Thank you, Madison! Joe
From: Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Date: Thursday, April 24, 2025 at 12:32 To: <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>, Clyde Wildes <cl...@clydewildes.com>, Joe Clarke (jclarke) <jcla...@cisco.com>, Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com>, kirankoushik.agraharasreeniv...@verizonwireless.com <kirankoushik.agraharasreeniv...@verizonwireless.com> Cc: Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net>, RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, netmod-...@ietf.org <netmod-...@ietf.org>, netmod-cha...@ietf.org <netmod-cha...@ietf.org>, kwat...@juniper.net <kwat...@juniper.net>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> Subject: Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9742 <draft-ietf-netmod-syslog-model-33> for your review Hi Med, Authors, Med - Thank you for your reply! We have noted your approval as AD on the AUTH48 status page (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9742). Authors - Now that we have all necessary approvals, we will move this document forward in the publication process at this time. Thank you all for your time and effort! Best, RFC Editor/mc > On Apr 24, 2025, at 9:49 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Madison, > > Nickel! As we say here in France :-) > > I approve the publication of this version. > > Thank you for all your effort and patience with us. > > Cheers, > Med > >> -----Message d'origine----- >> De : Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> Envoyé : jeudi 24 avril 2025 16:40 >> À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; >> Clyde Wildes <cl...@clydewildes.com>; Joe Clarke >> <jcla...@cisco.com>; Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; >> kirankoushik.agraharasreeniv...@verizonwireless.com >> Cc : Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net>; RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc- >> editor.org>; netmod-...@ietf.org; netmod-cha...@ietf.org; >> kwat...@juniper.net; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> Objet : Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9742 <draft-ietf-netmod-syslog- >> model-33> for your review >> >> >> Hi Med, >> >> Thank you for your reply (and apologies for missing those changes >> earlier)! We have updated the document accordingly. If there are >> any additional updates needed, please let us know. Otherwise, let >> us know if you approve the document in its current form as AD. 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>> RFC Editor/mc >> >>> On Apr 22, 2025, at 12:50 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: >>> >>> Hi Madison, all, >>> >>> Thank you for the follow-up. >>> >>> The nit reported as part of item (1) in my previous message is >> still not fixed: "shows an examples" should be "shows an example". >> Please fix that one. >>> >>> Please see inline. >>> >>> Cheers, >>> Med >>> >>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>> De : Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Envoyé : >> lundi 21 >>>> avril 2025 21:20 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET >>>> <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com>; Clyde Wildes >> <cl...@clydewildes.com>; >>>> Joe Clarke <jcla...@cisco.com>; Mahesh Jethanandani >>>> <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; >>>> kirankoushik.agraharasreeniv...@verizonwireless.com >>>> Cc : Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net>; RFC Editor <rfc- >> editor@rfc- >>>> editor.org>; netmod-...@ietf.org; netmod-cha...@ietf.org; >>>> kwat...@juniper.net; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Objet : Re: >> [AD] >>>> AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9742 <draft-ietf-netmod-syslog- >>>> model-33> for your review >>>> >>>> Hi Med, >>>> >>>> Thank you for your reply and additional feedback! We have >> updated the >>>> document accordingly. Please see comments inline. >>>> >>>> 1) For (2), >>>>> (2) There are actually no messages shown in that figure >>>>> >>>>> CURRENT: >>>>> Syslog consists of originators and collectors. The following >>>> diagram >>>>> shows syslog messages flowing from originators to collectors >>>> where >>>>> filtering can take place. >>>> >>>> Would the solution be to remove this sentence entirely? Or >> should it >>>> be replaced with new text (i.e., replace "syslog messages" with >>>> "syslog processing flow" per the title of Figure 1)? >>>> >>>> Perhaps: >>>> Syslog consists of originators and collectors. The following >>>> diagram >>>> shows the syslog processing flow from originators to >> collectors >>>> where >>>> filtering can take place. >>>> >>> >>> [Med] Deal! Thanks. >>> >>>> 2) For (3), >>>>> (3) Stale/Redundant text: >>>>> >>>>> CURRENT: >>>>> A syslog message is processed if: >>>>> >>>>> A syslog message is processed if there is an element >>>>> of facility-list (F, S) where >>>>> the message facility matches F, >>>>> the message severity matches S, >>>>> and/or the message text matches the regex pattern (if it >>>>> is present) >>>>> >>>>> I guess one of "A syslog message is processed if" mentions >> should >>>> be deleted. >>>> >>>> We have removed the first instance of "A syslog message is >> processed >>>> if" (outside of the sourcecode element). >>>> >>> >>> [Med] ACK. >>> >>>> 3) Regarding the following: >>>>> (5) Normative references >>>>> >>>>> I see that RFC9000 is added as a normative reference, while >> this >>>> should. >>> >>> [Med] argh. I meant "should not" per the guidance provided below. >>> >>> Please refer to RFC8407bis which has the guidance to follow >>>> here: >>>>> >>>>> Note: [RFC8341] (or a future RFC that replaces it) MUST be >>>> listed as >>>>> normative references. >>>>> >>>>> By default, [RFC4252], [RFC6241], [RFC8040], [RFC8446], >>>> [RFC9000], >>>>> and RFC AAAA (or future RFCs that replace any of them) are >>>> listed >>>>> as informative references unless normatively cited in other >>>>> sections of the document that specifies the YANG module. >>>>> >>>>> Please update the references accordingly. >>>> >>>> Thank you for pointing this out. We have removed RFC 8407 as a >>>> normative reference and replaced it with rfc8407bis as an >> informative >>>> reference. Let us know if this was your intention. >>> >>> [Med] Thanks for fixing that one. We need to fix these following >> as well to adhere with the guidance above: >>> >>> >>> [RFC4252] Ylonen, T. and C. Lonvick, Ed., "The Secure Shell >> (SSH) >>> Authentication Protocol", RFC 4252, DOI >> 10.17487/RFC4252, >>> January 2006, >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www.rfc- >> editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc4252&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40oran >> ge.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce59208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b92 >> 53b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638811025190446471%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJF >> bXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWF >> pbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=dQYzc9e9vYZk63qMpl829%2BBU >> sEdeCgjd9npcpHPYcKM%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> [RFC6241] Enns, R., Ed., Bjorklund, M., Ed., Schoenwaelder, >> J., Ed., >>> and A. Bierman, Ed., "Network Configuration Protocol >>> (NETCONF)", RFC 6241, DOI 10.17487/RFC6241, June >> 2011, >>> >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www.rfc- >> editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc6241&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40oran >> ge.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce59208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b92 >> 53b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638811025190463118%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJF >> bXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWF >> pbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=5MVSKdhHqWfdmuSKourFn8csX1 >> kPlF3ilXqW50ubUb4%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> [RFC8040] Bierman, A., Bjorklund, M., and K. Watsen, "RESTCONF >>> Protocol", RFC 8040, DOI 10.17487/RFC8040, January >> 2017, >>> >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www.rfc- >> editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc8040&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40oran >> ge.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce59208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b92 >> 53b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638811025190480033%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJF >> bXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWF >> pbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=X7vbfWAtH5aTiQsY8vL1frRV%2 >> Fwurb9Cr7IXvgywn5Zk%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> [RFC8446] Rescorla, E., "The Transport Layer Security (TLS) >> Protocol >>> Version 1.3", RFC 8446, DOI 10.17487/RFC8446, August >> 2018, >>> >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www.rfc- >> editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc8446&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40oran >> ge.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce59208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b92 >> 53b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638811025190497210%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJF >> bXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWF >> pbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=MsPuTFoiLFOjGOHGr3mb1V%2FE >> 3ohMnqyFjyT5Je6FGu4%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> [RFC9000] Iyengar, J., Ed. and M. Thomson, Ed., "QUIC: A UDP- >> Based >>> Multiplexed and Secure Transport", RFC 9000, >>> DOI 10.17487/RFC9000, May 2021, >>> >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >> www.rfc- >> editor.org%2Finfo%2Frfc9000&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40oran >> ge.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce59208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b92 >> 53b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638811025190516196%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJF >> bXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWF >> pbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=DkaFB7RU5zI%2FQ90cclz72sGt >> q1AlBghuLoS1DKJ6fSA%3D&reserved=0>. >>> >>> >>> Please move all those to be listed as Informative. 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Med >>>>> >>>>>> -----Message d'origine----- >>>>>> De : Warren Kumari <war...@kumari.net> Envoyé : mercredi 16 >>>> avril >>>>>> 2025 23:11 À : Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org>; >>>>>> BOUCADAIR Mohamed INNOV/NET <mohamed.boucad...@orange.com> Cc >> : >>>> Clyde >>>>>> Wildes <cl...@clydewildes.com>; Joe Clarke >> <jcla...@cisco.com>; >>>>>> Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com>; >>>>>> kirankoushik.agraharasreeniv...@verizonwireless.com; RFC >> Editor >>>>>> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; netmod-...@ietf.org; netmod- >>>>>> cha...@ietf.org; kwat...@juniper.net; auth48archive@rfc- >>>> editor.org >>>>>> Objet : Re: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9742 <draft-ietf- >> netmod- >>>>>> syslog-model-33> for your review >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> [ + Med ] >>>>>> I believe that this is fine (and good!), but I'm adding Med as >>>> the >>>>>> current OpsAD for formal approval. >>>>>> >>>>>> W >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> On Mon, Apr 14, 2025 at 11:22 AM, Madison Church < >>>>>> mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Authors, *Warren, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Authors - Thank you for your replies! We have noted your >>>>>> approvals on >>>>>>> the >>>>>>> AUTH48 status page (see >>>>>> >>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fw >> %2 >>>> >> F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce >> 59 >>>> >> 208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C63881102 >> 51 >>>> >> 90679655%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLj >> Au >>>> >> MDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C% >> 7C >>>> >> &sdata=uvMVNEgEorlijJMr5j9e%2F0vIgVpWSihbQWqtoc6OKrM%3D&reserved=0 >>>> %2 >>>>>> >>>> >> F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cdd73756b79454254c >>>> 1e >>>>>> >>>> >> 008dd8109970f%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C63880860 >>>> 05 >>>>>> >>>> >> 11797276%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLj >>>> Au >>>>>> >>>> >> MDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C% >>>> 7C >>>>>> >> &sdata=SjJt57VgP44Ah2drgeQXmFeVLHDKkvcZMn8Q1buFxMk%3D&reserved=0 >>>>>> ww.rfc- >>>>>> >>>> >> editor.org%2Fauth48%2Frfc9742&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40or >>>>>> >>>> >> ange.com%7Cc4750c63c69b4233fa7308dd7d2b2e13%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b >>>>>> >>>> >> 9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C638804346604693219%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8ey >>>>>> >>>> >> JFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiT >>>>>> >>>> >> WFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=iRZmIw5I9I0eRbpibi31LQ4v >>>>>> ntlD8CuvurIISw6c%2Bmc%3D&reserved=0). >>>>>>> >>>>>>> *Warren - As Responsible AD for this document, please review >>>> and >>>>>>> approve the following addition to the Normative References as >>>> per >>>>>>> https:// datatracker.ietf.org/doc/ >>>>>>> statement-iesg-guidelines-for-the-use-of-formal-languages-in- >>>>>> ietf-specifications-20011001/. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> >>>>>>> [W3C.REC-xml-20081126] >>>>>>> Bray, T., Paoli, J., Sperberg-McQueen, C.M., Maler, E., and >> F. >>>>>>> Yergeau, "Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Fifth >>>> Edition)", >>>>>> World >>>>>>> Wide Web Consortium Recommendation REC-xml-20081126, November >>>>>> 2008, >>>>>>> >>>>>> >>>> >> <https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2F >>>>>> >>>> >> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=http%3A%2F%2Fww >> %2 >>>> >> F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7C2f857ded8cd843fce >> 59 >>>> >> 208dd833e29a5%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C63881102 >> 51 >>>> >> 90701587%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLj >> Au >>>> >> MDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C% >> 7C >>>> >> &sdata=dIp9HfeY%2F2lqjJ5sRXk5pjoBS1%2BaXuyH6XVjkECZ0xs%3D&reserved= >> 0 >>>> w. >>>>>> >>>> >> w3.org%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cdd73756b7 >>>> 94 >>>>>> >>>> >> 54254c1e008dd8109970f%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C0%7C >>>> 63 >>>>>> >>>> >> 8808600511808053%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIl >>>> Yi >>>>>> >>>> >> OiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C >>>> 0% >>>>>> >>>> >> 7C%7C%7C&sdata=2Yb%2FkVswvjWs4OPr5PNqOe%2FIsMBd221EhG%2F8DiaKvuY%3D >>>> &r >>>>>> eserved=0%2FTR%2F2008%2FREC-xml- >>>>>> >>>> >> 20081126%2F&data=05%7C02%7Cmohamed.boucadair%40orange.com%7Cc4750c6 >>>>>> >>>> >> 3c69b4233fa7308dd7d2b2e13%7C90c7a20af34b40bfbc48b9253b6f5d20%7C0%7C >>>>>> >>>> >> 0%7C638804346604708447%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRy >>>>>> >>>> >> dWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ% >>>>>> >>>> >> 3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Hc2wzZ4k%2F8d4MsQFCKpn7Xri9NWLvM%2FRSlty3G >>>>>> qUTDM%3D&reserved=0>. >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thank you, >>>>>>> RFC Editor/mc >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On Apr 13, 2025, at 2:00 PM, Clyde Wildes >>>> <cl...@clydewildes.com> >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Madison, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Approved from me! >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Clyde >>>>>>> >>>>>>> On Mar 19, 2025, at 8:56 AM, Madison Church >>>>>>> <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>>>> wrote: >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Hi Authors, >>>>>>> >>>>>>> Joe - Thank you for your reply! 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