Hi Justin, Justin B Rye <justin.byam....@gmail.com> wrote: > Holger Wansing wrote: [...] > > <p>Parts of the information came from: > > <list> > > - <item>The Debian-1.1 release announcement, by <url name="Bruce Perens" > > id="http://www.perens.com/";>. > > - <item>The Linux FAQ, by <url name="Ian Jackson" > > id="http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~ijackson/";>. > > + <item>The Debian-1.1 release announcement, by <url name="Bruce Perens" > > id="http://www.perens.com/";>, > > + <item>The Linux FAQ, by <url name="Ian Jackson" > > id="http://www.chiark.greenend.org.uk/~ijackson/";>, > ^ > I'm not sure about the item-initial capitalisation here - if we're > treating "The Linux FAQ" as a title, shouldn't it be in quotes or > something?
I don't see the globally strategy in this document, to place titles inside of quotes. So changing to such strategy would require most probably many changes... [...] > > <item><em>sarge</em> was the sergeant of the Green Plastic Army Men, > > <item><em>etch</em> was the toy blackboard (Etch-a-Sketch), > > (Do people think of etch-a-sketches as blackboards? For a start, > isn't it more of a whiteboard?) I personally have no preference here (german speaker). What would you suggest? > > <item><em>lenny</em> was the toy binoculars, > > - <item><em>squeeze</em> was the name for the three-eyed aliens, > > - <item><em>wheezy</em> was the name of the rubber toy penguin with > > + <item><em>squeeze</em> was the three-eyed aliens, > > You could I suppose say that "Squeeze" *referred to* the aliens, but I > think the simplest approach is to keep "the name for/of" in this one > case. > > (Actually I'm not sure the name "Squeeze" was ever mentioned in the > original movie, though it might be in the merchandising or the > screenplay or something. And technically the names used in Toy Story > all obeyed the standard capitalisation rules of English orthography!) More than that: what would you propose (since someone told me, Squeeze could be seen as more than one person [three-eyed] ): <item><em>squeeze</em> was the name of the three-eyed alien <item><em>squeeze</em> was the name of the three-eyed aliens I personally would use alien > > + <item><em>wheezy</em> was the rubber toy penguin with > > a red bow tie, > > - <item><em>jessie</em> was the name of the yodelling cowgirl, > > - <item><em>stretch</em> was the name of the toy rubber octopus with > > suckers on her eight long arms. > > + <item><em>jessie</em> was the yodelling cowgirl, > ^ > If we're standardising to en_US, isn't that usually "yodeling" (cf. > "traveling")? Changed to yodeling > > Index: uptodate.sgml > > =================================================================== > > --- uptodate.sgml (Revision 10939) > > +++ uptodate.sgml (Arbeitskopie) > > @@ -57,7 +57,7 @@ > > Answer any questions that might come up, and your system will be upgraded. > > > > <p>Note that <prgn/aptitude/ is not the recommended tool for > > -doing upgrades from one &debian; release to another. For upgrades between > > +doing upgrades from one &debian; release to another. Use <prgn/apt-get/ > > instead. For upgrades between > > releases you should read the <url > > id="http://www.debian.org/releases/stable/releasenotes"; name="Release > > Notes">. This document describes in detail the recommended steps for > > upgrades > > > > @@ -92,9 +92,8 @@ > > be used. The configuration file is <file>/etc/apt/sources.list</file>. > > See also <ref id="dselect">. > > (No, don't see dselect!) I will note that for further discussion... For the rest I followed your suggestions. Thanks Holger -- ============================================================ Created with Sylpheed 3.5.0 under D E B I A N L I N U X 8 . 0 " J E S S I E " . Registered Linux User #311290 - https://linuxcounter.net/ ============================================================
