--- Giovanni Ridolfi <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> escribió:
> Dear Miriam,
>
> I think I found some typos in your nice article.
>
> > if she/he already did.
> I'd suggest you to use "they" instead of "she/he"
> see e.g.:
>
http://lists.debian.org/debian-www/2004/08/msg00075.html
>
> and... I'd rather prefer you use the present perfect
> instead of past simple
> <OK, native English speakers can [f|b]lame me ;-)
>
> so:
> > if she/he already did.
> if she/he already did --> if they have already done
>
> > We'll expand the tar.gz archive and rename it
> > to the proper .orig.tar.gz file name it will need
> in Debian's
> > building system ( <package>_<version>.orig.tar.gz
> ):
> >
> > $ tar xvfz roaddemo-1.0.1.tar.gz
> > $ mv roaddemo-1.0.1.tar.gz
> roaddemo_1.0.1.orig.tar.gz
> > $ cd roaddemo_1.0.1
> >
>
> > $ cd roaddemo_1.0.1
> I do not understand when the *directory*
> roaddemo_1.0.1 (underscore)
> was created.
> I think that could be a typo:
> s/\_/\-/
Lots of thanks Giovanni, you were right in both :)
I've already corrected them, thanks!
Greetings,
Miry
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