Hi Clarence and Jim, Thank you for your replies. We have noted you approvals on the AUTH48 page <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9779>. As noted there, we will wait to hear from Mach(Guoyi) Chen before continuing with publication.
Thank you, RFC Editor/sg > On May 5, 2025, at 3:28 AM, James Guichard <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com> > wrote: > > Hi Sandy, > > Approved. > > Jim > > From: Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com> > Date: Monday, May 5, 2025 at 5:01 AM > To: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>, Stefano Salsano > <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it> > Cc: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>, RFC Editor > <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, mach.c...@huawei.com<mach.c...@huawei.com>, > danvoyerw...@gmail.com <danvoyerw...@gmail.com>, Dan Voyer (davoyer) > <davo...@cisco.com>, mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls-...@ietf.org>, > mpls-cha...@ietf.org <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li > <tony...@tony.li>, James Guichard <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > Subject: RE: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> > for your review > > Hello, > > I approve the publication. > > Cheers, > Clarence > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > Sent: Friday, May 2, 2025 7:45 PM > > To: Stefano Salsano <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it> > > Cc: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc- > > editor.org>; Clarence Filsfils (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>; > > mach.c...@huawei.com; danvoyerw...@gmail.com; Dan Voyer (davoyer) > > <davo...@cisco.com>; mpls-...@ietf.org; mpls-cha...@ietf.org; > > tony...@tony.li; james.n.guich...@futurewei.com; auth48archive@rfc- > > editor.org > > Subject: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> for > > your review > > > > Hi Rakesh and Stefano, Jim* (as AD), > > > > *Jim, please review the change in Section 4.2.1 and let us know if you > > approve. 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We have > > updated the document as described below. 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updates are needed or if you > > approve the RFC for publication. > > > > Thank you, > > RFC Editor/sg > > > > > > > > > On Apr 29, 2025, at 12:58 PM, Stefano Salsano > > <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it> wrote: > > > > > > Il 28/04/2025 21:34, Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) ha scritto: > > >> Thanks, Sandy, for the updates. > > >> Regarding your question below, I think it may be easier to read if we > > >> split it > > into two sentences. > > >> Old text in the draft: > > >> In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the > > >> querier can receive "out-of-band" response messages with an IP/UDP > > >> header by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the > > >> query message. > > >> New text: > > >> In one-way measurement mode, as defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], the > > querier can properly set the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the query > > message. This allows the response message, containing an IP/UDP header for > > that query message, to be received out-of-band by the querier. > > > > > > Dear Sandy and Rakesh, > > > > > > I agree with the text proposed by Rakesh, I only propose to improve and > > clarify the second sentence. We can change it from passive to active mode > > and > > we can further clarify that the IP/UDP header encapsulates the message > > rather > > than being contained into the message: > > > > > > In one-way measurement mode, as defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC 6374], > > > the querier can set the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the query > > > message. This enables the querier to receive the out-of-band response > > > message encapsulated in an IP/UDP header sent to the IP address and > > > UDP port specified in the URO TLV. > > > > > > ciao > > > Stefano > > > > > > > > >> Does that work? > > >> Thanks, > > >> Rakesh > > >> *From: *Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > >> *Date: *Monday, April 28, 2025 at 1:43 PM > > >> *To: *Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com> > > >> *Cc: *RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Clarence Filsfils > > >> (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, daniel.vo...@bell.ca > > >> <daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it > > >> <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, mach.c...@huawei.com > > >> <mach.c...@huawei.com>, danvoyerw...@gmail.com > > >> <danvoyerw...@gmail.com>, Dan Voyer (davoyer) <davo...@cisco.com>, > > >> mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls- a...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org > > >> <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li <tony...@tony.li>, > > >> james.n.guich...@futurewei.com <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, > > >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > >> *Subject: *Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> > > >> for your review Greetings, Rakesh, thank you for your reply. We have > > >> updated the document as noted below. Looking at the change in the diff, > > we would appreciate you or one of your coauthors confirming that this update > > is as intended. Specifically, please confirm whether: > > >> … response messages with an IP/UDP header “out-of-band” … is the > > >> same as or was intended to be > > >> … a response to an Out-of-band Response Requested message … The > > >> current files are available her: > > >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9779.xml&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850416739%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=avdBzOBsrGFuHlkRMOoPZN7YYp4T4kyY2vrz0crSTRU%3D&reserved=0 > > >> 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They all look good to me. > > >>> Please see inline with one comment <RG>.. > > >>> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > >>> Date: Monday, April 21, 2025 at 5:19 PM > > >>> To: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com> > > >>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Clarence Filsfils > > >>> (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, > > >>> daniel.vo...@bell.ca<daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, > > >>> stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, > > >>> mach.c...@huawei.com <mach.c...@huawei.com>, > > >>> danvoyerw...@gmail.com<danvoyerw...@gmail.com>, Dan Voyer > > (davoyer) > > >>> <davo...@cisco.com>, mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls- > > >> a...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, > > >> tony...@tony.li <tony...@tony.li>, > > >> james.n.guich...@futurewei.com<james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, > > >> auth48archive@rfc- editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> > > >>> for your review Hi Rakesh, Thank you for your review and reply. We > > >>> have updated the document based on your replies below. For item 9, we > > are having trouble parsing the text: > > >>> > <RG> How about following? > > >>> > > In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of > > >>> > > [RFC6374], the > > >>> > querier can receive response messages with an IP/UDP > > >>> > header “out-of-band” by properly setting the UDP Return Object > > >>> > (URO) > > TLV in the > > >>> > query message. We wonder if the following correctly conveys the > > intended meaning? In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of > > [RFC6374], the > > >>> querier can receive a response to an Out-of-band Response Requested > > message by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV > > >>> in the IP/UDP header. > > >>> <RG> Looks good. > > >>> Thanks, > > >>> Rakesh > > >>> Please review the updated files here: > > >>> > > >>> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fauthors%2Frfc9779.xml&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850663537%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=InzCZ7j0c%2BVoaKzLiEau4WhZsO2pEkiqFVhUDSFcPMI%3D&reserved=0 > > >>> 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Note: I am adding new email IDs for Dan Voyer. Dan, please reply > > with your preference on how you would like to update your information in the > > RFC-to-be. > > >>> > > Please see replies inline with <RG>… > > From: > > >>> > rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> > > >>> > Date: Wednesday, April 16, 2025 at 7:00 PM > > >>> > To: Rakesh Gandhi (rgandhi) <rgan...@cisco.com>, Clarence Filsfils > > >>> > (cfilsfil) <cfils...@cisco.com>, > > >>> > daniel.vo...@bell.ca<daniel.vo...@bell.ca>, > > >>> > stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it <stefano.sals...@uniroma2.it>, > > >>> > mach.c...@huawei.com <mach.c...@huawei.com> > > >>> > Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, > > >>> > mpls-...@ietf.org <mpls-...@ietf.org>, mpls-cha...@ietf.org > > >>> > <mpls-cha...@ietf.org>, tony...@tony.li<tony...@tony.li>, > > >>> > james.n.guich...@futurewei.com <james.n.guich...@futurewei.com>, > > >>> > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> > > >>> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9779 > > >>> > <draft-ietf-mpls-rfc6374-sr-17> for your review > > >>> > > Authors, > > >>> > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > > necessary) > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > >>> > > 1) <!-- [rfced] May we update the document title as shown below for > > >>> > > > > > clarity? > > Original: > > >>> > Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks with MPLS > > Data > > >>> > Plane > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks over the > > >>> > MPLS Data Plane > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > > <RG> We could use following example as a guidance? > > >>> > > RFC 8660 uses term: Segment Routing with the MPLS Data Plane > > >>> > > https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Frfc8660&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850840907%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=4VkG1bH5o0M0OnIUKZXVYAuaxpdQTjEIHdcbezucovs%3D&reserved=0 > > >>> > > <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furldefense.com%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850849510%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=ETTmMltt5zVYVqYR1tIszZdeBNNLUb7O4xah%2FNmfPug%3D&reserved=0 > > >> v3/__https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fhtml%2Frfc8660__%3B!!O5Bi4QcV!EG-&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850857757%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=LTF6HQWVjQzRJfKkYb0h62oIj8eCaq4zOa6dIyaBem8%3D&reserved=0 > > >> oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- > > YFDnSJQ7cQ3V > > >> R- aXfERMKktbgAA$> > > >>> > > <RG> Performance Measurement for Segment Routing Networks with > > >>> > > the MPLS Data Plane > > >>> > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that > > >>> > > > appear in > > >>> > the title) for use on > > >>> > https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850866306%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=I%2B8NZyGiX5dvYrxz%2BiGgyGnQZtYUzCGeutLzd0Hv6SQ%3D&reserved=0 > > >>> > <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Furldefense.com%2Fv3%2F__https%3A%2F%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850874628%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=dbaQRprpmxerVh3AzUsI4kyXozcVLu%2Bfy0GgcMlu3Hg%3D&reserved=0 > > >> https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Fsearch__%3B!!O5Bi4QcV!EG-&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850883039%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=zJpmMtFrO9GgX2aQMmNhmHVzPs%2F2OcwDwMyhebQgB30%3D&reserved=0 > > >> oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- > > YFDnSJQ7cQ3V > > >> R- aXfERMN9Y_re0$>. --> > > >>> > > > <RG> Delay Measurement, Loss Measurement, Link Measurement, > > >>> > > > SR-MPLS Policy Measurement > > >>> > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the text below for readability > > >>> > > > and to > > > clarify the relationship between SR-MPLS and its expansion. Please review > > > > > > and let us know any objections. > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > This document specifies the application of the MPLS loss and delay > > >>> > measurement techniques, originally defined in RFC 6374, RFC 7876, > > and > > >>> > RFC 9341 within Segment Routing (SR) networks that utilize the MPLS > > >>> > data plane (SR-MPLS). > > Current: > > >>> > This document specifies the application of the MPLS loss and delay > > >>> > measurement techniques (originally defined in RFCs 6374, 7876, and > > 9341) > > >>> > within Segment Routing (SR) networks that utilize the MPLS data > > plane, > also referred to as Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS). > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > > <RG> Ok. > > >>> > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] We have updated the text below to demonstrate > > >>> > > > a 1:1 > > >>> > relationship between abbreviation and expansion. Please review. > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > > Segment Routing (SR), as specified in [RFC8402], leverages > > >>> > > the source > > >>> > routing paradigm and applies to both the Multiprotocol Label > > >>> > Switching (SR-MPLS) and IPv6 (SRv6) data planes. > > Current: > > >>> > > Segment Routing (SR), as specified in [RFC8402], leverages > > >>> > > the source > > >>> > routing paradigm and applies to both the Multiprotocol Label > > >>> > Switching (MPLS) and Internet Protocol version 6 (IPv6) data > > >>> > planes. > > >>> > These are referred to as Segment Routing over MPLS (SR-MPLS) and > > >>> > Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6), respectively. > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok. > > >>> > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, please consider whether the > > >>> > > > following > > > suggested update conveys the intended meaning. > > Original: > > >>> > This document defines Return Path and Block Number TLV extensions > > for > > >>> > [RFC6374], in Section 6, for delay and loss measurement in SR-MPLS > > >>> > networks. > > >>> > > Current: > > >>> > This document extends [RFC6374] by defining Return Path and Block > > > Number TLVs (see Section 6) for delay and loss measurement in > SR-MPLS > > networks. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok. > > >>> > > 6) <!-- [rfced] Does "also apply" mean "can also be used"? > > > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > These TLV extensions also apply to MPLS Label Switched > > >>> > Paths (LSPs) [RFC3031]. > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > These TLVs can also be used in MPLS Label Switched > > >>> > Paths (LSPs) [RFC3031]. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > 7) <!-- [rfced] Seemingly, Success (0x1) is a Control Code. If > > >>> > > this is > > > correct, may we udpate the text as follows? > > Original: > > >>> > The responder that supports this TLV MUST return > > >>> > Success in "Control Code" [RFC6374] if it is the intended > > >>> > destination > > >>> > for the query. > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > The responder that supports this TLV MUST return > > >>> > Control Code 0x1 (Success) [RFC6374] if it is the intended > > >>> > destination > > >>> > for the query. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] Could the text below be adjusted for clarity? > > Specifically, > what is being sent as "the destination address"? > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > When the querier sets an IP address and a UDP port in the URO TLV, > > the > > >>> > response message MUST be sent to that IP address as the destination > > address > > >>> > and UDP port as the destination port. > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > When the querier sets an IP address and a UDP port in the URO TLV, > > the > > >>> > response message MUST be sent to that IP address, with that IP > > address as > > >>> > the destination address and the UDP port as the destination port. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] May we update "out-of-band response messages" to > > > "Out-of-Band Response Requested messages..."? It is unclear whether the > > > text refers to the Response Requested messages or res ponses to Out-of-Band > > > Response Requested messages. > > Original: > > >>> > In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], > > the > > >>> > querier can receive "out-of-band" response messages with an IP/UDP > > >>> > header by properly setting the UDP Return Object (URO) TLV in the > > >>> > query message. > --> > > >>> > <RG> How about following? > > >>> > > In one-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of > > >>> > > [RFC6374], the > > >>> > querier can receive response messages with an IP/UDP > > >>> > header “out-of-band” by properly setting the UDP Return Object > > >>> > (URO) > > TLV in the > > >>> > query message. > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the text > > below for clarity and > readability? > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > In two-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of [RFC6374], > > the > > >>> > response messages SHOULD be sent back in-band on the same link or > > the > > >>> > same end-to-end SR-MPLS path (same set of links and nodes) in the > > >>> > reverse direction to the querier, in order to perform accurate two- > > >>> > way delay measurement. > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > In the two-way measurement mode defined in Section 2.4 of > > [RFC6374], > the response messages SHOULD be sent back one of two ways: > > either > they are sent back in-band on the same link, or they are sent > > back > > > on the same end-to-end SR-MPLS path (i.e., the same set of links and > > > nodes) in the reverse direction to the querier. This is done in order > > > to > > perform accurate two-way delay measurement. > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok. > > >>> > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] For readability, we suggest the update below. > > Please > review to ensure it does not impact the intended meaning. > > > > Original: > > >>> > The querier can request in the query message for the responder > > >>> > to send the response message back on a given return path using the > > >>> > MPLS Label Stack sub-TLV in the Return Path TLV defined in this > > >>> > document. > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > In the query message, the querier can request that the responder > > >>> > send > > > the response message back on a given return path using the MPLS Label > > > Stack Sub-TLV in the Return Path TLV defined in this document. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok. > > >>> > > > > 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review these similar sentences and let > > >>> > > > > us > > know if > we may update them for readability. > > More specifically, what > > does > > "which" refer to in the examples below? Does > it refer to the ACH or the > > different values in parentheses? > > >>> > > <RG> Value as in the suggested text. > > >>> > > In addition, we were unable to find "Combined DM+LM" in RFC 6374 > > >>> > > as seen in > > >>> > the third example. Should this be updated to "combined LM/DM > > message" as > used in RFC 6374? > > >>> > > <RG> Yes. > > >>> > > > Original: > > >>> > As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS Delay Measurement (DM) query and > > >>> > response messages use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value > > >>> > 0x000C for delay measurement) [RFC6374], which identifies the > > message > > >>> > type and the message payload as defined in Section 3.2 [RFC6374] > > >>> > following the ACH. > > As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS LM query > > >>> > and > > response messages use the > > >>> > Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value 0x000A for direct loss > > >>> > measurement or value 0x000B for inferred loss measurement), which > > >>> > identifies the message type and the message payload defined in > > >>> > Section 3.1 [RFC6374] following the ACH. > > As defined in > > [RFC6374], Combined DM+LM query and response messages > > >>> > use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (value 0x000D for direct > > >>> > loss > > >>> > and delay measurement or value 0x000E for inferred loss and delay > > >>> > measurement), which identifies the message type and the message > > >>> > payload defined in Section 3.3 [RFC6374] following the ACH. > > > > Perhaps: > > >>> > As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS Delay Measurement (DM) query and > > response > > >>> > messages use the Associated Channel Header (ACH) (with the value > > 0x000C > for delay measurement). This value identifies the message type > > and the > > >>> > message payload that follow the ACH, as defined in Section 3.2 of > > > [RFC6374]. > > >>> > > As defined in [RFC6374], MPLS LM query and response messages > > >>> > > use the ACH > > >>> > (with the value 0x000A for direct loss measurement or the value > > 0x000B > for inferred loss measurement). This value identifies the > > message > > type > and the message payload that follow the ACH, as defined in Section > > 3.1 > of [RFC6374]. > > >>> > > As defined in [RFC6374], combined DM+LM query and response > > messages use > the ACH (with the value 0x000D for direct loss and delay > > measurement or > the value 0x000E for inferred loss and delay > > measurement). This value > > >>> > identifies the message type and the message payload that follows > > >>> > the > > > ACH, as defined in Section 3.3 of [RFC6374]. > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok. Except DM+LM to be changed to LM/DM as suggested. > > >>> > > > 13) <!-- [rfced] In the instances below, we have adjusted "for > > accounting > received traffic". Please review to ensure these changes do not > > alter your > meaning. > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > The Path Segment Identifier (PSID) [RFC9545] MUST be carried in the > > >>> > received data packet for the traffic flow under measurement for > > > accounting received traffic on the egress node of the SR-MPLS Policy. > > >>> > > Different values of PSID can be used per Candidate-Path for > > >>> > > accounting > > >>> > received traffic to measure packet loss at the Candidate- Path > > >>> > level. > > >>> > > Current: > > >>> > The Path Segment Identifier (PSID) [RFC9545] MUST be carried in the > > >>> > received data packet for the traffic flow under measurement, in > > >>> > order > > to > > >>> > account for received traffic on the egress node of the SR-MPLS > > >>> > Policy. > > >>> > > Different values of the PSID can be used per Candidate-Path to > > account > for received traffic and to measure packet loss at the > > Candidate- > > Path > level. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > 14) <!-- [rfced] In the text below, does "while" mean "at the same > > time", > or does it represent a contrast (like "whereas" or "on the other > > hand")? > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > The LM query and response messages defined in [RFC6374] are used to > > >>> > measure packet loss for the block of data packets transmitted with > > >>> > the previous marking while data packets carry alternate marking. > > >>> > > Perhaps: > > >>> > The LM query and response messages defined in [RFC6374] are used to > > > measure packet loss for the block of data packets transmitted with the > > > > > > previous marking, whereas data packets carry alternate marking. > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > > 15) <!-- [rfced] FYI - The quoted text below appears > > >>> > > > > differently in > > RFC > 9341. We have updated to match RFC 9341. > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > "The assumption of the block number mechanism is that the > > measurement > > >>> > nodes are time synchronized" as specified in Section 4.3 of > > >>> > [RFC9341] > > >>> > is not necessary, as the block number on the responder can be > > >>> > synchronized based on the received LM query messages. > > >>> > > Current: > > >>> > Section 4.3 of [RFC9341] specifies: "The assumption of this BN > > >>> > mechanism is that the measurement nodes are time synchronized." > > However, > this is not necessary, as the block number on the responder > > can > > be > synchronized based on the received LM query messages. > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > 16) <!-- [rfced] Is "LSE" singular or plural in the text below? > > >>> > > Original: > > >>> > The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSE that includes a > > >>> > 20-bit label value, 8-bit TTL value, 3-bit TC value, and 1-bit EOS > > >>> > (S) field. > > Perhaps (LSE is plural): > > >>> > The MPLS Label Stack contains a list of 32-bit LSEs that each > > >>> > include a > > >>> > 20-bit label value, an 8-bit TTL value, a 3-bit TC value, and a > > >>> > 1-bit > > > EOS (S) field. > > >>> > > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > > 17) <!-- [rfced] We have removed "TLV" from the > > >>> > > > > Descriptions to align with > the IANA registries > > >>> > > > > <https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fg-ach-parameters&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850891779%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=su5MoCSB8LqOd42iuE5OrmuruzDBpSiku5S9zENrH7E%3D&reserved=0 > > >>> > > > > <https:// > > >> urldefense.com/v3/__https://nam11.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fg-ach-&data=05%7C02%7Cjames.n.guichard%40futurewei.com%7Cd96e754a9bf6465ffe5a08dd8bb3675f%7C0fee8ff2a3b240189c753a1d5591fedc%7C1%7C1%7C638820324850900621%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=oMqE8gxAsrlSgxPGTeGlX2b8uzCIP8vjd%2FUi4pGU6SE%3D&reserved=0 > > parameters__;!!O5Bi4QcV!EG- > > oLa0qgnQ0emFCiJzjgHJSzzwSJ10Ou71y77R_sHz1DkJwaUUyaxegy0n- > > YFDnSJQ7cQ3VR- aXfERMke3dELU$>>. > > >>> > Please let us know any corrections. > > Original: > > >>> > | TBA1 | Return Path TLV | This document | | TBA2 | Block > > >>> > Number TLV | This document | > > >>> > > Current: > > >>> > | 5 | Return Path | RFC 9779 | > > >>> > | 6 | Block Number | RFC 9779 | > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Ok > > >>> > > > > 18) <!-- [rfced] Should the registry name be plural? Note > > >>> > > > > that we will ask > IANA to update their registry if this > > >>> > > > > change is accepted. > > Current: Return Path Sub-TLV Type > > >>> > Perhaps: Return Path Sub-TLV Types > --> <RG> Yes > > >>> > > > 19) <!-- [rfced] Much of this text duplicates what appears in the > > table. > Perhaps the text should just indicate that the code points are > > assigned as > defined in Table 2? > > Section 12: > All code points in > > the > > range 0 through 175 in this registry > > >>> > shall be allocated according to the "IETF Review" procedure as > > >>> > specified in [RFC8126]. Code points in the range 176 through 239 > > >>> > in > > >>> > this registry shall be allocated according to the "First Come, > > >>> > First > > >>> > Served" procedure as specified in [RFC8126]. Remaining code points > > >>> > are allocated according to Table 2: > > >>> > > Table 2: > | Value | Description | > > >>> > > Reference | > > >>> > +===========+=========================+===============+ > > >>> > | 1 - 175 | IETF Review | This document | > > >>> > | 176 - 239 | First Come First Served | This document | > > >>> > | 240 - 251 | Experimental Use | This document | > > >>> > | 252 - 254 | Private Use | This document | > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Agree to change to: > > >>> > > The code points are allocated according to Table 2: > > >>> > > > 20) <!-- [rfced] Would it make sense to refer to the MPLS Review > > Team > (assuming that is correct), as we are unsure what MPLS-RT refers to > > and we > are unable to find information about it. > > Original: > > >>> > Thanks to Huaimo Chen, Yimin Shen, and Xufeng Liu for MPLS-RT > > expert > > >>> > review, ... > > >>> > --> > > >>> > <RG> Perhaps > > >>> > > Thanks to Huaimo Chen, Yimin Shen, and Xufeng Liu for MPLS > > >>> > > expert > > >>> > review, ... > > >>> > > > 21) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE802.1AX] references the 2008 version of > > >>> > > > this IEEE > Standard. 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