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On Mon, Feb 27, 2023 at 9:24 PM Asaf Mesika <asaf.mes...@gmail.com> wrote:

> Mails don't support things like markdown diagrams or images and are
> generally less easy to read.
> My proposal includes a required section called Links in which you need to
> fill in the discussion thread in DEV mailing list and vote thread.
>
>
> On Mon, Feb 27, 2023 at 3:08 PM Girish Sharma <scrapmachi...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
>
> >  Hi Asaf,
> > I was referring to the PIP process, as a whole, as explained in
> > https://github.com/apache/pulsar/blob/master/wiki/proposals/PIP.md
> > Someone looking at GitHub ticket would find and almost empty PIP GH issue
> > while the same PIP has had many discussions over here in the ML.
> > There is scope of improvement in the process where we either remove the
> > first step to create the PIP over at GitHub and directly present the PIP
> in
> > the first mail of the thread here, or we do all discussions in GH.
> > Both the ML and GH are searchable and linkable for tracking purposes.
> >
> > Regards
> >
> > On Mon, Feb 27, 2023 at 6:23 PM Asaf Mesika <asaf.mes...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > > On Sun, Feb 26, 2023 at 2:49 PM Girish Sharma <scrapmachi...@gmail.com
> >
> > > wrote:
> > >
> > > > Good proposal Asaf.
> > > > I've also wondered why the PIP creation and discussion process is so
> > > > separated. The PIP discussion and voting starts off as a GitHub
> issue,
> > > but
> > > > all of its discussion happens here on the mailing list. Is there
> scope
> > of
> > > > improvement in that process as well?
> > > >
> > >
> > > Not sure I follow. Can you outline the problem exactly?
> > >
> > >
> > > >
> > > > Regards
> > > >
> > > > On Sun, Feb 26, 2023 at 6:16 PM tison <ti...@apache.org> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > > Hi Asaf,
> > > > >
> > > > > I agree that, generally, a PIP is written as a whole and paste as
> the
> > > > body.
> > > > > So +1 for your proposal.
> > > > >
> > > > > Additionally, I'm thinking of moving the doc of procedure
> > (wiki/PIP.md)
> > > > to
> > > > > the contributions guide and use the new markdown template to
> > supersede
> > > > the
> > > > > wiki/PIP-template.md. Then we don't need to hold the wiki folder.
> > > > >
> > > > > It can be an extended version to your proposal, so let's keep on
> your
> > > > > proposal in this thread. Just for your reference.
> > > > >
> > > > > Best,
> > > > > tison.
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Asaf Mesika <asaf.mes...@gmail.com> 于2023年2月26日周日 19:18写道:
> > > > >
> > > > > > Hi,
> > > > > >
> > > > > > I would like to suggest two changes I'd like to make to the PIP
> > > design
> > > > > > template:
> > > > > > 1. Remove the form - just have a markdown template fill the issue
> > > body
> > > > as
> > > > > > it is created.
> > > > > > 2. Change the PIP template structure
> > > > > >
> > > > > > == Removing the form
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Today, when you want to submit a PIP, you are required to fill
> out
> > a
> > > > form
> > > > > > with boxes composed of 3-4 lines length.
> > > > > > It's not good because:
> > > > > > * It broadcasts to the author: we want a very small PIP,
> something
> > > that
> > > > > > fits those small boxes.
> > > > > > * It makes the PIP look like a bug, where you fill out fields.
> > > > > > * It doesn't allow having H2 headings, only H1 headings, thus
> > > limiting
> > > > > the
> > > > > > structure.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > A PIP is a design essentially, something 1-3 pages long. Thus,
> > > > > > people take the time to write it down. Preferably, they copy
> paste
> > > the
> > > > > body
> > > > > > of the PIP issue, and use it to fill in sections.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > My suggestion is to define an issue template using only markdown,
> > > > > without a
> > > > > > form.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > == Changing PIP Structure
> > > > > >
> > > > > > Today the structure of the PIP doc (pasted below), is missing a
> > > section
> > > > > and
> > > > > > generally aims to jump directly into API changes / code /
> > > > implementation.
> > > > > > This results in lots of back and forth emails in an attempt to
> get
> > > the
> > > > > > following essentials:
> > > > > > * All required background knowledge to understand the proposal
> > > > > > * A high level overview of the proposed solution
> > > > > > * Understanding how this proposal will be monitored
> > > > > > * What steps exactly I need to take if I revert to the previous
> > > > version.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > The structure I propose below aims to reduce that friction and
> get
> > > all
> > > > > PIP
> > > > > > aligned to provide that information.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > === Today's structure
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Motivation
> > > > > > * "Explain why this change is needed, what benefits it would
> bring
> > to
> > > > > > Apache Pulsar and what problem it's trying to solve."
> > > > > > # Goal
> > > > > > * "Define the scope of this proposal. Given the motivation stated
> > > > above,
> > > > > > what are the problems that this proposal is addressing and what
> > other
> > > > > items
> > > > > > will be considering out of scope, perhaps to be left to a
> different
> > > > PIP."
> > > > > > # API Changes
> > > > > > * "Illustrate all the proposed changes to the API or wire
> protocol,
> > > > with
> > > > > > examples of all the newly added classes/methods, including
> Javadoc"
> > > > > > # Implementation
> > > > > > * "This should be a detailed description of all the changes that
> > are
> > > > > > expected to be made. It should be detailed enough that any
> > developer
> > > > that
> > > > > > is familiar with Pulsar internals would be able to understand all
> > the
> > > > > parts
> > > > > > of the code changes for this proposal."
> > > > > > * "This should also serve as documentation for any person that is
> > > > trying
> > > > > to
> > > > > > understand or debug the behavior of a certain feature."
> > > > > > # Alernatives
> > > > > > * "If there are alternatives that were already considered by the
> > > > authors
> > > > > > or, after the discussion, by the community, and were rejected,
> > please
> > > > > list
> > > > > > them here along with the reason why they were rejected"
> > > > > > # Anything else?
> > > > > >
> > > > > >
> > > > > > === My suggestion
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Motivation and Background information
> > > > > > * Give a high level explanation on all concepts you will be using
> > > > > > throughout this document. For example, if you want to talk about
> > > > > Persistent
> > > > > > Subscriptions, explain briefly (1 paragraph) what this is. If
> > you're
> > > > > going
> > > > > > to talk about Transaction Buffer, explain briefly what this is.
> If
> > > > you're
> > > > > > going to change something specific, that goes into a bit more
> > detail
> > > > > about
> > > > > > it and how it works. The Litmus test: I can read the design
> > document
> > > > and
> > > > > > understand the problem statement and what you plan to change
> > > *without*
> > > > > > resorting to a couple of hours of code reading just to start
> > having a
> > > > > high
> > > > > > level understanding of the change.
> > > > > > * Provide links where possible if a person wants to dig deeper
> into
> > > the
> > > > > > background information.
> > > > > > * Explain what is the problem you're trying to solve - current
> > > > situation.
> > > > > > * This section is the "Why" of your proposal.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Goals
> > > > > > ## Scope
> > > > > > * Describe the goals of your proposal, and why it benefits Apache
> > > > Pulsar
> > > > > > ## Out of Scope
> > > > > > * Describe what you have decided to keep out of scope, perhaps
> left
> > > > for a
> > > > > > different PIP/s.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # High-level Design
> > > > > > * Describe in high level, end-to-end, the solution. This should
> be
> > a
> > > > few
> > > > > > paragraphs long as a guideline.
> > > > > > * Reading this would allow me to understand the solution from a
> > > bird's
> > > > > eye
> > > > > > view, end to end.
> > > > > > * DON'T put all the design in a Google Doc and share the link
> here,
> > > as
> > > > it
> > > > > > won't last the test of time.
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Detailed Design
> > > > > > * Describe in detail what you plan to do to achieve your high
> level
> > > > > design
> > > > > > * It should include the following if applicable:
> > > > > >   * REST API Changes
> > > > > >   * Protocol Changes
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Monitoring
> > > > > > * Describe exactly what you will add to Pulsar allowing you to
> > > > > > monitor/observe this proposal?
> > > > > >   * If those are metrics, provide the names, description, labels
> > and
> > > > > units
> > > > > >   * Explain what constitutes abnormal that I should pay attention
> > to
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Backward Compatibility
> > > > > > * Describe exact instructions if someone needs to revert from a
> > > version
> > > > > > containing it to a previous version
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Alternatives
> > > > > > * Describe alternative design decisions and why you have not
> opted
> > > for
> > > > > them
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # General notes
> > > > > > * Any general notes you wish to make
> > > > > >
> > > > > > # Links (Updated afterwards)
> > > > > > * Mailing List discussion thread:
> > > > > > * Mailing List voting thread:
> > > > > >
> > > > > > ==
> > > > > > Would love to hear what you think about it, before opening a PR
> > about
> > > > > this.
> > > > > >
> > > > >
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > --
> > > > Girish Sharma
> > > >
> > >
> >
> >
> > --
> > Girish Sharma
> >
>

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