After discussing with Dhruv, "Optional processing of PCEP object " is preferred.
Thanks, Cheng ________________________________ 李呈 Li Cheng Mobile: +86-15116983550(中国电话)/+33-625833229(法国电话) Mail: c...@huawei.com 发件人：Cheng Li <c...@huawei.com<mailto:c...@huawei.com>> 收件人：Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org<mailto:sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>>;slitkows.ietf <slitkows.i...@gmail.com<mailto:slitkows.i...@gmail.com>> 抄 送：Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com<mailto:zhenghaom...@huawei.com>>;Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com<mailto:d...@dhruvdhody.com>>;RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org<mailto:rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>>;pce-ads <pce-...@ietf.org<mailto:pce-...@ietf.org>>;pce-chairs <pce-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:pce-cha...@ietf.org>>;Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org<mailto:r...@cert.org>>;auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<mailto:auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>> 时 间：2025-04-14 11:38:44 主 题：RE: question: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 for your review I think it should be " Optional Processing in Stateful PCEP". It is not Stateful PCE for Optional PCEP Objects. Thanks, Cheng -----Original Message----- From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> Sent: Friday, April 11, 2025 8:29 PM To: slitkows.i...@gmail.com Cc: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com>; Cheng Li <c...@huawei.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; pce-...@ietf.org; pce-cha...@ietf.org; Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org Subject: question: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 <draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-13> for your review Hi Stephane, Authors, Thank you for your review. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9753>. Authors, please note that we have updated the abbreviated title that appears in the center header of the PDF as shown below. Originally, it shows "STATEFUL-OPT”, which is not a term used in the document. Original: STATEFUL-OPT Current: Stateful PCE for Optional PCEP Objects We would appreciate an acknowledgement that the update is acceptable from at least one author at this point in the process. If it is unacceptable, please provide the update. Please see <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.pdf>. (Note that the change is not visible in the other file formats or the diffs because the center header does not appear in the other files.) All of the files are available here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.xml https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.html Thank you, RFC Editor/sg > On Apr 11, 2025, at 7:10 AM, <slitkows.i...@gmail.com> > <slitkows.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Hi, > > I have reviewed and I approve. > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > Sent: Monday, April 7, 2025 5:35 PM > To: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com> > Cc: slitkows.i...@gmail.com; Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com>; Cheng Li > <c...@huawei.com>; RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; > pce-...@ietf.org; pce-cha...@ietf.org; Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 > <draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-13> for your review > > Hi Haomian, > > Thank you for your review. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9753>. > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > >> On Apr 7, 2025, at 1:28 AM, Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com> wrote: >> >> Hi Sandy, all, >> >> I am writing to approve the changes, thank you for the work. >> >> Best wishes, >> Haomian >> >> -----邮件原件----- >> 发件人: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >> 发送时间: 2025年4月7日 9:19 >> 收件人: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; slitkows.i...@gmail.com; >> Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com> >> 抄送: Cheng Li <c...@huawei.com>; RFC Editor >> <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; slitkows.i...@gmail.com; >> pce-...@ietf.org; pce-cha...@ietf.org; Roman Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; >> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >> 主题: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 >> <draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-13> for your review >> >> Greetings Haomian and Stephane, >> >> This is a friendly reminder that we await your review and approval before >> continuing with the publication process. Please review the document at the >> URLs listed below and let us know if updates are needed. >> >> Thank you, >> RFC Editor/sg >> >> >> >>> On Apr 2, 2025, at 9:23 AM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>> wrote: >>> >>> Hi Dhruv, >>> >>> Thanks for your review. We have updated the text and posted the revised >>> files here: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.xml >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.txt >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.pdf >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.html >>> >>> Diffs highlighting the more recent updates: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-lastdiff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-lastrfcdiff.html (side by >>> side) >>> >>> AUTH48 diffs: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-auth48diff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-auth48rfcdiff.html (side >>> by side) >>> >>> Comprehensive diffs: >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-diff.html >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-rfcdiff.html (side by >>> side) >>> >>> Thanks, >>> RFC Editor/sg >>> >>> >>>> On Apr 2, 2025, at 8:58 AM, Dhruv Dhody <d...@dhruvdhody.com> wrote: >>>> >>>> Hi Sandy, >>>> >>>> One tiny nit, We have one instance of "PCinit message" and one >>>> instance of "PCinitiate message"; please change both to PCInitiate >>>> message (as per RFC 8281) >>>> >>>> Thanks! >>>> Dhruv >>>> >>>> On Wed, Apr 2, 2025 at 9:11 PM Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>> wrote: >>>> Hi Cheng, >>>> >>>> Thank you for reply. We have updated the text and posted the revised >>>> files. We believe you approve the RFC for publication, so we have noted >>>> your approval on the AUTH48 page >>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9753>. We will wait to hear from >>>> your coauthors before continuing with publication. >>>> >>>> Current files: >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.xml >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.txt >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.pdf >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.html >>>> >>>> Diffs of the most recent update: >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-lastdiff.html >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-lastrfcdiff.html (side >>>> by side) >>>> >>>> AUTH48 diffs: >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-auth48diff.html >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-auth48rfcdiff.html (side >>>> by side) >>>> >>>> Comprehensive diffs: >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-diff.html >>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-rfcdiff.html (side by >>>> side) >>>> >>>> Thank you, >>>> RFC Editor/sg >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>>> On Apr 2, 2025, at 2:02 AM, Cheng Li <c...@huawei.com> wrote: >>>>> >>>>> Hi Sandy, >>>>> >>>>> Just to be clear. I confirm that we can publish the RFC. >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Cheng >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>> From: Cheng Li >>>>> Sent: Friday, March 28, 2025 11:20 AM >>>>> To: 'Sandy Ginoza' <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Zhenghaomian >>>>> <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; slitkows.i...@gmail.com; >>>>> pce-...@ietf.org; pce-cha...@ietf.org; d...@dhruvdhody.com; Roman >>>>> Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>> Subject: RE: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 >>>>> <draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-13> for your review >>>>> >>>>> Hi Sandy, >>>>> >>>>> Sorry for my delay. >>>>> I think the current text is good to me. >>>>> >>>>> Regarding the new text you suggested below, I think I can understand it >>>>> without problem. And the current text in the link is also ok to me. >>>>> Therefore, you can choose the better one from your point of view. >>>>> >>>>> Based the NEW text, we suggest this update: >>>>> >>>>>> The scope of how P and I flags are applied is defined in >>>>>> [RFC5440] and is unchanged by this document. Therefore, these flags can >>>>>> only be applied to an entire PCEP object; they cannot be applied at the >>>>>> granularity of optional TLVs encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>> >>>>> For the notes in the XML file(which are not shown in the text/website), I >>>>> think they can be removed. >>>>> >>>>> Thanks, >>>>> Cheng >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> >>>>> Sent: Tuesday, March 18, 2025 11:42 AM >>>>> To: Cheng Li <c...@huawei.com> >>>>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Zhenghaomian >>>>> <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; slitkows.i...@gmail.com; >>>>> pce-...@ietf.org; pce-cha...@ietf.org; d...@dhruvdhody.com; Roman >>>>> Danyliw <r...@cert.org>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 >>>>> <draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-13> for your review >>>>> >>>>> Hi Cheng, >>>>> >>>>> We have updated the document as described below except for the item >>>>> you’ve asked the authors to review. The updated files are available here: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.xml >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.txt >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.pdf >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753.html >>>>> >>>>> AUTH48 diffs: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-auth48diff.html >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-auth48rfcdiff.html >>>>> (side by side) >>>>> >>>>> Comprehensive files: >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-diff.html >>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9753-rfcdiff.html (side by >>>>> side) >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Please review our suggested update for the new text below and let us know >>>>> if you approve. >>>>> >>>>>> OLD: >>>>>> Further, it should be noted that similar to handling of P and I >>>>>> flags in [RFC5440], the flag applies to full PCEP Object and >>>>>> could not be applied to the granularity of an optional TLVs >>>>>> encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> NEW: >>>>>> >>>>>> This document does not modify the scope that P and I flags can be >>>>>> applied to, as defined in [RFC5440]. Therefore, these flags will only be >>>>>> applied to an entire PCEP object, and cannot be applied to the >>>>>> granularity of an optional TLVs encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Based the NEW text, we suggest this update: >>>>> >>>>>> The scope of how P and I flags are applied is defined in >>>>>> [RFC5440] and is unchanged by this document. Therefore, these flags can >>>>>> only be applied to an entire PCEP object; they cannot be applied at the >>>>>> granularity of optional TLVs encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> Also, we see this text commented out in the XML file. Please consider >>>>> whether any action is needed; otherwise the notes will be removed. >>>>> >>>>> <!--Similarly in the case of an association group >>>>> <xref target="RFC8697"/> such as Disjoint Association <xref >>>>> target="RFC8800"/>, the PCE may need to completely relax the >>>>> disjointness constraint in order to provide a path to all the LSPs >>>>> that are part of the association.—> >>>>> >>>>> <!--By default, the PCE SHOULD set the P >>>>> flag, unless a >>>>> local configuration or local policy indicates that some constraints >>>>> (corresponding PCEP objects) can be marked as optional and could be >>>>> ignored by the PCC.--> >>>>> >>>>> Thank you, >>>>> RFC Editor/sg >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>> >>>>>> On Mar 12, 2025, at 2:07 AM, Cheng Li <c.l=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org> >>>>>> wrote: >>>>>> >>>>>> Hi RFC Editors, >>>>>> >>>>>> Please see my reply inline. Thanks for your work! >>>>>> >>>>>> Specially, authors, please review this modification proposal. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> OLD: >>>>>> Further, it should be noted that similar to handling of P and I >>>>>> flags in [RFC5440], the flag applies to full PCEP Object and >>>>>> could not be applied to the granularity of an optional TLVs >>>>>> encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> NEW: >>>>>> >>>>>> This document does not modify the scope that P and I flags can be >>>>>> applied to, as defined in [RFC5440]. Therefore, these flags will only be >>>>>> applied to an entire PCEP object, and cannot be applied to the >>>>>> granularity of an optional TLVs encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>>> >>>>>> Authors, please review this change. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Thanks, >>>>>> Cheng >>>>>> >>>>>> -----Original Message----- >>>>>> From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org> >>>>>> Sent: Monday, March 10, 2025 7:24 AM >>>>>> To: Cheng Li <c...@huawei.com>; Zhenghaomian >>>>>> <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; slitkows.i...@gmail.com >>>>>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; pce-...@ietf.org; >>>>>> pce-cha...@ietf.org; d...@dhruvdhody.com; r...@cert.org; >>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org >>>>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9753 >>>>>> <draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-13> for your review >>>>>> >>>>>> Authors, >>>>>> >>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as >>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. >>>>>> >>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that >>>>>> appear in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. >>>>>> --> [Cheng] PCEP, Stateful, optional processing >>>>>> >>>>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble parsing this sentence. Please >>>>>> consider whether the suggested text conveys the intended meaning. >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> [RFC5440] describes the handling of unknown objects as per the >>>>>> setting of the P flag for the PCReq message. >>>>>> >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> Setting the P flag in the PCReq message to handle unknown objects >>>>>> is as described in Section 7.2 of [RFC5440]. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> [Cheng]OK >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Does marking something as optional allow the PCEP peer >>>>>> to ignore the object? If yes, may we update the text as follows? >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> In these cases, it would be useful to mark the objects as >>>>>> 'optional' and they could be ignored by the PCEP peer. >>>>>> >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> In these cases, it would be useful to mark the objects as >>>>>> 'optional' so they could be ignored by the PCEP peer. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> [Cheng]OK >>>>>> >>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble parsing this text. It refers to >>>>>> the P and I flags, but then switches to "the flag". Does "the flag" >>>>>> refer to the R flag, which has not yet been introduced? Please review >>>>>> and let us know how the text may be clarified. >>>>>> >>>>>> Original (prior sentence included for context): >>>>>> Thus, this document specifies how the already existing P and I >>>>>> flags in the PCEP common object header could be used during the >>>>>> stateful PCEP message exchange. Further, it should be noted that >>>>>> similar to handling of P and I flags in [RFC5440], the flag >>>>>> applies to full PCEP Object and could not be applied to the >>>>>> granularity of an optional TLVs encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>>> >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> Further, it should be noted that, similar to handling of P and I >>>>>> flags in [RFC5440], the flag indicating that the constraint has >>>>>> been relaxed applies to the full PCEP object and cannot be >>>>>> applied at the granularity of an optional TLV encoded in the PCEP object. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> [Cheng]I do not think 'the flag' is correct here. It should not be the R >>>>>> flag, but the 'P and I flags'. After discussing with Dhruv, we confirm >>>>>> that we should use the flags(P and I flags). Please see the new text >>>>>> below. >>>>>> >>>>>> OLD: >>>>>> Further, it should be noted that similar to handling of P and I >>>>>> flags in [RFC5440], the flag applies to full PCEP Object and >>>>>> could not be applied to the granularity of an optional TLVs >>>>>> encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> NEW: >>>>>> >>>>>> This document does not modify the scope that P and I flags can be >>>>>> applied to, as defined in [RFC5440]. Therefore, these flags will only be >>>>>> applied to an entire PCEP object, and cannot be applied to the >>>>>> granularity of an optional TLVs encoded in the PCEP Object. >>>>>> >>>>>> Authors, please review this change. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] PCUpd seems to be exapnded slightly differently in two >>>>>> places. Based on what we see in RFC 8231 (see below), we don't believe >>>>>> the terms are interchangeable. Please review and let us know how/if >>>>>> these should be made consistent? Perhaps Section 3.3.2 can just refer >>>>>> to PCUpd and PCInitiate since those terms are introduced earlier in the >>>>>> document? >>>>>> >>>>>> Section 1: Path Computation Update Request (PCUpd) >>>>>> This document defines a new flag, the R >>>>>> (RELAX) flag in STATEFUL-PCE-CAPABILITY TLV in the PCEP common >>>>>> object header to indicate a PCE speaker supporting P and I flags >>>>>> processing, and also specifies how the P and I flags could be >>>>>> used in the stateful PCE model to identify optional objects in >>>>>> the Path Computation State Report (PCRpt) [RFC8231], the Path >>>>>> Computation Update Request (PCUpd) [RFC8231], and the LSP >>>>>> Initiate Request >>>>>> (PCInitiate) [RFC8281] message. >>>>>> >>>>>> Section 3.3.2: LSP Update Request (PCUpd) The I flag in the PCRpt >>>>>> message [RFC8231] allows a PCC to indicate to a PCE whether or >>>>>> not an optional object was processed in response to an LSP Update >>>>>> Request (PCUpd) or LSP Initiate Request (PCInitiate). >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> From RFC 8231: >>>>>> Path Computation Update Request (PCUpd) >>>>>> >>>>>> Section 6.2 of RFC 8231: >>>>>> A PCUpd message can carry more than one LSP Update Request. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> [Cheng]It takes few minutes to understand the problem. Ha, we can change >>>>>> LSP update request to PCUpd message, and LSP Initiate request to PCinit >>>>>> message. The purpose is not to emphasize the LSP, but the message. >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] We are having trouble parsing this sentence. Please >>>>>> consider whether the suggested text is more clear. Otherwise, please >>>>>> clarify. >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> This document updates the handling of unknown objects in the >>>>>> stateful PCEP messages as per the setting of the P flag in the >>>>>> common object header in a similar way as [RFC5440], i.e. if a >>>>>> PCEP speaker does not understand an object with the P flag set or >>>>>> understands the object but decides to ignore the object, the >>>>>> entire stateful PCEP message MUST be rejected and the PCE MUST >>>>>> send a PCErr message with Error- Type="Unknown Object" or "Not supported >>>>>> Object" [RFC5440]. >>>>>> >>>>>> Perahps: >>>>>> This document updates the handling of unknown objects in the >>>>>> stateful PCEP messages by setting the P flag in the common object >>>>>> header in a similar way as described in [RFC5440]. That is, if a >>>>>> PCEP speaker does not understand an object with the P flag set, >>>>>> or if the PCEP speaker understands the object but decides to >>>>>> ignore the object, the entire stateful PCEP message MUST be >>>>>> rejected, and the PCE MUST send a PCErr message with Error- >>>>>> Type="Unknown Object" >>>>>> or "Not supported object" [RFC5440]. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> [Cheng]ok, thanks! Will avoid to use 'as per' next time, and try >>>>>> to make the subject of a sentence clear 😊 >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] Note that we have lowercased "object" when it appears as >>>>>> "PCEP object" to align with use in the referenced RFCs (e.g., 9753, >>>>>> 5440). >>>>>> Please let us know if any updates are needed. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> [Cheng]please follow the best practice, I am ok with lowercase or >>>>>> uppercase. 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