On 13-03-25, at 07:41 , Rob Weir <robw...@apache.org> wrote:

> On Sun, Mar 24, 2013 at 10:08 PM, Louis Suárez-Potts <lui...@gmail.com> wrote:
>> The new-ish splashcreen improves on the old, which had the charm of being 
>> written in not-quite-colloquial English. But now its as charming as a gap 
>> toothed smile. Things are missing.
>> 
>> So:
>> 
>> NOW:
>> 
>> Copyright © 2012 Apache Software Foundation.
>> All rights reserved.
>> 
>> This product was created by Apache Software Foundation, based on Apache 
>> OpenOffice.
>> Apache OpenOffice acknowledges all community members, especially those 
>> mentioned at <credits url>.
>> 
> 
> Or just drop the 2nd paragraph.  You can't click on the link in the
> splash screen, right?  And it is not up long enough for anyone to
> write it down.  We can cover that info in Help/About.
> 
> -Rob

Suits me.

louis
> 
>> —
>> 
>> IMPROVED:
>> 
>> Copyright © 2012 Apache Software Foundation.
>> All rights reserved.
>> 
>> This product, Apache OpenOffice, was created by The Apache Software 
>> Foundation and is based on code hosted by the ASF.
>> We recognize the contributions of the members constituting the Apache 
>> OpenOffice Project and in particular credit those mentioned at
>> 
>> --
>> 
>> -louis
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