FWIW: Communication is hard but I like what I'm hearing about relying on
and expecting the people around us to be compassionate and help out when
there's a misunderstanding. All the resolutions in the world won't fix
things if that common sense baseline isn't upheld.

Civility is surprisingly easy to let go of when emotions are high, but I
think everyone agrees it's a required foundation for any communication,
especially during disagreements.

To one of Gris' points too, I'm a native English speaker and when mailing
list volume gets high I can't track things either; anything people can do
to keep things simple and clear is appreciated by readers. Short, clear
sentences, bullets, making a mail "visually clear," etc., are all valuable
approaches.

Thanks for the discussion.

On Sat, Jun 1, 2019 at 11:55 AM Griselda Cuevas <g...@google.com.invalid>
wrote:

> My actionable input:
> I agree with Myrle, I'd prioritize having language simplification in
> websites and docs, and I'd like to explore we draft recommendations in how
> to write inclusive and effective emails (since everything happens in the
> mailing list).
>
> My non-actionable input:
> As a non-native speaker, joining long elaborated email threads is
> difficult, daunting and scary. I struggle to destill all points and ideas,
> specially in threads that are not in tree structure. I don't know who
> responded to who and what points got lost where. This is one of the primary
> reasons why I don't like email. People also tend to write unnecessarly long
> emails.
>
> I'd disagree with the assumption that if someone is highly educated we
> could handle these conversations. I have a Masters degree and I struggle
> with long conversations and some words. I speak 4 languages and my struggle
> with all of them is the same. I am not a language person. This is why I
> always use bullets in my emails, I try to order my thoughts and give them
> sequence.
>
> On Fri, May 31, 2019, 1:20 PM Alex Harui <aha...@adobe.com.invalid> wrote:
>
> > I've never tried to live in a foreign country, but when I've traveled to
> > places where I have already learned some of the language, simple signs
> are
> > definitely helpful, but even more helpful are friendly people who figure
> > out I'm not fluent and choose their own words to help me understand and
> > learn.
> >
> > My 2 cents,
> > -Alex
> >
> > On 5/30/19, 11:45 PM, "Myrle Krantz" <my...@apache.org> wrote:
> >
> >     I do think our focus, with respect to simplifying our language, needs
> > to be
> >     on websites and documentation rather than on mailing list
> > communications.
> >
> >     I’ve been in Germany for nearly 20 years. As such I’ve developed a
> lot
> > of
> >     habits for speaking with non-Native speakers of English. And I still
> > slip
> >     up on a regular basis.
> >
> >     From the other side, I speak excellent German. But I usually don’t
> even
> >     bother with the 200 euro question on “Wer wird Millionär?” (Who
> wants
> > to
> >     be a millionaire?) I just don’t have much chance when we’re talking
> > about
> >     German children’s rhymes and old television shows; I didn’t spend my
> >     childhood here. Things that feel *really* basic to a native speaker,
> > often
> >     just aren’t.
> >
> >     That makes this an area where „testing“ is necessary: you won’t
> really
> > be
> >     able to tell where you’re losing people until you actually do lose
> > them. So
> >     people need to feel safe saying “I’m confused; can you say it
> > differently
> >     please?”
> >
> >     Best,
> >     Myrle
> >
> >     On Thu, May 30, 2019 at 5:28 PM Patricia Shanahan <p...@acm.org>
> > wrote:
> >
> >     > There has been a discussion on board@, subject "[Sidebar] [D&I]
> > Example
> >     > of exclusion from debate", about writing English in a style that
> > will be
> >     > accessible to as many ASF participants as possible.
> >     >
> >     > Tools for evaluating writing have been mentioned.
> >     >
> >     > LIX index:
> >
> https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FLix_(readability_test&amp;data=02%7C01%7Caharui%40adobe.com%7Cc649cee25ecb44af958108d6e5938265%7Cfa7b1b5a7b34438794aed2c178decee1%7C0%7C0%7C636948819043273578&amp;sdata=I5ur8kQPQbft33SjGC2IO3NlXPYDn5V8djznW6EAm18%3D&amp;reserved=0)
> >     >
> >     > Gunning-Fog:
> >
> https://nam04.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.webfx.com%2Ftools%2Fread-able%2Fgunning-fog.html&amp;data=02%7C01%7Caharui%40adobe.com%7Cc649cee25ecb44af958108d6e5938265%7Cfa7b1b5a7b34438794aed2c178decee1%7C0%7C0%7C636948819043273578&amp;sdata=doarWUmgR6y8Nmf1UnymjUX8yyX9HHO8BmJpUVBqVbI%3D&amp;reserved=0
> >     >
> >     > I have a concern about both of those. They seem to be keyed to the
> >     > sequence in which children develop written language skills in
> school.
> >     >
> >     > Most ASF participants are educated adults, typically very
> > sophisticated
> >     > readers and writers of at least one language. My question,
> especially
> >     > for those who are not completely fluent in written English, is
> > whether
> >     > the same things give them difficulty.
> >     >
> >     > I have studied French, and can read it a bit. Complex sentence
> > structure
> >     > and multi-syllable words are no problem for me. Colloquial
> > expressions
> >     > and cultural references, even using single syllable words and short
> >     > sentences, are much harder to understand.
> >     >
> >     >
> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
> >     > To unsubscribe, e-mail: diversity-unsubscr...@apache.org
> >     > For additional commands, e-mail: diversity-h...@apache.org
> >     >
> >     >
> >
> >
> >
>

Reply via email to