp> writes: > >> From a quick check some of them still seem to be open. And, as far as >> I remember there has been no response to my comments, so I'm not sure >> if they were considered/discussed but dismissed or simply overlooked. > > First, apologies again for missing these comments during last call. > Multiple people missed it for some reason. > > Here's a summary of your comments and what I've done to address them. > My comments/actions are prefixed by "WJH:" > > > > * DONE Section 1 (introduction), the first paragraph: > > This document specifies how a child zone in the DNS ([RFC1034], > [RFC1035]) can publish a record to indicate to a parental agent that > it may copy and process certain records from the child zone. The > existence of and value change of the record may be monitored by a > parental agent and acted on as appropriate. > > I vaguely remember someone already pointed this out, but anyway: I'm > afraid the term "parental agent" is not so widely shared that we can > safely use it without first giving the definition. One easy way to > address this would be to add a forward reference to Section 1.1 at > the first occurrence of the term. If possible, it would be even > nicer if we can avoid using this term until the definition is given > in Section 1.1. For the same reason, it would be safer to avoid > using it in the abstract. > > WJH: I've put in a forward reference in the introduction. I'm > not worried about the abstract as much, as any serious reader > will likely read on anyway. And the point of the term was to > make sure we don't say something confusing like "parent" when > there is more than one. There is no standard term, and the best > that the WG came up with (thanks to Olafur) is the new term. > But a forward reference in the introduction definitely makes > sense. > See RFC7344 as definition of Parental Agent
> This document specifies how a child zone in the DNS ([RFC1034], > - [RFC1035]) can publish a record to indicate to a parental agent that > - it can copy and process certain records from the child zone. The > - existence of the record and any change in its value can be monitored > - by a parental agent and acted on depending on local policy. > + [RFC1035]) can publish a record to indicate to a parental agent (see > + section Section 2 for a definition of "parental agent") that it can > + copy and process certain records from the child zone. The existence > + of the record and any change in its value can be monitored by a > + parental agent and acted on depending on local policy. > Olafur _______________________________________________ DNSOP mailing list DNSOP@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dnsop
