2011/8/11 Christian PERRIER <bubu...@debian.org>: > Quoting Keng-Yu Lin (ken...@lexical.tw): > >> Thanks for the suggestion. I modified the description as below.I hope >> that it is better explained and understandable. >> >> Package: wnpp >> Severity: wishlist >> Owner: "Keng-Yu Lin" <ken...@lexical.tw> >> >> * Package name : urfkill >> Version : 0.2.0 >> Upstream Author : Gary Lin <g...@suse.com> >> * URL : http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/urfkill >> * License : GPL, LGPL >> Programming Lang: C >> Description : wireless killswitch management daemon for laptops >> >> urfkill daemon provides the management of the rfkill-related hotkeys >> and the killswitches in a more configurable way for the common RF >> devices, e.g. WiFi, Bluetooth, WWan, etc. urfkill handles the various >> key codes (KEY_WLAN, KEY_BLUETOOTH, KEY_RFKILL, etc) >> and toggles the killswitches based on a pre-defined policy. > > Maybe just avoid starting sentences with "urfkill" as it is always > wierd to have sentences beginning with a lowercase letter. > > A common trick is using "The <foo> program|daemon". Also avoid "e.g." > which is a latinism that's too often used in English..:). I propose > parenthesis...another option would be using "such as". Replace "etc." > with an ellipsis (...) as it avoids the tricky use of a dot before and > after a closing parenthesis. > > That would give: > > The urfkill daemon allow managins the rfkill-related hotkeys > and the killswitches in a more configurable way for the common RF > devices (WiFi, Bluetooth, WWan...). It handles the various > key codes (KEY_WLAN, KEY_BLUETOOTH, KEY_RFKILL, etc) > and toggles the killswitches based on a pre-defined policy.
Thanks for the refinement. I hope the description looks better now. :-) Package: wnpp Severity: wishlist Owner: "Keng-Yu Lin" <ken...@lexical.tw> * Package name : urfkill Version : 0.2.0 Upstream Author : Gary Lin <g...@suse.com> * URL : http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/urfkill * License : GPL, LGPL Programming Lang: C Description : wireless killswitch management daemon for laptops The urfkill daemon allow managing the rfkill-related hotkeys and the killswitches in a more configurable way for the common RF devices (WiFi, Bluetooth, WWan...). It handles the various key codes (KEY_WLAN, KEY_BLUETOOTH, KEY_RFKILL...) and toggles the killswitches based on a pre-defined policy. -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-wnpp-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org Archive: http://lists.debian.org/CAMe48Jj8ZykwTumD9VVVxvVTSjLdíw4qvwkkzw4jgyjax...@mail.gmail.com
