> OK, I read it over.  In general, I like it, although I think words are being 
> put in my mouth...
If not you Alex, then who? What would you say if not these words?

> Anyway here's a bunch of nitpicky stuff that will reduce word count a bit.
Thanks for the feedback. Your input was added & IMO, makes the release stronger 
and more clear. Nice job!

>"The future releases of Apache Flex currently being worked on will include
>better support for Maven and better parity between mx and spark components."
>- Again I see this as a promise.  How about "Work on next release of Apache
>Flex is already underway."
I removed the promise but left compromise language in because of other 
feedback. As the releases are coming faster, this disagreement won't be 
important because the project will work to make the "future" a reality soon 
after the press release.

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