Package: devscripts
Version: 2.9.16
Severity: minor
Tags: patch

Found some typos in '/usr/share/man/man1/pts-subscribe.1.gz', see attached 
'.diff'.

Note:  also cut some redundancies, e.g.:

    "for a _future_ date ... in 30 days _time_"

...to:

    "in 30 days"

...etc.  Didn't whittle down the whole manual tho'.



Hope this helps...

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--- pts-subscribe.1     2006-03-29 10:21:50.000000000 -0500
+++ /tmp/pts-subscribe.1        2006-03-30 01:33:08.000000000 -0500
@@ -4,24 +4,23 @@
 .SH SYNOPSIS
 \fBpts-subscribe\fR [options] \fIpackage\fR
 .SH DESCRIPTION
-\fBpts-subscribe\fR sends a subscription request for the package
+\fBpts-subscribe\fR sends a subscription request for
 \fIpackage\fR to the Package Tracking System at [EMAIL PROTECTED], and
-schedules an unsubscription request for a future date using
-\fBat\fR(1), by default in 30 days' time.  This can be changed either
-using the configuration files (see below) or command-line options.
+sends a cancel subscription request 30 days later, using
+\fBat\fR(1).
 .PP
 This utility is useful if a developer has made an NMU and wants to
-track the package thereafter for a limited period of time.
+track the package for a limited period of time.
 .SH OPTIONS
 .TP
 \fB\-\-until \fItime\fR, \fB\-u\fR \fItime\fR
-When \fBat\fR(1) should send the unsubscription request, using
+When \fBat\fR(1) should cancel the subscription, using
 \fBat\fR's syntax.  Default is 'now + 30 days'.  This option will
-probably require quoting!  \fB\-\-until forever\fR is equivalent to
-using the \fB\-\-forever\fR option.
+probably require quoting!  \fB\-\-until forever\fR acts the same as
+the \fB\-\-forever\fR option.
 .TP
 .B \-\-forever
-Don't send an automatic unsubscribe request.
+Don't cancel the subscription.
 .TP
 .BR \-\-help ", " \-h
 Display a help message and exit successfully.

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