Hello, Jérôme, Bumping this up in your inbox -- apologies if I missed a reply, but I believe I have not seen your response.
Best, Carlos. On Sat, Sep 6, 2025 at 4:31 PM Alice Russo <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Jérôme, > > As document shepherd, please review the edited document and let us know if > you approve it or any updates are needed. Re: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html > (which shows all changes from the approved I-D), please review the > following changes, at minimum. Here, "S" stands for "Section". > > - S1.1 2nd paragraph, added text starting with 'When we say'. > - S1.1 last paragraph, rephrased. > - S3 last paragraph, rephrased. > - S5.4, added text starting with 'Memory as well as'. > - S6.1 2nd paragraph, rephrased. > > Thank you. > > Alice Russo > RFC Production Center > > I wrote: > > Carlos, > > > > Thank you for your reply. The revised files are here (please refresh): > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.txt > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.pdf > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.xml > > > > This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-diff.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > > > This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48diff.html > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48rfcdiff.html (side > by side) > > > > This diff file shows only the changes since the last posted version: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-lastrfcdiff.html > > > > In addition to the changes you requested: > > - removed extraneous 'to'. > > - lowercased 'fluorinated'. > > - replaced angled quotes with straight quotes per RFC style. > > > > Re: > >> After fixing these three nits, please note and write down my Approval > of the document at https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9845 > > > > Your approval has been recorded. We await word from your coauthors > > and the Document Shepherd before continuing the publication process. > > > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/ar >
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