> Mostly I'd like feedback on the tutorial: > http://github.com/technomancy/leiningen/blob/master/TUTORIAL.md
This sentence: "Libraries for the JVM are packaged up as .jar files, which are basically just .zip files with a little extra JVM-specific metadata that contain either .class files (bytecode) or .clj source files." needs reorganization. It's unclear whether the .class/.clj files are contained in the .jar or in the metadata. Additionally, it's unclear in the next sentence: "These jar files are available through repositories that serve them up over HTTP alongside their metadata." whether that's the same metadata or something else. --------------------- In this sentence: "In general relying on snapshot dependencies is discouraged, but sometimes its necessary if you need bug fixes etc. that have not made their way into a release yet." s/its/it's/ or better yet (IMO) use "but is sometimes necessary". -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Google Groups "Clojure" group. To post to this group, send email to clojure@googlegroups.com Note that posts from new members are moderated - please be patient with your first post. To unsubscribe from this group, send email to clojure+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/clojure?hl=en
