Jérôme, As document shepherd, please review the edited document and let us know if you approve it or any updates are needed. Re: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html (which shows all changes from the approved I-D), please review the following changes, at minimum. Here, "S" stands for "Section".
- S1.1 2nd paragraph, added text starting with 'When we say'. - S1.1 last paragraph, rephrased. - S3 last paragraph, rephrased. - S5.4, added text starting with 'Memory as well as'. - S6.1 2nd paragraph, rephrased. Thank you. Alice Russo RFC Production Center I wrote: > Carlos, > > Thank you for your reply. The revised files are here (please refresh): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845.xml > > This diff file shows all changes from the approved I-D: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > This diff file shows only the changes since the last posted version: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9845-lastrfcdiff.html > > In addition to the changes you requested: > - removed extraneous 'to'. > - lowercased 'fluorinated'. > - replaced angled quotes with straight quotes per RFC style. > > Re: >> After fixing these three nits, please note and write down my Approval of the >> document at https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9845 > > Your approval has been recorded. We await word from your coauthors > and the Document Shepherd before continuing the publication process. > > Thank you. > RFC Editor/ar -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
