Hi Tom and Gorry*, *Gorry - As AD, please review and approve the following changes. These are best viewed in this diff file: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48diff.html.
1) Added paragraph in Section 5; it’s the fourth paragraph (author comment: "We missed the following paragraph in what we submitted. It has undergone review within the WG.”) 2) Added text in Section 5.2 (author comment: "And likewise we missed including the flags above. Two implementations had them, but a third one (which arrived after we sent the document out to the RFC Editors did not.) This has undergone the WG vetting process.”) 3) Added “MUST” in third paragraph of Section 5 (to correspond with “MUST” earlier in sentence) Tom - Thank you for responding to our questions and for updating the xml file with the list in the Definitions section. We created a test file that uses <ul> rather than <dl> for this list; see below. Do you have a preference for one of these formats (i.e., <dl> or <ul>)? We’re happy to make the change if you prefer <ul>. https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-TEST.html#name-definitions https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-TEST.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-TEST.pdf — FILES (please refresh) — Updated XML file: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.xml Updated output files: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754.html Diff files showing all changes made during AUTH48: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by side) Diff files showing all changes: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-diff.html https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9754-rfcdiff.html (side by side) For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see: https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9754 Thank you, RFC Editor/rv > On Mar 17, 2025, at 8:39 PM, Thomas Haynes <log...@hammerspace.com> wrote: > > > > Hi, > > Please find attached my responses to the questions asked in the draft and > some changes that came in after we sent the document to the RFC Editors. > > Thanks, > Tom > > >> On Mar 18, 2025, at 4:26 AM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: >> >> *****IMPORTANT***** >> >> Updated 2025/03/17 >> >> RFC Author(s): >> -------------- >> >> Instructions for Completing AUTH48 >> >> Your document has now entered AUTH48. 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