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Need an <xi:include> statement to actually include the new 
about-password-encryption.xml somewhere in the Installation Guide. Maybe inside 
management-server-install-flow.xml, right after 
management-server-install-db.xml.


docs/en-US/about-password-encryption.xml
<https://reviews.apache.org/r/7804/#comment28039>

    Change all instances of CloudPlatform into &PRODUCT;



docs/en-US/management-server-install-db-local.xml
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    Left out the period at the end of the sentence, like -encryption"/>.</para>



docs/en-US/management-server-install-db-local.xml
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    Left out the period at the end of the sentence, like -encryption"/>.</para>


- Jessica Tomechak


On Oct. 31, 2012, 11:20 a.m., Radhika PC wrote:
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> (Updated Oct. 31, 2012, 11:20 a.m.)
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> Review request for cloudstack, David Nalley, Chip Childers, Jessica Tomechak, 
> and Wido den Hollander.
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> Description
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> New Doc file on About password and key encryption. In the Install guide, 
> fixed references to the same section.
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> This addresses bug cloudstack-403.
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> Diffs
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>   docs/en-US/about-password-encryption.xml PRE-CREATION 
>   docs/en-US/management-server-install-db-external.xml a749dc7 
>   docs/en-US/management-server-install-db-local.xml 9880c54 
>   docs/en-US/prepare-system-vm-template.xml 5ed78f7 
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> Diff: https://reviews.apache.org/r/7804/diff/
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> Testing
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> tested whether patch applies. worked fine
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> Thanks,
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> Radhika PC
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