Hi, Joost van Baal-Ilić <joostvb-debian-doc-2016032...@mdcc.cx> wrote: > > <item>many developers, volunteers, and beta testers, and > > - <item>the flaky memories of its authors. :-) > > - <item>Kamaraju Kusumanchi's <url name="Choosing a Debian distribution > > FAQ" > > id="http://people.cornell.edu/pages/kk288/debian_choosing_distribution.html";>, > > who graciously made it GPL so I could include it as a new chapter (see > > <ref id="choosing">) > > + <item>the flaky memories of its authors :-) > > + <item>and Kamaraju Kusumanchi's <url name="Choosing a Debian > > distribution FAQ" > > id="http://people.cornell.edu/pages/kk288/debian_choosing_distribution.html";>, > > who graciously made it GPL so I could include it as a new chapter (see > > <ref id="choosing">). > > </list> > > s/so I could include/so it could be included/
Yes. > > <p>The authors would like to thank all those who helped make this > > Index: ftparchives.sgml > > =================================================================== > > --- ftparchives.sgml (Revision 10939) > > +++ ftparchives.sgml (Arbeitskopie) > > @@ -61,14 +61,14 @@ > > <item><em>sarge</em> was the sergeant of the Green Plastic Army Men, > [...] > > <!-- SID should be the last line always --> > > @@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ > > using the standard Debian package management tools, you can set up your own > > apt-able package archive. This is also useful if you'd like to share your > > Debian packages while these are not distributed by the Debian project. > > -Instructions on how to do this are given in the <url name="Debian > > Repository > > +Instructions on how to do this are given in the (obsolete) <url > > name="Debian Repository > > HOWTO" > > id="http://www.debian.org/doc/manuals/repository-howto/repository-howto";>. > > Better not mention obsolete stuff at all. I will mark this for further discussion. > > > > +### In the following, change the examples into a senseful ordering, > > +### as it is also executed by user. > > - <item>To upgrade all the packages on your system (without installing > > - extra packages or removing packages), run: > [...] > > # is not a comment mark in smgl, use > > <!-- In the following, change the examples into a senseful ordering, > as it is also executed by user. --> Ok. Although I inserted the lines just as a comment in the patch (to explain changings). I don't wanted to keep that comments in the sgml file. > > @@ -103,8 +99,12 @@ > > > > <item>To remove the foo package and its configuration files from > > your > > system, run: > > - <example>apt-get --purge remove foo</example> > > + <example>apt-get purge foo</example> > > I'd use "apt", not "apt-get", as the standard tool for package management. Since that is likely a lot of more work (and that changings are of that sort, which I can unfuzzy in the translations easily), I will split that apt-get -> apt changings into a separate patch. Thanks Holger -- ============================================================ Created with Sylpheed 3.5.0 under D E B I A N L I N U X 8 . 0 " J E S S I E " . Registered Linux User #311290 - https://linuxcounter.net/ ============================================================
