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Reporting-MTA: dns; inflightproductions.com Original-Recipient: rfc822;<sneha.nath...@inflightproductions.com > Final-Recipient: rfc822;<sneha.nath...@inflightproductions.com > Action: failed Status: 5.0.0 Remote-MTA: dns; [192.168.0.108] Diagnostic-Code: smtp;host [192.168.0.108] says: 550 sneha.nath...@weareifp.com unknown user account Received: from [192.168.0.246] (HELO ifpmax) by inflightproductions.com (CommuniGate Pro SMTP 5.4.7) with SMTP id 28593088; Fri, 16 May 2014 17:17:58 +0100 Subject: Job Sheet Completed To: dev@couchdb.apache.org From: dev@couchdb.apache.org Return-Path: dev@couchdb.apache.org Date: Fri, 16 May 2014 17:17:58 +0100 Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="=_d1758738fcaa5d82784cdfb4f9ce416f" MIME-Version: 1.0 Message-ID: <auto-000028593...@inflightproductions.com On 19 May 2014, at 21:30, Joan Touzet <woh...@apache.org> wrote: > Jason, thanks for your time to review the text. > > I've inserted the Oxford comma everywhere. I've also added "excessive or > unnecessary profanity" to the laundry list. > > For point 5, the parallel structure is limited to finishing the sentence > "We strive to..." and doesn't have to start with "be," see point 7 for > the canonical counterexample. > > I've explicitly avoided most of the terms you mention (respect, > politeness, civility) because they don't alone capture all of the > behaviours listed there. To wit, you can insult a friend jokingly, but > others may not understand the humorous intent and find it upsetting or > offputting. In the text, it does say you should not "insult or put down > other participants." I think that's clear enough. I am open to "choose > words carefully" if others think the current text is too wordy, but > the current text does come directly from upstream @ > http://speakup.io/coc.html > > -Joan > > ----- Original Message ----- > From: "Jason Smith" <jason.h.sm...@gmail.com> > To: dev@couchdb.apache.org > Sent: Monday, May 19, 2014 2:09:52 PM > Subject: Re: Code of Conduct & Diversity Statement draft needs your feedback! > h > Hi, Joan. Thanks for this! > > First, a perhaps trivial note: the document switches once or twice to and > from the Oxford comma. ("...twitter, and"; "...friendly and") > > I have two comments about specific guideline 5 ("words we choose"). > > Can we get profanity explicity listed here? It is generally considered > unprofessional; but I don't like it on inclusiveness grounds. Profanity is > characteristically Western and it can be a turn-off for non-Westerners. I > would phase it: "excessive or unnecessary profanity" > > Next, as much as possible, should we stick to "what you do" rather than > "what you are"? Rather than "be careful in the words that we choose" what > about "be respectful" or "be polite" or "be professional"? I can imagine > somebody saying "I *did* carefully choose to say <something hurtful> > because the situation demanded it." > > I know this code is intentionally subjective, so maybe my loophole is no > big deal. Anyway, the current phrasing is a bit awkward in its own right. > Maybe just "Choose words carefully" or "Communicate politely" (or any > synonym). Or to keep your parallel structure, maybe "Be civil." > > > On Sun, May 18, 2014 at 6:19 AM, Joan Touzet <woh...@apache.org> wrote: > >> Hello everyone, >> >> The draft CoC and diversity statement have been published at: >> >> https://cwiki.apache.org/confluence/pages/viewpage.action?pageId=41812010 >> >> The wiki is a bit slow today so if it doesn't load the first time, hit >> reload and be patient. >> >> Please take the time to review this and post comments here on the dev >> ML. >> >> Outstanding items (2 and 3 are specifically for the PMC): >> >> 1. Create expanded CoC for conferences/events >> 2. Determine appropriate venue and scope for diversity ML >> 3. Determine appropriate private reporting compliance mechanism >> >> -Joan >> > > > ----------------------------- > > > Registered Office: 15 Stukeley Street, London WC2B 5LT, England. > Registered in England number 1421223 > > This message is for the designated recipient only and may contain privileged, > proprietary, or otherwise private information. If you have received it in > error, please notify the sender immediately and delete the original. Any > other use of the email by you is prohibited. Please note that the information > provided in this e-mail is in any case not legally binding; all committing > statements require legally binding signatures. > > > http://www.inflightproductions.com > > >
