On Sun, 27 Mar 2005 02:13:46 +0100 Lewis Jardine wrote: > Francesco Poli wrote: > > > On Sat, 26 Mar 2005 17:27:57 -0500 Benj. Mako Hill wrote: > > > > [anti-DRM clause] > > > >>In terms of suggesting a textual fix, how about: > >> > >> You may not distribute, publicly display, publicly perform, or > >> publicly digitally perform the Work with any technological measures > >> that control access or use of the Work by those to whom they are > >> distributed, displayed, or performed in a manner inconsistent with > >> the terms of this License Agreement. > >> > >>Would this clarify things? > > > > > > I think it would. > > > > Note that this would ban the distribution of DRMed versions entirely, > even if a transparent copy is provided. This would not permit (for > example) the distribution of a CC book in .lit format (as there is no > known way to edit one), even if there was a clean copy (or even the > original sourcecode) in the same archive.
You are right.
Actually, while commenting Benjamin's proposed fix, I was (wrongly)
considering it as if the "unless..." part was there.
But it wasn't.
Maybe this is better:
| You may not distribute, publicly display, publicly perform, or
| publicly digitally perform the Work with any technological measures
| that control access or use of the Work by those to whom they are
| distributed, displayed, or performed in a manner inconsistent with the
| terms of this License Agreement, unless you also simultaneously
| distribute, publicly display, publicly perform, or publicly digitally
| perform the Work to the same recipients without such measures.
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:-( This Universe is buggy! Where's the Creator's BTS? ;-)
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