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> On Mar 11, 2025, at 12:12 AM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> 
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> 
> While reviewing this document during AUTH48 
> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9761.html and other formats), please 
> resolve the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
> 
> 1) <!-- [rfced] For clarity, we have updated the title and the first 
> sentence of the  Abstract from the combined abbreviation
> "(D)TLS" to "TLS and DTLS". Afterwards, "D(TLS)" will be used in the
> document. 
> 
> Original:
>   This memo extends the Manufacturer Usage Description (MUD)
>   specification to allow manufacturers to define (D)TLS profile
>   parameters.
> 
> Current:
>   This memo extends the Manufacturer Usage Description (MUD)
>   specification to allow manufacturers to define TLS and DTLS profile
>   parameters
> -->
> 
> 
> 2) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in
> the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
> 
> 
> 3) <!-- [rfced] We have rephrased "non-malware" in the text below. Please let 
> us
> know if you refer otherwise.
> 
> Original:
>   Malware often reuses certain libraries, and there are notable
>   differences in how malware uses encryption compared to non-malware.
> 
> Current:
>   Malware often reuses certain libraries, and there are notable
>   differences in how malware uses encryption compared to software
>   that is not malware.
> -->
> 
> 
> 4) <!-- [rfced] Please clarify the following sentence. We note that DDR is
> defined in RFC 9462, and DNR is defined in RFC 9463. We also note that
> RFC 9463 is cited for DNR later in this document. May we update the text 
> as shown below?
> 
> Original:
>   *  Using an alternative DNS server (via encrypted transport) to avoid
>      detection by malware DNS filtering services [malware-doh].
>      Specifically, malware may not use the Do53 or encrypted DNS server
>      provided by the local network (DHCP, DNR [RFC9462] or DDR
>      [RFC9462]).
> 
> Perhaps:
> 
>   * Using an alternative DNS server (via encrypted transport) to avoid
>     detection by malware DNS filtering services [malware-doh]. Specifically,
>     malware may not use the Do53 or encrypted DNS server provided by the
>     local network (DHCP, Discovery of Network-designated Resolvers (DNR)
>     [RFC9463], or Discovery of Designated Resolvers (DDR) [RFC9462]).
> -->
> 
> 
> 5) <!-- [rfced] We find that the phrase "layers 3 and 4 Access Control Lists" 
> may
> be difficult for readers to interpret. May we rephrase it as below
> for readability?
> 
> Original: 
>      This is superior to the layers 3 and 4 Access Control Lists
>      (ACLs) of Manufacturer Usage Description Specification (MUD)
>      [RFC8520] which are not suitable for broad communication patterns.
> 
> Perhaps: 
>     This is superior to the Access Control Lists (ACLs) of 
>     Layers 3 and 4 in "Manufacturer Usage Description Specification" 
>     [RFC8520], which are not suitable for broad communication patterns.
> -->
> 
> 
> 6) <!-- [rfced] How may this sentence be rephrased for readability?
> Specifically: Does "to identify the IoT manufacturer no longer supports 
> the device" mean 
> (A) "to indicate that the IoT manufacturer no longer supports the device" or
> (B) "to identify which IoT manufacturer no longer supports the device" or
> otherwise?
> 
> Original:
>   However, if the IoT device has reached end-of-life and the IoT
>   manufacturer will not issue a firmware or software update to the IoT
>   device or will not update the MUD file, the "is-supported" attribute
>   defined in Section 3.6 of [RFC8520] can be used by the MUD manager to
>   identify the IoT manufacturer no longer supports the device.
> 
> Perhaps (if option (A)):
>   However, if the IoT device has reached end-of-life (EOL) and the IoT
>   manufacturer will not issue a firmware or software update to the IoT
>   device or will not update the MUD file, the "is-supported" attribute
>   defined in Section 3.6 of [RFC8520] can be used by the MUD manager to
>   indicate that the IoT manufacturer no longer supports the device.
> -->
> 
> 
> 7) <!-- [rfced] May we update this sentence as follows? The "and in TLS 
> to signal" part is unclear.
> 
> Original: 
>      For example, a TLS client implementation can support different sets of
>      algorithms for certificates and in TLS to signal the capabilities
>      in "signature_algorithms_cert" and "signature_algorithms"
>      extensions.
> 
> Perhaps: 
>     For example, a TLS client implementation can support different sets
>     of algorithms for certificates, and it can signal the capabilities in 
>     the "signature_algorithms_cert" and "signature_algorithms" extensions.
> -->
> 
> 
> 8) <!--[rfced] Note that the YANG modules have been updated per the
> formatting option of pyang.  Please let us know any concerns.
> --> 
> 
> 
> 9) <!--[rfced] Regarding the contact statement in the ietf-acl-tls 
> and ietf-mud-tls YANG modules, would you like to add Dan Wing 
> and Blake Anderson, i.e., to list all authors of this document?
> (FYI, Tiru, your name has been updated to match your preference 
> in past RFCs. Just let us know if updates are needed.)
> 
> Current:
>        Author: Tirumaleswar Reddy.K
> kond...@gmail.com
> -->
> 
> 
> 10) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode element
> in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current list of preferred
> values for "type"
> (https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types)
> does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us know.
> Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not set.  
> -->
> 
> 
> 11) <!--[rfced] Is the expansion of TCAM accurate here?
> (It was plural in the original; it is not plural currently.)
> 
> Original:
>   While ACL technology is traditionally associated with fixed-length
>   bit matching in hardware implementations, such as those found in
>   TCAMs, the use of ACLs in software, ...
> 
> Current:
>   While ACL technology is traditionally associated with fixed-length
>   bit matching in hardware implementations, such as those found in
>   Ternary Content-Addressable Memory (TCAM), the use of ACLs in
>   software, ...
> -->
> 
> 
> 12) <!-- [rfced] May this sentence be updated as follows?
> Should the "messages" be singular to match the first stage?
> 
> Original: 
>   ACL matching would be performed in two stages:
>   first, by filtering clear-text TLS handshake message and second, by
>   filtering after decrypting the TLS handshake messages.
> 
> Perhaps (if singular):
>   ACL matching would be performed in two stages:
>   first, by filtering the clear-text TLS handshake message; second, by
>   filtering after decrypting the TLS handshake message.
> 
> Or (if singular, and putting the steps of the second stage in order): 
>   ACL matching would be performed in two stages:
>   first, by filtering the clear-text TLS handshake message; second, by
>   decrypting the TLS handshake message then filtering it once more.
> -->
> 
> 
> 13) <!-- [rfced] Because of your note that the template in rfc8407bis
> has been used, we will update this paragraph (which appears in Sections
> 9.2, 9.3, and 9.4) to match Section 3.7.1 of rfc8407bis as follows.
> Please let us know if that is not what you intended.
> 
> Original:
>   This section follows the template defined in Section 3.7.1 of
>   [I-D.ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis].
> 
>   The YANG module specified in this document defines a schema for data
>   can possibly be accessed via network management protocols such as
>   NETCONF [RFC6241] or RESTCONF [RFC8040].  These network management
>   protocols are required to use a secure transport layer and mutual
>   authentication, e.g., SSH [RFC6242] without the "none" authentication
>   option, Transport Layer Security (TLS) [RFC8446] with mutual X.509
>   authentication, and HTTPS with HTTP authentication (Section 11 of
>   [RFC9110]).
> 
>   The Network Access Control Model (NACM) [RFC8341] provides the means
>   to restrict access for particular users to a pre-configured subset of
>   all available protocol operations and content.
> 
> Perhaps (following draft-ietf-netmod-rfc8407bis-22): 
>   This section follows the template defined in Section 3.7.1 of
>   [YANG-GUIDELINES].
> 
>   The "iana-tls-profile" YANG module defines a data model that is
>   designed to be accessed via YANG-based management protocols, such as
>   NETCONF [RFC6241] and RESTCONF [RFC8040]. These protocols have to
>   use a secure transport layer (e.g., SSH [RFC4252], TLS [RFC8446], and
>   QUIC [RFC9000]) and have to use mutual authentication.
> 
>   The Network Configuration Access Control Model (NACM) [RFC8341]
>   provides the means to restrict access for particular NETCONF or
>   RESTCONF users to a preconfigured subset of all available NETCONF or
>   RESTCONF protocol operations and content.
> -->
> 
> 
> 14) <!--[rfced] Table 3: For psk-key-exchange-mode, would you like the 
> description to start with a capital letter, to be consistent with the 
> other descriptions?  If so, we will ask IANA to update the registry
> (https://www.iana.org/assignments/acl-tls) accordingly.
> 
> Current: pre-shared key exchange mode
> 
> Perhaps: Pre-shared key exchange mode
> -->
> 
> 
> 15) <!-- [rfced] Please review the questions below regarding references in 
> this
> document.
> 
> a) Re: [X690], we added the URL
> https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-X.690-200207-S/en.  However, it has been 
> superseded by this version that was released in February 2021:
> https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-X.690-202102-I/en. May we update this reference
> to use the most current version?
> 
> Current:
>   [X690]     ITU-T, "Information technology - ASN.1 encoding Rules:
>              Specification of Basic Encoding Rules (BER), Canonical
>              Encoding Rules (CER) and Distinguished Encoding Rules
>              (DER)", ITU-T Recommendation X.690, July 2002,
>              <https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-X.690-200207-S/en>.
> 
> 
> b) We note that there are no citations for [RFC8484] in this document. Please
> let us know if there is a specific place in the document where we can cite
> this RFC. Otherwise, we will remove this from the Informative References.
> 
> c) Re: [X501], this reference has been superseded
> by the 2019 version of X.501 - available here:
> https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-X.501-201910-I/en. May we update this reference
> to use the most current version?  FYI, the URL for the
> 1993 version of this reference has been included in the reference.
> 
> Current:
>   [X501]     "Information Technology - Open Systems Interconnection -
>              The Directory: Models", ITU-T Recommendation X.501,
>              November 1993,
>              <https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-X.501-199311-S/en>.
> 
> d) Re: [CRYPTO-VULNERABILITY], the information provided does not
> match the information provided at the URL (which directs to an NSA
> Cybersecurity Advisory with the title "Patch Critical Cryptographic 
> Vulnerability in Microsoft Windows Clients and Servers" with a date of 14 
> January 2020).
> 
> Upon further research, we found the following URL:
> https://securityboulevard.com/2020/01/exploiting-the-windows-cryptoapi-vulnerability/.
>  The
> title, date, and author at this URL match the original reference information
> provided. Is that the correct URL for this reference? Or should we update 
> this reference to match the information provided at the original URL, 
> i.e., the NSA Cybersecurity Advisory?  
> 
> Original:
>   [cryto-vulnerability]
>              Perez, B., "Exploiting the Windows CryptoAPI                     
>         
>              Vulnerability", January 2020,
>              <https://media.defense.gov/2020/Jan/14/2002234275/-1/-1/0/
>              CSA-WINDOWS-10-CRYPT-LIB-20190114.PDF>.
> 
> e) FYI, we removed mention of "Cisco" from this reference,
> as there is no mention of "Cisco" at this archived URL.
> Please let us know if other changes are needed.
> 
> Original:
>   [slowloris]
>              Cisco, "Slowloris HTTP DoS",
>              <https://web.archive.org/web/20150315054838/
>              http://ha.ckers.org/slowloris/>.
> 
> Current:
>   [SLOWLORIS]
>              "Slowloris HTTP DoS", Wayback Machine archive,
>              <https://web.archive.org/web/20150315054838/
>              http://ha.ckers.org/slowloris/>.
> -->
> 
> 
> 16) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following terms and let us know how we 
> should
> update. If there are no objections, we will use the form on the right for
> consistency.
> 
> Cipher Suite vs. cipher suite
>   [1 instance of "Cipher suite" at the start of a description
> will remain as is.]
> 
> certificate message (1 instance) vs. Certificate message
>  There is one instance of "certificate message" (lowercase 'c') in
> "server certificate message" in Section 1. Should it be changed to 
> "Certificate message"? Elsewhere it seems this document is using 
> the term as defined in RFC 8446.
> -->
> 
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> RFC Editor/mc/ar
> 
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC9761 (draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-tls-18)
> 
> Title            : Manufacturer Usage Description (MUD) for TLS and DTLS 
> Profiles for Internet of Things (IoT) Devices
> Author(s)        : T. Reddy.K, D. Wing, B. Anderson
> WG Chair(s)      : Henk Birkholz, Joe Clarke
> Area Director(s) : Warren Kumari, Mahesh Jethanandani

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