On Mon, Mar 04, 2002 at 02:42:23AM -0500, Colin Walters <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> was heard to say: > > Description : Vega Strike is an Interactive Flight Simulator/Real > > Time Stratagy being developed for Linux and Windows in 3d OpenGL... With > > stunning Graphics better than that of most if not all commercial space > > simulators, Vega Strike will be a hit for all gamers!!! > > This is a bad description. The first line of the description should be > a full sentence which concisely summarizes the package, and it should > not end in a period. The rest of the description could contain fewer > excalamation points, and need not mention Linux or Windows (since a > Debian user already knows it's available for them). How about this:
By way of explanation, I think that he cut&paste the description from http://sourceforge.net/projects/vegastrike. Daniel -- /-------------------- Daniel Burrows <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> -------------------\ | "When you have heard a joke, you have a | | key to the secret of the universe, and | | you have power for all time against the | | force of evil." -- Garrison Keillor | \------- Listener-supported public radio -- NPR -- http://www.npr.org --------/
