On Mon, 2002-03-04 at 01:24, Mike Furr wrote: > Description : Vega Strike is an Interactive Flight Simulator/Real Time > Stratagy being developed for Linux and Windows in 3d OpenGL... With stunning > Graphics better than that of most if not all commercial space simulators, > Vega Strike will be a hit for all gamers!!!
This is a bad description. The first line of the description should be a full sentence which concisely summarizes the package, and it should not end in a period. The rest of the description could contain fewer excalamation points, and need not mention Linux or Windows (since a Debian user already knows it's available for them). How about this: Description: Interactive flight simulator and real-time strategy game Vega Strike is an interactive 3D OpenGL based flight simulator and real-time strategy game. Its features include stunning graphics, over 100 star systems, sound effects, a programmable AI, and a mission scripting system. . [maybe other stuff here] P.S. please wrap your lines at about 72 columns or so.
