Hi Mach, Thank you for your review. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9779>. As we have received all of the needed approvals, we will continue with the publication process at this time.
Thank you, RFC Editor/sg > On May 5, 2025, at 6:18 PM, Mach Chen <mach.c...@huawei.com> wrote: > > Hi Sandy, > > I approve the publication. > > Best regards, > Mach > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Sent: Monday, May 5, 2025 11:12 PM >> To: James Guichard <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com> >> Cc: Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>; Stefano Salsano >> <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>; Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) >> <rgan...@cisco.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Mach Chen >> <mach.c...@huawei.com>; danvoyerw...@gmail.com; Dan Voyer (davoyer) >> <davo...@cisco.com>; mpls-...@ietf.org; mpls-cha...@ietf.org; >> tony...@tony.li; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> >> for your review >> >> Hi Clarence and Jim, >> >> Thank you for your replies. We have noted you approvals on the AUTH48 >> page <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9779>. As noted there, we will >> wait to hear from Mach(Guoyi) Chen before continuing with publication. >> >> Thank you, >> RFC Editor/sg >> >> >> >> >> >> >>> On May 5, 2025, at 3:28 AM, James Guichard >> <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Sandy, >>> >>> Approved. >>> >>> Jim >>> >>> From: Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com> >>> Date: Monday, May 5, 2025 at 5:01 AM >>> To: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>, Stefano Salsano >> <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it> >>> Cc: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>, RFC Editor >> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, >> mach.c...@huawei.com<mach.c...@huawei.com>, >> danvoyerw...@gmail.com <danvoyerw...@gmail.com>, Dan Voyer (davoyer) >> <davo...@cisco.com>, mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls-...@ietf.org>, >> mpls-cha...@ietf.org <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li >> <tony...@tony.li>, >> James Guichard <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>> Subject: RE: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 >> <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> for your review >>> >>> Hello, >>> >>> I approve the publication. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Clarence >>> >>>> -----Original Message----- >>>> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>> Sent: Friday, May 2, 2025 7:45 PM >>>> To: Stefano Salsano <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it> >>>> Cc: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>; RFC Editor >> <rfc-editor@rfc- >>>> editor.org>; Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>; >>>> mach.c...@huawei.com; danvoyerw...@gmail.com; Dan Voyer >> (davoyer) >>>> <davo...@cisco.com>; mpls-...@ietf.org; mpls-cha...@ietf.org; >>>> tony...@tony.li; james.n.guich...@futurewei.com; auth48archive@rfc- >>>> editor.org >>>> Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> >> for >>>> your review >>>> >>>> Hi Rakesh and Stefano, Jim* (as AD), >>>> >>>> *Jim, please review the change in Section 4.2.1 and let us know if you >>>> approve. The changes are most easily viewed in one these diff files: >>>> >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9779-lastdiff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cjame >> s.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7 >> C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C63882032485025153 >> 1%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAu >> MDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C% >> 7C%7C&sdata=FhUfcmAxC%2Bb%2Bq1j58YUVjbuMZsbYBOPT%2FctOEe1fMB >> A%3D&reserved=0 >>>> >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9779-lastrfcdiff.html&data=05%7C02%7Cja >> mes.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f >> %7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850290 >> 382%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLj >> AuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7 >> C%7C%7C&sdata=OQ8rBIC5Hodti%2FFHcDBcoXEPXaRNRdxLKkSi7b8iKkI%3D >> &reserved=0 (side by side) >>>> >>>> >>>> Rakesh and Stefano, thank you for your help to clarify the text! We have >>>> updated the document as described below. 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setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the >>>>>> query message. >>>>>> New text: >>>>>> In one-way measurement mode, as defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], >> the >>>> querier can properly set the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the query >>>> message. This allows the response message, containing an IP/UDP header >> for >>>> that query message, to be received out-of-band by the querier. >>>>> >>>>> Dear Sandy and Rakesh, >>>>> >>>>> I agree with the text proposed by Rakesh, I only propose to improve and >>>> clarify the second sentence. We can change it from passive to active >> mode and >>>> we can further clarify that the IP/UDP header encapsulates the message >> rather >>>> than being contained into the message: >>>>> >>>>> In one-way measurement mode, as defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC 6374], >>>>> the querier can set the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the query >>>>> message. This enables the querier to receive the out-of-band response >>>>> message encapsulated in an IP/UDP header sent to the IP address and >>>>> UDP port specified in the URO TLV. >>>>> >>>>> ciao >>>>> Stefano >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> Does that work? >>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>> Rakesh >>>>>> *From: *Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>>> *Date: *Monday, April 28, 2025 at 1:43 PM >>>>>> *To: *Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com> >>>>>> *Cc: *RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Clarence Filsfils >>>>>> (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, daniel.vo...@bell.ca >>>>>> <daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it >>>>>> <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, mach.c...@huawei.com >>>>>> <mach.c...@huawei.com>, danvoyerw...@gmail.com >>>>>> <danvoyerw...@gmail.com>, Dan Voyer (davoyer) >> <davo...@cisco.com>, >>>>>> mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls- a...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org >>>>>> <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li <tony...@tony.li>, >>>>>> james.n.guich...@futurewei.com <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, >>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>> *Subject: *Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 >> <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> >>>>>> for your review Greetings, Rakesh, thank you for your reply. We have >>>>>> updated the document as noted below. Looking at the change in the >> diff, >>>> we would appreciate you or one of your coauthors confirming that this >> update >>>> is as intended. 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2025, at 3:43 PM, Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) >>>> <rgan...@cisco.com> wrote: >>>>>>> Hello Sandy, >>>>>>> Thanks for the great updates. They all look good to me. >>>>>>> Please see inline with one comment <RG>.. >>>>>>> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>> Date: Monday, April 21, 2025 at 5:19 PM >>>>>>> To: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com> >>>>>>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Clarence Filsfils >>>>>>> (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, >>>>>>> daniel.vo...@bell.ca<daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, >>>>>>> stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, >>>>>>> mach.c...@huawei.com <mach.c...@huawei.com>, >>>>>>> danvoyerw...@gmail.com<danvoyerw...@gmail.com>, Dan Voyer >>>> (davoyer) >>>>>>> <davo...@cisco.com>, mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls- >>>>>> a...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, >>>>>> tony...@tony.li <tony...@tony.li>, >>>>>> james.n.guich...@futurewei.com<james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, >>>>>> auth48archive@rfc- editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> >>>>>>> for your review Hi Rakesh, Thank you for your review and reply. We >>>>>>> have updated the document based on your replies below. For item 9, >> we >>>> are having trouble parsing the text: >>>>>>>> <RG> How about following? >>>>>>>>> In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of >>>>>>>>> [RFC6374], the >>>>>>>> querier can receive response messages with an IP/UDP >>>>>>>> header “out-of-band” by properly setting the UDP Return >> Object (URO) >>>> TLV in the >>>>>>>> query message. We wonder if the following correctly conveys >> the >>>> intended meaning? In one-way measurement mode defined in >> Section 2.4 of >>>> [RFC6374], the >>>>>>> querier can receive a response to an Out-of-band Response >> Requested >>>> message by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV >>>>>>> in the IP/UDP header. >>>>>>> <RG> Looks good. >>>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>>> Rakesh >>>>>>> Please review the updated files here: >>>>>>> >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9779.xml&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guic >> hard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8f >> f2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850663537%7CU >> nknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAw >> MCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C >> &sdata=InzCZ7j0c%2BVoaKzLiEau4WhZsO2pEkiqFVhUDSFcPMI%3D&reserve >> d=0 >>>>>>> >> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furl >> defense.com%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7 >> 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16, 2025, at 8:01 PM, Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) >>>> <rgandhi=40cisco....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: >>>>>>>>> Hello Editor, >>>>>>>>> Thank you for the great updates to the document. >>>>>>>>> Note: I am adding new email IDs for Dan Voyer. Dan, please >> reply >>>> with your preference on how you would like to update your information in >> the >>>> RFC-to-be. >>>>>>>>> Please see replies inline with <RG>… > > From: >>>>>>>> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>>> Date: Wednesday, April 16, 2025 at 7:00 PM >>>>>>>> To: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>, Clarence Filsfils >>>>>>>> (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, >>>>>>>> daniel.vo...@bell.ca<daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, >>>>>>>> stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, >>>>>>>> mach.c...@huawei.com <mach.c...@huawei.com> >>>>>>>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, >>>>>>>> mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls-...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org >>>>>>>> <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li<tony...@tony.li>, >>>>>>>> james.n.guich...@futurewei.com >> <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, >>>>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 >>>>>>>> <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> for your review >>>>>>>>> Authors, >>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>>> necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] May we update the document title as shown below >> for > >>>> clarity? > > Original: >>>>>>>> Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks with >> MPLS >>>> Data >>>>>>>> Plane >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks over >> the >>>>>>>> MPLS Data Plane >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>> <RG> We could use following example as a guidance? >>>>>>>>> RFC 8660 uses term: Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane >>>>>>>>> >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdata >> tracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Frfc8660&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guic >> hard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8f >> f2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850840907%7CU >> nknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAw >> MCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C >> &sdata=4VkG1bH5o0M0OnIUKZXVYAuaxpdQTjEIHdcbezucovs%3D&reserved >> =0 >>>>>>>>> >> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furl >> defense.com%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7 >> Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d559 >> 1fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850849510%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d >> 8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOI >> joiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ETTmMltt5zVYVqY >> R1tIszZdeBNNLUb7O4xah%2FNmfPug%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>> >> v3/__https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2 >> Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Frfc8660__%3B!!O5Bi4QcV!EG-&data >> =05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe >> 5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C6 >> 38820324850857757%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiO >> nRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyf >> Q%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=LTF6HQWVjQzRJfKkYb0h62oIj8eCaq4zO >> a6dIyaBem8%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>> oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- >>>> YFDnSJQ7cQ3V >>>>>> R- aXfERMKktbgAA$> >>>>>>>>> <RG> Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks >> with >>>>>>>>> the MPLS Data Plane >>>>>>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that >>>>>>>>>> appear in >>>>>>>> the title) for use on >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewe >> i.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753 >> a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850866306%7CUnknown%7CTWFpb >> GZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4z >> MiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=I%2B8NZy >> GiX5dvYrxz%2BiGgyGnQZtYUzCGeutLzd0Hv6SQ%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>>>> >> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furl >> defense.com%2Fv3%2F__https%3A%2F%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guic >> hard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8f >> f2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850874628%7CU >> nknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAw >> MCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C >> &sdata=dbaQRprpmxerVh3AzUsI4kyXozcVLu%2Bfy0GgcMlu3Hg%3D&reserve >> d=0 >>>>>> >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww. >> rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch__%3B!!O5Bi4QcV!EG-&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.g >> uichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fe >> e8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850883039%7 >> CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMD >> AwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C >> %7C&sdata=zJpmMtFrO9GgX2aQMmNhmHVzPs%2F2OcwDwMyhebQgB30% >> 3D&reserved=0 >>>>>> oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- >>>> YFDnSJQ7cQ3V >>>>>> R- aXfERMN9Y_re0$>. --> >>>>>>>>>> <RG> Delay Measurement, Loss Measurement, Link >> Measurement, >>>>>>>>>> SR-MPLS Policy Measurement >>>>>>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the text below for readability >> and to >>>>> clarify the relationship between SR-MPLS and its expansion. Please >> review > >>>> and let us know any objections. >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> This document specifies the application of the MPLS loss and >> delay >>>>>>>> measurement techniques, originally defined in RFC 6374, RFC >> 7876, >>>> and >>>>>>>> RFC 9341 within Segment Routing (SR) networks that utilize the >> MPLS >>>>>>>> data plane (SR-MPLS). > > Current: >>>>>>>> This document specifies the application of the MPLS loss and >> delay >>>>>>>> measurement techniques (originally defined in RFCs 6374, 7876, >> and >>>> 9341) >>>>>>>> within Segment Routing (SR) networks that utilize the MPLS >> data >>>> plane, > also referred to as Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS). >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>> <RG> Ok. >>>>>>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the text below to demonstrate >>>>>>>>>> a 1:1 >>>>>>>> relationship between abbreviation and expansion. Please review. >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>>> Segment Routing (SR), as specified in [RFC8402], leverages >>>>>>>>> the source >>>>>>>> routing paradigm and applies to both the Multiprotocol Label >>>>>>>> Switching (SR-MPLS) and IPv6 (SRv6) data planes. > > Current: >>>>>>>>> Segment Routing (SR), as specified in [RFC8402], leverages >>>>>>>>> the source >>>>>>>> routing paradigm and applies to both the Multiprotocol Label >>>>>>>> Switching (MPLS) and Internet Protocol version 6 (IPv6) data >> planes. >>>>>>>> These are referred to as Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS) >> and >>>>>>>> Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6), respectively. >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok. >>>>>>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, please consider whether the following > >>>> suggested update conveys the intended meaning. > > Original: >>>>>>>> This document defines Return Path and Block Number TLV >> extensions >>>> for >>>>>>>> [RFC6374], in Section 6, for delay and loss measurement in >> SR-MPLS >>>>>>>> networks. >>>>>>>>> Current: >>>>>>>> This document extends [RFC6374] by defining Return Path and >> Block > >>>> Number TLVs (see Section 6) for delay and loss measurement in > >> SR-MPLS >>>> networks. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok. >>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Does "also apply" mean "can also be used"? > > >> Original: >>>>>>>> These TLV extensions also apply to MPLS Label Switched >>>>>>>> Paths (LSPs) [RFC3031]. >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> These TLVs can also be used in MPLS Label Switched >>>>>>>> Paths (LSPs) [RFC3031]. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Seemingly, Success (0x1) is a Control Code. If this >> is > >>>> correct, may we udpate the text as follows? > > Original: >>>>>>>> The responder that supports this TLV MUST return >>>>>>>> Success in "Control Code" [RFC6374] if it is the intended >> destination >>>>>>>> for the query. >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> The responder that supports this TLV MUST return >>>>>>>> Control Code 0x1 (Success) [RFC6374] if it is the intended >> destination >>>>>>>> for the query. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] Could the text below be adjusted for clarity? >>>> Specifically, > what is being sent as "the destination address"? >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> When the querier sets an IP address and a UDP port in the URO >> TLV, >>>> the >>>>>>>> response message MUST be sent to that IP address as the >> destination >>>> address >>>>>>>> and UDP port as the destination port. >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> When the querier sets an IP address and a UDP port in the URO >> TLV, >>>> the >>>>>>>> response message MUST be sent to that IP address, with that IP >>>> address as >>>>>>>> the destination address and the UDP port as the destination >> port. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] May we update "out-of-band response >> messages" to >>>>> "Out-of-Band Response Requested messages..."? It is unclear whether >> the > >>>> text refers to the Response Requested messages or res ponses to >> Out-of-Band >>>>> Response Requested messages. > > Original: >>>>>>>> In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of >> [RFC6374], >>>> the >>>>>>>> querier can receive "out-of-band" response messages with an >> IP/UDP >>>>>>>> header by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in >> the >>>>>>>> query message. > --> >>>>>>>> <RG> How about following? >>>>>>>>> In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of >>>>>>>>> [RFC6374], the >>>>>>>> querier can receive response messages with an IP/UDP >>>>>>>> header “out-of-band” by properly setting the UDP Return >> Object (URO) >>>> TLV in the >>>>>>>> query message. > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the >> text >>>> below for clarity and > readability? >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> In two-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of >> [RFC6374], >>>> the >>>>>>>> response messages SHOULD be sent back in-band on the same >> link or >>>> the >>>>>>>> same end-to-end SR-MPLS path (same set of links and nodes) in >> the >>>>>>>> reverse direction to the querier, in order to perform accurate >> two- >>>>>>>> way delay measurement. >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> In the two-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of >>>> [RFC6374], > the response messages SHOULD be sent back one of two >> ways: >>>> either > they are sent back in-band on the same link, or they are sent >> back > >>>> on the same end-to-end SR-MPLS path (i.e., the same set of links and > >>>> nodes) in the reverse direction to the querier. This is done in order > >> to >>>> perform accurate two-way delay measurement. >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok. >>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] For readability, we suggest the update below. >>>> Please > review to ensure it does not impact the intended meaning. > > >>>> Original: >>>>>>>> The querier can request in the query message for the responder >>>>>>>> to send the response message back on a given return path using >> the >>>>>>>> MPLS Label Stack sub-TLV in the Return Path TLV defined in this >>>>>>>> document. >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> In the query message, the querier can request that the >> responder send >>>>> the response message back on a given return path using the MPLS >> Label > >>>> Stack Sub-TLV in the Return Path TLV defined in this document. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok. >>>>>>>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review these similar sentences and let us >>>> know if > we may update them for readability. > > More specifically, what >> does >>>> "which" refer to in the examples below? Does > it refer to the ACH or the >>>> different values in parentheses? >>>>>>>>> <RG> Value as in the suggested text. >>>>>>>>> In addition, we were unable to find "Combined DM+LM" in RFC >> 6374 >>>>>>>>> as seen in >>>>>>>> the third example. Should this be updated to "combined LM/DM >>>> message" as > used in RFC 6374? >>>>>>>>> <RG> Yes. >>>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS Delay Measurement (DM) query >> and >>>>>>>> response messages use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) >> (value >>>>>>>> 0x000C for delay measurement) [RFC6374], which identifies the >>>> message >>>>>>>> type and the message payload as defined in Section 3.2 >> [RFC6374] >>>>>>>> following the ACH. > > As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS LM >> query and >>>> response messages use the >>>>>>>> Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value 0x000A for direct loss >>>>>>>> measurement or value 0x000B for inferred loss measurement), >> which >>>>>>>> identifies the message type and the message payload defined in >>>>>>>> Section 3.1 [RFC6374] following the ACH. > > As defined in >>>> [RFC6374], Combined DM+LM query and response messages >>>>>>>> use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value 0x000D for >> direct loss >>>>>>>> and delay measurement or value 0x000E for inferred loss and >> delay >>>>>>>> measurement), which identifies the message type and the >> message >>>>>>>> payload defined in Section 3.3 [RFC6374] following the >> ACH. > > >>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS Delay Measurement (DM) query >> and >>>> response >>>>>>>> messages use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (with the >> value >>>> 0x000C > for delay measurement). This value identifies the message >> type >>>> and the >>>>>>>> message payload that follow the ACH, as defined in Section 3.2 >> of > >>>> [RFC6374]. >>>>>>>>> As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS LM query and response >> messages >>>>>>>>> use the ACH >>>>>>>> (with the value 0x000A for direct loss measurement or the value >>>> 0x000B > for inferred loss measurement). This value identifies the >> message >>>> type > and the message payload that follow the ACH, as defined in >> Section >>>> 3.1 > of [RFC6374]. >>>>>>>>> As defined in [RFC6374], combined DM+LM query and >> response >>>> messages use > the ACH (with the value 0x000D for direct loss and >> delay >>>> measurement or > the value 0x000E for inferred loss and delay >>>> measurement). This value >>>>>>>> identifies the message type and the message payload that >> follows the >>>>> ACH, as defined in Section 3.3 of [RFC6374]. >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok. Except DM+LM to be changed to LM/DM as suggested. >>>>>>>>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] In the instances below, we have adjusted "for >>>> accounting > received traffic". Please review to ensure these changes do >> not >>>> alter your > meaning. >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> The Path Segment Identifier (PSID) [RFC9545] MUST be carried >> in the >>>>>>>> received data packet for the traffic flow under measurement >> for > >>>> accounting received traffic on the egress node of the SR-MPLS Policy. >>>>>>>>> Different values of PSID can be used per Candidate-Path for >>>>>>>>> accounting >>>>>>>> received traffic to measure packet loss at the Candidate- Path >> level. >>>>>>>>> Current: >>>>>>>> The Path Segment Identifier (PSID) [RFC9545] MUST be carried >> in the >>>>>>>> received data packet for the traffic flow under measurement, in >> order >>>> to >>>>>>>> account for received traffic on the egress node of the SR-MPLS >> Policy. >>>>>>>>> Different values of the PSID can be used per Candidate-Path to >>>> account > for received traffic and to measure packet loss at the >> Candidate- >>>> Path > level. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] In the text below, does "while" mean "at the >> same >>>> time", > or does it represent a contrast (like "whereas" or "on the other >>>> hand")? >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> The LM query and response messages defined in [RFC6374] are >> used to >>>>>>>> measure packet loss for the block of data packets transmitted >> with >>>>>>>> the previous marking while data packets carry alternate >> marking. >>>>>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>>>> The LM query and response messages defined in [RFC6374] are >> used to >>>>> measure packet loss for the block of data packets transmitted with >> the > >>>> previous marking, whereas data packets carry alternate marking. >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] FYI - The quoted text below appears differently >> in >>>> RFC > 9341. We have updated to match RFC 9341. >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> "The assumption of the block number mechanism is that the >>>> measurement >>>>>>>> nodes are time synchronized" as specified in Section 4.3 of >> [RFC9341] >>>>>>>> is not necessary, as the block number on the responder can be >>>>>>>> synchronized based on the received LM query messages. >>>>>>>>> Current: >>>>>>>> Section 4.3 of [RFC9341] specifies: "The assumption of this BN >>>>>>>> mechanism is that the measurement nodes are time >> synchronized." >>>> However, > this is not necessary, as the block number on the >> responder can >>>> be > synchronized based on the received LM query messages. >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>> 16) <!-- [rfced] Is "LSE" singular or plural in the text below? >>>>>>>>> Original: >>>>>>>> The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSE that includes a >>>>>>>> 20-bit label value, 8-bit TTL value, 3-bit TC value, and 1-bit EOS >>>>>>>> (S) field. > > Perhaps (LSE is plural): >>>>>>>> The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSEs that each >> include a >>>>>>>> 20-bit label value, an 8-bit TTL value, a 3-bit TC value, and a >> 1-bit > >>>> EOS (S) field. >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>>> 17) <!-- [rfced] We have removed "TLV" from the >>>>>>>>>>> Descriptions to align with > the IANA registries >>>>>>>>>>> >> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww >> w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fg-ach-parameters&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n >> .guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0f >> ee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850891779% >> 7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuM >> DAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C >> %7C&sdata=su5MoCSB8LqOd42iuE5OrmuruzDBpSiku5S9zENrH7E%3D&reser >> ved=0 <https:// >>>>>> >> urldefense.com/v3/__https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url= >> https%3A%2F%2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fg-ach-&data=05%7C02% >> 7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3 >> 675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C63882032485 >> 0900621%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYi >> OiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7 >> C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=oMqE8gxAsrlSgxPGTeGlX2b8uzCIP8vjd%2FUi4pGU6S >> E%3D&reserved=0 >>>> parameters__;!!O5Bi4QcV!EG- >>>> oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- >>>> YFDnSJQ7cQ3VR- aXfERMke3dELU$>>. >>>>>>>> Please let us know any corrections. > > Original: >>>>>>>> | TBA1 | Return Path TLV | This document | | TBA2 | Block >>>>>>>> Number TLV | This document | >>>>>>>>> Current: >>>>>>>> | 5 | Return Path | RFC 9779 | >>>>>>>> | 6 | Block Number | RFC 9779 | >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Ok >>>>>>>>>>> 18) <!-- [rfced] Should the registry name be plural? Note >>>>>>>>>>> that we will ask > IANA to update their registry if this >>>>>>>>>>> change is accepted. > > Current: Return Path Sub-TLV Type >>>>>>>> Perhaps: Return Path Sub-TLV Types > --> <RG> Yes >>>>>>>>>> 19) <!-- [rfced] Much of this text duplicates what appears in the >>>> table. > Perhaps the text should just indicate that the code points are >>>> assigned as > defined in Table 2? > > Section 12: > All code points in >> the >>>> range 0 through 175 in this registry >>>>>>>> shall be allocated according to the "IETF Review" procedure as >>>>>>>> specified in [RFC8126]. Code points in the range 176 through >> 239 in >>>>>>>> this registry shall be allocated according to the "First Come, First >>>>>>>> Served" procedure as specified in [RFC8126]. Remaining code >> points >>>>>>>> are allocated according to Table 2: >>>>>>>>> Table 2: > | Value | Description | >> Reference | >>>>>>>> >> +===========+=========================+===============+ >>>>>>>> | 1 - 175 | IETF Review | This >> document | >>>>>>>> | 176 - 239 | First Come First Served | This document | >>>>>>>> | 240 - 251 | Experimental Use | This >> document | >>>>>>>> | 252 - 254 | Private Use | This >> document | >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Agree to change to: >>>>>>>>> The code points are allocated according to Table 2: >>>>>>>>>> 20) <!-- [rfced] Would it make sense to refer to the MPLS Review >>>> Team > (assuming that is correct), as we are unsure what MPLS-RT refers >> to >>>> and we > are unable to find information about it. > > Original: >>>>>>>> Thanks to Huaimo Chen, Yimin Shen, and Xufeng Liu for >> MPLS-RT >>>> expert >>>>>>>> review, ... >>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Perhaps >>>>>>>>> Thanks to Huaimo Chen, Yimin Shen, and Xufeng Liu for MPLS >>>>>>>>> expert >>>>>>>> review, ... >>>>>>>>>> 21) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE802.1AX] references the 2008 version of >>>>>>>>>> this IEEE > Standard. May we update this reference to use the >>>>>>>>>> current standard from > 2020 as seen in the following URL: >>>>>>>>>> >> <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fiee >> explore.ieee.org%2Fdocument%2F9105034&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guic >> hard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8f >> f2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850910799%7CU >> nknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAw >> MCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C >> &sdata=UMPWSFQ1L04gEYmcfHLAH5VgRiPXM4nY%2BhgwLqJSues%3D&rese >> rved=0<https://urldefen >>>>>>>>>> se.com/v3/ >>>>>> >> __https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fie >> eexplore.ieee.org%2Fdocument%2F9105034__%3B!!O5Bi4QcV!EG-&data=05 >> %7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a0 >> 8dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C6388 >> 20324850920334%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRy >> dWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3 >> D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=e%2B%2FbOn4MpSng5hqFz9p6WXJlqH9AN >> XH0SxDJQ6JNCqQ%3D&reserved=0 >>>> oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- >>>> YFDnSJQ7cQ3VR- aXfERMBPhYNs0$>>? >>>>>>>>> --> >>>>>>>> <RG> Yes >>>>>>>>>> 22) <!-- [rfced] We removed the quotes around Control Code >>>>>>>>>> throughout to > align with use in RFC 6374. 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