Hi, Am 28. August 2021 09:37:26 MESZ schrieb Philip Hands <p...@hands.com>: >Holger Wansing <hwans...@mailbox.org> writes: >> Moreover, when thinking about this implementation, I'm quite uncomfortable >> with >> adding such paragraph into the "Using individual components" section, since >> this >> "change-init-system part" is no "installer component" like the others in >> this >> section (say: there is no 'change-init-system udeb'). >> >> Therefore, I would be in favor of adding a separate section for such things >> as >> section 6.5 after the "Loading missing firmware" section, like this: [...] >> + <sect1 id="misc-adaptions"> >> + <title>Miscellaneous adaptions</title> > >"adaptions" strikes me as slightly odd english -- I think >"customisations" or "adjustments" would be a better choice. > >On the other hand the preceding sections are about how we accommodate >people's preferences via debconf settings, so this is actually quite a >departure from that, because it's something that people want to change >that has to be done outside debconf, so the section heading should >probably refer to that difference somehow. > >How about "Variations requiring manual intervention"?
Hmm, seems a bit cumbersome to me (but not a native English speaker), and would people be able to imagine, what such chapter is about, judged from that headline? @Justin? Holger -- Sent from /e/ OS on Fairphone3
