On Sun, Nov 09, 2003 at 03:12:19PM +0100, Mattia Dongili wrote: > * Package name : xfree86-driver-synaptics > > > Please be sure to mention in the package description that this is a > > driver module *for* the XFree86 X server, not a driver module *from* the > > XFree86 Project, Inc. > > Description : Synaptics TouchPad driver for XFree86
I recommend "Synaptics TouchPad driver for XFree86 X server". > An input driver for the XFree86 X server to enable advanced features > of the Synaptics Touchpad including: This is a sentence fragment, no matter how many things you list next. :) I suggest changing the beginning of the sentence to "This package provides an input driver...". -- G. Branden Robinson | Freedom is kind of a hobby with me, Debian GNU/Linux | and I have disposable income that [EMAIL PROTECTED] | I'll spend to find out how to get http://people.debian.org/~branden/ | people more of it. -- Penn Jillette
signature.asc
Description: Digital signature
