Jonathan Nieder <jrnie...@gmail.com> writes:

> How about this?

> diff --git i/policy.sgml w/policy.sgml
> index 7d514921..58bde0bb 100644
> --- i/policy.sgml
> +++ w/policy.sgml
> @@ -3766,8 +3766,9 @@ Checksums-Sha256:
>               <p>
>                 The field name identifies the VCS. The field's value uses the
>                 version control system's conventional syntax for describing
> -               repository locations and should be sufficient to locate the
> -               repository used for packaging. Ideally, it also locates the
> +               repository locations and should be sufficient to locate a
> +               publicly accessible repository used for packaging.
> +               Ideally, it also locates the
>                 branch used for development of new versions of the Debian
>                 package.
>               </p>

Looks good to me.  (Tiny grammar nit: "publicly-accessible", but I can fix
that when committing.)

-- 
Russ Allbery (r...@debian.org)               <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>


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