On Sun, Mar 24, 2013 at 10:08 PM, Louis Suárez-Potts <lui...@gmail.com> wrote:
> The new-ish splashcreen improves on the old, which had the charm of being 
> written in not-quite-colloquial English. But now its as charming as a gap 
> toothed smile. Things are missing.
>
> So:
>
> NOW:
>
> Copyright © 2012 Apache Software Foundation.
> All rights reserved.
>
> This product was created by Apache Software Foundation, based on Apache 
> OpenOffice.
> Apache OpenOffice acknowledges all community members, especially those 
> mentioned at <credits url>.
>

Or just drop the 2nd paragraph.  You can't click on the link in the
splash screen, right?  And it is not up long enough for anyone to
write it down.  We can cover that info in Help/About.

-Rob

> —
>
> IMPROVED:
>
> Copyright © 2012 Apache Software Foundation.
> All rights reserved.
>
> This product, Apache OpenOffice, was created by The Apache Software 
> Foundation and is based on code hosted by the ASF.
> We recognize the contributions of the members constituting the Apache 
> OpenOffice Project and in particular credit those mentioned at
>
> --
>
> -louis
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