Hi, Aizhamal, Thank you for sharing such a nice presentation draft with us!
I love the neat design of the slides: simple, pleasant, and just-right amount of colors. My background is in the areas of strategic advisory, process design and implementation, risk management, audit, finance, and accounting. I'm also new to Apache. If you don't mind, I'd like to offer some general suggestions for your consideration from a new Apache member and non-technical perspectives. *1. Slide # 1 - Cover Page Slide: * "The Apache Way for Everyone". Would "The Apache Way" be more flexible and more accurate? It reminds me of "HP Way" but HP did not say "HP Way for Everyone". I guess your presentation target audience will be the new Apache contributors? In fact, your presentation could probably be a "recruiting" or "introduction of Apache" tool for anyone who may consider joining Apache in the future. If your presentation can be widely used beyond just the newcomers, remove "for everyone" may be more appealing to the non-Apache audience. Currently, there is no "Table of Content". Would you consider adding it as your new slide # 2? *2. Slide # 2 "Mission of ASF": * "...by providing services and support for *like-minded* software projects..." If this is indeed Apache mission or belief, I am curious about why emphasize "like-minded"? I feel it might be helpful to provide some context. I believe creativity and thinking outside of the box are the critical mindset to technology in general. If everyone is thinking the same or if we want everyone to conform, how effectively can we develop better and new tools, applications, etc.? *3. Slide # 3: * This is the Overview slide. I recommend removing the last bullet point as it doesn't provide much substance....and it appears self-promoting or self-recognition without providing any achievement or evidence. If my understanding of Apache is correct, it has become the most respected technology community globally. Talented developers around the world take the pride in contributing their own time and energy in developing Apache projects and/or initiatives. Most of them (if not all) are not paid to do so. With this said, I feel perhaps we can beef up this slide to add some international facts so that the new members won't feel it is U.S. Centric because it is not. *4. Slide # 4 "Legal Structure of ASF": * I'm not sure this slide shall be labeled as a legal structure. It appears to be an organizational chart. or decision maker organization chart. What kind of legal services or legal decisions will each of the roles play on this slide? *5. Slide # 5 "The Apache Way": * This is an introduction slide. If "THe Apache Way" is driven by the "Six Principles", then I'd suggest we move slide # 20 "The Six Principles" to be slide # 6 to support slide # 5. *6. Slide # 7 through Slide # 12: * Those slides, in theory, shall be the explanatory slides to explain each of the Six Principles. *7. Slide # 8: * "If it didn't happen on the mailing list, it didn't happen." I understand the importance of putting everything (all communication) on emails. However, it may not capture another or other expectations where perhaps Apache organization has some form of record keeping methodology or initiative where email correspondences are no longer the only way to keep track of projects, comments, revisions, etc. Some people's contributions may not be captured by sending to a mailing list due to various reasons. From risk management perspectives, record retention is actually one of the hot topics in protecting the company and minimizing legal exposure... *8. Slide # 9: * Assuming the sequence of the actions is correct, the numbering is a bit confusing. Would you consider adding (or moving) the numbers to their corresponding action? Example: 1. Consensus 2. Preparing for a Vote . 3. Casting your Vote 4. Calling a Vote Additionally, I feel we missed a step here. Conducting a Vote isn't the objective. The objective is to get the votes in order to make a decision. With this said, would you think perhaps we shall add the following two steps after "4. Calling a Vote": 5. Consolidating Votes 6. Sharing and Evaluating Votes 7. Making the Decision *9. Slide # 12: * "Responsibilities and Expectations". Given the volunteering nature of Apache, it is very hard to hold each person accountable the same way as we normally would do in a profit organization...Most volunteers have their busy full-time jobs. Hence, sometimes, I can imagine some contributors may wear different hats and some volunteers may not be able to commit to a tight deadline given some circumstances. I would suggest not to put the responsibilities in such a detailed way. Perhaps a more general conceptual description of each role would be sufficient? *10. Slide # 13 through Slide # 16: "Apache Citizenship for Everyone".* I'd like to suggest we say "Apache Citizenship" (remove "for everyone") No matter how good a process document is designed, communicated or implemented, it won't matter unless the people will follow and execute. To build a sustainable company or a community, the key is to establish a healthy, safe, respectful, and empowering culture. People are the foremost key to any success although having an effective process and documentation are also important. With this said, I would highly recommend you to move these slides to your earlier presentation. Perhaps right after the slide of "Mission of Apache"? *11. Slide # 17 and # 18: * I think these two slides shall belong to slide # 19 "Graveyard Slides" because they provide additional information (other resources) Currently, there is only one slide # 20 under the "Graveyard Slides". As mentioned above, the slide # 20 "The Six Apache Principles" is relevant and a key slide, which probably drives most of the Apache projects and initiatives. I think Slide # 20 shall be moved up to become slide # 6 (right after the current slide # 5). In short, perhaps we can design this presentation deck with the following structure: 1. Cover page 2. Table of Content (1) Background (or History) Apache (accomplishments, awards, recognition, etc.) (2) Present Apache (# of projects, # of members, # of countries, etc.) (3) Future Apache (Mission Statement, Goals/Objectives, etc.) (4) Apache Culture (or Citizenship) (5) Apache Six Principles (6) Appendix (websites, books, articles, etc) Thank you for your time spent in reviewing such a long email. And thank you for putting together such a nice introduction deck, which I have found it very informative and helpful as I'm new to Apache. I'm sure this presentation will be appreciated by many future new members in the years to come. Happy Holidays to you and everyone on this mailing list! Sincerely, Haoning (Haoning Richter) Email: hao...@gmail.com On Tue, Dec 18, 2018 at 11:42 PM Aizhamal Nurmamat kyzy <aizha...@google.com.invalid> wrote: > Hello everyone! > > My name is Aizhamal and I joined the Open Source Strategy team at Google > Cloud. I will work with Gris Cuevas (g...@apache.org) on two main > projects: > > New Contributor Experience - I’ll develop resources that will help > improve the onboarding experience of anyone who wants to contribute to > an > Apache project for the first time > - > > Open Source Documentation - I’ll develop resources related to best > practices for documentation in Open Source projects > > > Our team’s objective is to help new contributors become familiar with the > ASF, and help them be good citizens of the projects that they participate > in. With this we hope to support projects to develop a healthy Open Source > culture. > > Our first contribution is this slide deck [1] > <https://s.apache.org/apache-way-for-everyone> with an introduction to The > Apache Way. We are aware it’s not the first presentation on this topic, but > we made it as a visual tool for presentation or self-study, so we’ve made > sure to have complete and detailed speaker notes for anyone to use. > > If missed anything important, or misinterpreted some concept, I would > greatly appreciate your feedback. > > In our plan, we also want to study how different projects implement The > Apache Way within their communities, e.g., customs and etiquette, > communication channels they use, PRs and code reviews, etc. We plan to > produce some material from that and share with the Apache community. > > Thanks for your time, I am very excited to become part of this great > community! > > Wishing you all wonderful holidays :) > > Aizhamal > > > [1] https://s.apache.org/apache-way-for-everyone > > On Fri, Nov 30, 2018 at 3:01 AM Michael Peoni <mapster1...@gmail.com> > wrote: > > > Thank yoyu for the insight's i am currenty working on several projects > > there is a couple with Google and Microsoft but keep getting blocked by > > technical issues > > > > On Thu, Nov 29, 2018 at 5:22 AM Bertrand Delacretaz < > > bdelacre...@apache.org> > > wrote: > > > > > On Thu, Nov 29, 2018 at 4:35 PM Santiago Gala <santiago.g...@gmail.com > > > > > wrote: > > > > ...It is a long term process, and ideally quality increases > > > monotonically in > > > > time, so you can stop or pause whenever you want or needs to, > > > > always with positive results.... > > > > > > That's a great way to frame what I was trying to say! > > > > > > We work like that in our software projects: do small things that add > > > value, so that if you leave or if for some reason the project's > > > resources diminish whatever you did was useful. > > > > > > -Bertrand > > > > > > --------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > To unsubscribe, e-mail: dev-unsubscr...@community.apache.org > > > For additional commands, e-mail: dev-h...@community.apache.org > > -- > > *Aizhamal Nurmamat kyzy* > > Open Source Program Manager > > 646-355-9740 Mobile > > 601 North 34th Street, Seattle, WA 98103 >
