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docs/en-US/database-checklists.xml <https://reviews.apache.org/r/7645/#comment28043> This checklist is very old. I think the material might have been originally from Chiradeep, so try asking there. docs/en-US/troubleshooting-ssvm.xml <https://reviews.apache.org/r/7645/#comment28048> Just need to replace the period with a colon. "Sample common problems:" Or, you could make this a bit more writer-ly with "A few common problems include:" or even a simple "For example:" docs/en-US/troubleshooting-ssvm.xml <https://reviews.apache.org/r/7645/#comment28045> Correct. The second sentence should be more like "It needs to contact ..." Also, we should probably remove the reference to download.cloud.com. So maybe "It needs to use HTTP to get the templates from a server." - Jessica Tomechak On Oct. 18, 2012, 7:09 a.m., Radhika PC wrote: > > ----------------------------------------------------------- > This is an automatically generated e-mail. To reply, visit: > https://reviews.apache.org/r/7645/ > ----------------------------------------------------------- > > (Updated Oct. 18, 2012, 7:09 a.m.) > > > Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, > and Wido den Hollander. > > > Description > ------- > > Troubleshooting section in the Install Guide > > > Diffs > ----- > > docs/en-US/binary-log-error.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/cannot-add-hosts.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/check-log-files.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/console-proxy-vm-issues.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/database-checklists.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/mgmt-server-checklists.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/preparation-checklists.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/run-diagnostic-script.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/storage-checklists.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/troubleshoot-awsapi.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/troubleshoot-install.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/troubleshoot-ms-log.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/troubleshooting-ssvm.xml PRE-CREATION > docs/en-US/vlan-issues.xml PRE-CREATION > > Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/7645/diff/ > > > Testing > ------- > > patch cleanly applies > > > Thanks, > > Radhika PC > >
