> Le 14 octobre 2017 à 00:02, "ChangZhuo Chen (陳昌倬)" <czc...@debconf.org> a > écrit : > > > On Mon, Oct 09, 2017 at 11:25:32AM -0500, Gunnar Wolf wrote: > > ChangZhuo Chen (陳昌倬) dijo [Mon, Oct 09, 2017 at 09:44:29PM +0800]: > > > Hi, > > > > > > The latest DC18 brochure & flyer are in [0]. Please help to review them > > > so that we can start to look for sponsor. > > > > Questions as a non-native English speaker: > > > > - The caption on page 4's picture, shouldn't it be "...updating ON > > Debian status", "giving an update on Debian's status", or something > > like it? It's not as if Chris updated Debian's status by delivering > > a talk. > > I guess so. But since I am not native English either, please correct me > if we are wrong.
Yes. As a native English speaker, I can confirm that Gunnar's grammatical suggestion is correct. In a diff I've submitted, I've suggested a different way to fix the problem. > > > - I would add a line in the same page: I think video _archiving_ is > > also a valuable item for our sponsors. So, the subtitle would be > > "Live World-wide Video Streaming and Archiving", adding to the first > > paragraph: "Videos are also archived for their long-term use, > > contributing to a media library that includes every DebConf edition > > since 2005". > > I think the new sentence "Videos are also archived for ..." is roughly > the same as the first sentence in second paragraph. Do we want to > emphasize on "since 2005"? I think what gwolf is trying to emphasize is that the archive is already quite extensive; it goes all the way back to 2005. Please see the patch I've submitted. > > > - I'm not sure I understand what the semantics of page 5 are supposed > > to mean. Why are all quotes partially indented? > > I think only indented parts are quotes. The unindented part is not part > of quote. That was my understanding of it, too, ChangZhuo. The indents look OK. -- znoteer znot...@mailbox.org _______________________________________________ Debconf-team mailing list Debconf-team@lists.debconf.org http://lists.debconf.org/mailman/listinfo/debconf-team
