Hi,

These changes are complete:

https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities

thanks,

Amanda Baber
IANA Operations Manager

On Mon Mar 03 21:37:42 2025, sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org wrote:
> Hi IANA,
> 
> Please make the following updates in the "Border Gateway Protocol
> (BGP) Extended Communities” registry.  Updates are noted below; they
> can also be viewed in <https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9746-
> rfcdiff.html>.
> 
> A) EVPN ESI Label Extended Community Flags
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/bgp-
> extended-communities.xhtml#evpn-esi-label-extended-community-flags
> 
> Old:
> 6-7 Split Horizon Type
> 
> New (hyphen):
> 6-7 Split-Horizon Type
> 
> 
> B) Multihoming Redundancy Mode
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/bgp-
> extended-communities.xhtml#multihoming-redundancy-mode
> 
> Old:
> 00 All-Active mode
> 01 Single-Active mode
> 
> New (remove “mode”):
> 00 All-Active
> 01 Single-Active
> 
> 
> C) Split Horizon Type
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/bgp-
> extended-communities.xhtml#split-horizon-type
> 
> C.1) Old title:
> Split Horizon Type
> 
> New (hyphen):
> Split-Horizon Type
> 
> 
> C.2) Old column header:
> Split Horizon Type Value
> 
> New (hyphen):
> Split-Horizon Type Value
> 
> 
> C.3) Old value 10:
> 10      ESI Label based filtering
> 
> New (hyphen):
> 10      ESI Label-based filtering
> 
> 
> Please let us know if you have any questions.  Otherwise, please let
> us know when the updates are complete.
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/sg
> 
> 
> 
> 
> > On Mar 3, 2025, at 12:03 PM, Wen Lin <w...@juniper.net> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Sandy and Jorge,
> >
> > Thank you for advancing the draft to this stage.
> >
> > I reviewed the latest.  It looks good.   I approve the publication as
> > an RFC.
> >
> > Wen
> >
> >
> > Juniper Business Use Only
> >
> > From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> > Date: Monday, March 3, 2025 at 10:07 AM
> > To: Ali Sajassi (sajassi) <saja...@cisco.com>
> > Cc: Kiran Nagaraj (Nokia) <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>, Jorge Rabadan
> > (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>, RFC Editor <rfc-editor@rfc-
> > editor.org>, Wen Lin <w...@juniper.net>, bess-...@ietf.org <bess-
> > a...@ietf.org>, bess-cha...@ietf.org <bess-cha...@ietf.org>, Jeffrey
> > (Zhaohui) Zhang <zzh...@juniper.net>, Gunter van de Velde (Nokia)
> > <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>, auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746 <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-
> > horizon-11> for your review
> >
> > [External Email. Be cautious of content]
> >
> >
> > Hi Ali,
> >
> > Thank you for your review.  We have noted your approval on the AUTH48
> > page <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > editor.org/auth48/rfc9746__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > b8rfBd5vRCx3kJs0$ >.  We will wait to hear from Wen before continuing
> > with the process.
> >
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/sg
> >
> >
> > > On Mar 2, 2025, at 1:09 PM, Ali Sajassi (sajassi)
> > > <saja...@cisco.com> wrote:
> > >
> > > Hi Sandy,
> > >
> > > I reviewed it and it looked good . Thanks for your work. I approve
> > > the publication of this RFC.
> > >
> > > Cheers,
> > > Ali
> > >
> > > From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> > > Date: Friday, February 28, 2025 at 11:39 AM
> > > To: Kiran Nagaraj (Nokia) <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>
> > > Cc: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>, RFC Editor
> > > <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, w...@juniper.net <w...@juniper.net>,
> > > Ali Sajassi (sajassi) <saja...@cisco.com>, bess-...@ietf.org <bess-
> > > a...@ietf.org>, bess-cha...@ietf.org <bess-cha...@ietf.org>,
> > > zzh...@juniper.net <zzh...@juniper.net>, Gunter van de Velde
> > > (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>, auth48archive@rfc-
> > > editor.org <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> > > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746 <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-
> > > horizon-11> for your review
> > >
> > > Hi Wen and Ali,
> > >
> > > Please note that we await your review of RFC-to-be 9746 before
> > > continuing with the publication process.  Please review and let us
> > > know if any updates are needed or if you approve the RFC for
> > > publication.
> > >
> > > The current files are available here:
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746.xml__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vRFwUxWIg$
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746.txt__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vRQeRvL-8$
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746.pdf__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vR_d3ClH8$
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vRpeiSVBE$
> > >
> > > AUTH48 diffs:
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746-auth48diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vR9rk8n_E$
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vROUPpKvo$  (side by side)
> > >
> > > Comprehensive diffs:
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746-diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vRNyybZAs$
> > >  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > editor.org/authors/rfc9746-rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > b8rfBd5vRxzIodOY$  (side by side)
> > >
> > > Thank you,
> > > RFC Editor/sg
> > >
> > >
> > >
> > > > On Feb 24, 2025, at 10:40 AM, Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-
> > > > editor.org> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Hi Kiran,
> > > >
> > > > Thank you for your review.   We have noted your approval on the
> > > > AUTH48 page <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > > editor.org/auth48/rfc9746__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > > gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > > b8rfBd5vRCx3kJs0$ >.
> > > >
> > > > Thank you,
> > > > RFC Editor/sg
> > > >
> > > >
> > > >> On Feb 24, 2025, at 9:10 AM, Kiran Nagaraj (Nokia)
> > > >> <kiran.naga...@nokia.com> wrote:
> > > >>
> > > >> Hi Sandy,
> > > >> Thank you very much for you work on this. The RFC looks good to
> > > >> me and I approve it for publication.
> > > >>
> > > >> Thanks
> > > >> Kiran
> > > >>
> > > >> -----Original Message-----
> > > >> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> > > >> Sent: Monday, February 24, 2025 8:41 AM
> > > >> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>
> > > >> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Kiran Nagaraj
> > > >> (Nokia) <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>; w...@juniper.net;
> > > >> saja...@cisco.com; bess-...@ietf.org; bess-cha...@ietf.org;
> > > >> zzh...@juniper.net; Gunter van de Velde (Nokia)
> > > >> <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > > >> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746 <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-
> > > >> split-horizon-11> for your review
> > > >>
> > > >> [You don't often get email from sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org.
> > > >> Learn why this is important
> > > >> athttps://urldefense.com/v3/__https://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >> b8rfBd5vRj2C5yYI$ ]
> > > >>
> > > >> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when
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> > > >> for additional information.
> > > >>
> > > >>
> > > >>
> > > >> Hi Jorge,
> > > >>
> > > >> Thank you for your review.  We have noted your approval on the
> > > >> AUTH48 page <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >> editor.org/auth48/rfc9746__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >> b8rfBd5vRCx3kJs0$ >.  Please note that we will wait to hear from
> > > >> your coauthors as well before continuing with the publication
> > > >> process.
> > > >>
> > > >> Thank you,
> > > >> RFC Editor/sg
> > > >>
> > > >>
> > > >>> On Feb 24, 2025, at 2:57 AM, Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)
> > > >>> <jorge.raba...@nokia.com> wrote:
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Hi Sandy,
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Looks good.
> > > >>> I approve the RFC for publication.
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Thanks!
> > > >>> Jorge
> > > >>>
> > > >>> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
> > > >>> Date: Wednesday, February 19, 2025 at 4:31 PM
> > > >>> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>
> > > >>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Kiran Nagaraj
> > > >>> (Nokia)
> > > >>> <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>, w...@juniper.net <w...@juniper.net>,
> > > >>> saja...@cisco.com <saja...@cisco.com>, bess-...@ietf.org
> > > >>> <bess-...@ietf.org>, bess-cha...@ietf.org
> > > >>> <bess-cha...@ietf.org>,zzh...@juniper.net <zzh...@juniper.net>,
> > > >>> Gunter
> > > >>> van de Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>,
> > > >>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> > > >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746
> > > >>> <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-horizon-11> for your review
> > > >>>
> > > >>> [You don't often get email from sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org.
> > > >>> Learn
> > > >>> why this is important at
> > > >>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://aka.ms/LearnAboutSenderIdentification__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vRj2C5yYI$
> > > >>> ]
> > > >>>
> > > >>> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful when
> > > >>> clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL nok.it/ext
> > > >>> for additional information.
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Hi Jorge,
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Thank you for your detailed review.  We have updated the
> > > >>> document based on the replies below, but please review these
> > > >>> followup notes.
> > > >>>
> > > >>> a) We updated the terms as noted here.  However, we left “Local
> > > >>> Bias” and “Split-Horizon Type” in Table 1, and where the values
> > > >>> seemed to refer to the IANA value or the expansion of SHT.
> > > >>> Please review and let us know if any adjustments are needed.
> > > >>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] Since RFC7432 was the first spec that introduced the
> > > >>>> concept, we should probably use “split-horizon”.
> > > >>>> [jorge] if we follow the same reasoning as in (a), we should
> > > >>>> use “local-bias”
> > > >>>> [jorge] “Geneve” based on the same reason.
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>> b) We updated the text to refer to Table 2.  Please let us know
> > > >>> if you prefer otherwise.
> > > >>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] it refers to the multihoming redundancy mode field in
> > > >>>> table
> > > >>>> 2 (of section 5, IANA considerations)
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>> The current files are available here:
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746.xml__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vRFwUxWIg$
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746.txt__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vRQeRvL-8$
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746.pdf__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vR_d3ClH8$
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vRpeiSVBE$
> > > >>>
> > > >>> AUTH48 diffs:
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746-auth48diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vR9rk8n_E$
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746-auth48rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vROUPpKvo$  (side
> > > >>> by side)
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Comprehensive diffs:
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746-diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vRNyybZAs$
> > > >>>  https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>> editor.org/authors/rfc9746-rfcdiff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>> b8rfBd5vRxzIodOY$  (side by
> > > >>> side)
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Please review the updates carefully and let us know if any
> > > >>> corrections are needed or if you approve the RFC for
> > > >>> publication.
> > > >>>
> > > >>> Thank you,
> > > >>> RFC Editor/sg
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>>
> > > >>>> On Feb 18, 2025, at 10:40 AM, Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)
> > > >>>> <jorge.rabadan=40nokia....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Dear RFC-editor team,
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Thank you very much for your work on this.
> > > >>>> Please find our comments to your suggestions below with
> > > >>>> [jorge].
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Thanks!
> > > >>>> Jorge
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
> > > >>>> Date: Monday, February 10, 2025 at 7:36 PM
> > > >>>> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>, Kiran
> > > >>>> Nagaraj
> > > >>>> (Nokia) <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>, w...@juniper.net
> > > >>>> <w...@juniper.net>, saja...@cisco.com <saja...@cisco.com>
> > > >>>> Cc: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>,
> > > >>>> bess-...@ietf.org <bess-...@ietf.org>, bess-cha...@ietf.org
> > > >>>> <bess-cha...@ietf.org>, zzh...@juniper.net
> > > >>>> <zzh...@juniper.net>,
> > > >>>> Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>,
> > > >>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> > > >>>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746
> > > >>>> <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-horizon-11> for your review
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> CAUTION: This is an external email. Please be very careful
> > > >>>> when clicking links or opening attachments. See the URL
> > > >>>> nok.it/ext for additional information.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Authors,
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve
> > > >>>> (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the
> > > >>>> XML file.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that
> > > >>>> appear
> > > >>>> in the title) for use on
> > > >>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>>> editor.org/search__;!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>>> b8rfBd5vR7P8vQMA$ . -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] some keywords:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> EVPN Multihoming, Split Horizon Filtering, Local Bias, ESI,
> > > >>>> encapsulations, SHT
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We see the following terms used in various
> > > >>>> ways in the RFC Series.  This document was consistent in their
> > > >>>> use of the capitalziation for the terms below.  Is this the
> > > >>>> preferred form for future documents related to this subject?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> a) RFC 7432 uses "split-horizon" (lowercase and hyphenated)
> > > >>>> when acting as an adjective appearing before the noun, while
> > > >>>> this document uses the initial-capitalized form without a
> > > >>>> hyphen consistently.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Examples from this document:
> > > >>>> Split Horizon procedure
> > > >>>> Split Horizon filtering
> > > >>>> Split Horizon method
> > > >>>> Split Horizon behavior
> > > >>>> Split Horizon Type (SHT)
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] Since RFC7432 was the first spec that introduced the
> > > >>>> concept, we should probably use “split-horizon”.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> b) "Local Bias" (this document) vs "local-bias" per RFCs 8365
> > > >>>> and
> > > >>>> 9252
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] if we follow the same reasoning as in (a), we should
> > > >>>> use “local-bias”
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> c) "GENEVE" (this document) vs "Geneve" per RFC 8926
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] “Geneve” based on the same reason.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions and
> > > >>>> changes
> > > >>>> regarding the terminology list in Section 1.1.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> a.) We have made some adjustments for readability and to
> > > >>>> demonstrate
> > > >>>> 1:1 relationships between abbreviations and their expansions.
> > > >>>> Please
> > > >>>> carefully review and let us know any objections.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] looks good, thanks.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> b.) We were unable to find the "EVPN Ethernet Auto-Discovery
> > > >>>> per ES route"
> > > >>>> explicitly mentioned in RFC 7432. May we update this item as
> > > >>>> follows
> > > >>>> for accuracy and concision?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> *  A-D per ES route: refers to the EVPN Ethernet Auto-
> > > >>>> Discovery per
> > > >>>>    ES route defined in [RFC7432].
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> A-D per ES route:  Auto-Discovery per Ethernet Segment route
> > > >>>> (as defined in
> > > >>>> [RFC7432]).
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] yes, that’s the one. Thanks.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> c.) Arg.FE2 is mentioned in RFC 9252; however, RFC 9252 says
> > > >>>> that
> > > >>>> "the Arg.FE2 notation [is] introduced in [RFC8986]". Would you
> > > >>>> like
> > > >>>> to update the citation below to RFC 8986?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> *  Arg.FE2: refers to the ESI filtering argument used for
> > > >>>> Split
> > > >>>>    Horizon as specified in [RFC9252].
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] I’d prefer to keep RFC9252. Although first introduced
> > > >>>> in RFC8986, it’s use is really specified in RFC9252.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> d.) Several abbreviations appear in this document but are not
> > > >>>> included in this terminology list (see some examples below).
> > > >>>> Please
> > > >>>> review and let us know if you would like to add these or any
> > > >>>> additional terms to this list.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Type-Length-Value (TLV)
> > > >>>> Route Targets (RTs)
> > > >>>> Provider Edge (PE)
> > > >>>> Customer Edge (CE)
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] yes please, add those to the terminology list.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] The parentheses in the text below seem to
> > > >>>> contain a
> > > >>>> mixture of abbreviations and additional context. For clarity
> > > >>>> and
> > > >>>> readability, may we update as follows?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> The ingress Network Virtualization Edge (NVE) device appends a
> > > >>>> label
> > > >>>> corresponding to the source Ethernet Segment Identifier (ESI
> > > >>>> label)
> > > >>>> during packet encapsulation.  The egress NVE verifies the ESI
> > > >>>> label when
> > > >>>> attempting to forward a multi-destination frame through a
> > > >>>> local
> > > >>>> Ethernet Segment (ES) interface.  If the ESI label matches the
> > > >>>> site
> > > >>>> identifier (ESI) associated with that ES interface, the packet
> > > >>>> is not
> > > >>>> forwarded...
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> The ingress NVE device appends a label corresponding to the
> > > >>>> source ESI
> > > >>>> (the ESI label) during packet encapsulation.  The egress NVE
> > > >>>> verifies
> > > >>>> the ESI label when attempting to forward a multi-destination
> > > >>>> frame
> > > >>>> through a local ES interface. If the ESI label matches the
> > > >>>> site
> > > >>>> identifier (the ESI) associated with that ES interface, then
> > > >>>> the packet
> > > >>>> is not forwarded...
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] your suggestion is good, please go ahead.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity and consistency with other list
> > > >>>> items,
> > > >>>> may we adjust the term "(SR-)MPLS" as seen below?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> This document classifies the tunnel encapsulations used by
> > > >>>> EVPN into:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 1.  IP-based MPLS tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 2.  (SR-)MPLS tunnels, that is, MPLS and Segment Routing with
> > > >>>> MPLS
> > > >>>>     data plane tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 3.  IP tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 4.  SRv6 tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> This document classifies the tunnel encapsulations used by
> > > >>>> EVPN into:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 1.  IP-based MPLS tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 2.  MPLS and SR-MPLS tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 3.  IP tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 4.  SRv6 tunnels
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] yes, go ahead please.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> b.) "(SR-)MPLS" also appears in the instances below. For ease
> > > >>>> of the
> > > >>>> reader, may we update these instances similarly?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Originals:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> *  (SR-)MPLS tunnels only support ESI Label-based Split
> > > >>>> Horizon
> > > >>>>    filtering
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>  | (SR-)MPLS     | ESI Label filtering     | No         | Yes
> > > >>>>  | |
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] sure
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the artwork in Section 2.1 and
> > > >>>> let us
> > > >>>> know what "Section 5" refers to and if any other updates are
> > > >>>> needed. Perhaps this refers to Table 3?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>  RED = "Multihoming Redundancy Mode" field (section 5)
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] it refers to the multihoming redundancy mode field in
> > > >>>> table
> > > >>>> 2 (of section 5, IANA considerations)
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] The figure in Section 2.1 indicates that value
> > > >>>> 11 is "reserved for future use".  However, table 3 (and the
> > > >>>> IANA registry) indicates the value is unassigned.  "Reserved"
> > > >>>> and "Unassigned" have distinct meanings.  Please review "Well-
> > > >>>> Known Registration Status Terminology" in RFC 8126
> > > >>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>>> editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html*section-6__;Iw!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>>> b8rfBd5vRz303NOo$ > and let us know which is correct.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Section 2.1 (double hyphen changed to single hyphen so this
> > > >>>> comment appears correctly in the XML file:
> > > >>>> 1 1  -> reserved for future use
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Table 3:
> > > >>>> | 11    | Unassigned                  |           |
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] please change the figure to “Unassigned”
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] How may we adjust the text below to avoid
> > > >>>> using an
> > > >>>> RFC as an adjective?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>  An egress NVE MUST NOT use an SHT value other than 00 when
> > > >>>>  advertising an A-D per ES route with [RFC9012] Tunnel
> > > >>>> encapsulation
> > > >>>>  types of VXLAN (type 8), NVGRE (type 9), MPLS (type 10), or
> > > >>>> no BGP
> > > >>>>  tunnel encapsulation extended community at all.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps:
> > > >>>>  An egress NVE MUST NOT use an SHT value other than 00 when
> > > >>>>  advertising an A-D per ES route with the following tunnel
> > > >>>> encapsulation
> > > >>>>  types from [RFC9012]: VXLAN (type 8), NVGRE (type 9), MPLS
> > > >>>> (type 10), or no BGP
> > > >>>>  Tunnel Encapsulation Extended Community at all.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] your suggestion looks good to me
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the citations in the text
> > > >>>> below?
> > > >>>> We were unable to find either "Tunnel encapsulation type 19"
> > > >>>> or
> > > >>>> "GENEVE" encapsulation in [RFC9012].  We note that the IANA
> > > >>>> entry refers to RFC 8926 (19  Geneve Encapsulation).
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with
> > > >>>> GENEVE
> > > >>>> encapsulation ([RFC9012], Tunnel encapsulation type 19,
> > > >>>> [I-D.ietf-bess-evpn-geneve]) MAY use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with
> > > >>>> GENEVE
> > > >>>> encapsulation [RFC9012] (and tunnel encapsulation type 19
> > > >>>> [EVPN-GENEVE]) MAY
> > > >>>> use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] Hmm.. I think this is more accurate:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> ORIGINAL:
> > > >>>>  An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with
> > > >>>> GENEVE
> > > >>>>  encapsulation ([RFC9012], Tunnel encapsulation type 19,
> > > >>>>  [I-D.ietf-bess-evpn-geneve]) MAY use an SHT value of 01 or
> > > >>>> 10.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> NEW:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with
> > > >>>> GENEVE
> > > >>>> encapsulation (tunnel encapsulation type 19 in the BGP Tunnel
> > > >>>> Encapsulation attribute [RFC9012]) MAY
> > > >>>> use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] How may we rephrase the title of this section
> > > >>>> to
> > > >>>> avoid using an RFC as an adjective?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 2.4.  Backwards Compatibility With RFC8365 NVEs
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps (no RFC mentioned):
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 2.4.  Backwards Compatibility with NVEs
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Perhaps (RFC mentioned):
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 2.4.  Backwards Compatibility with NVEs from RFC 8365
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] use the latter one please – “2.4.  Backwards
> > > >>>> Compatibility with NVEs from RFC 8365”
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] May we make these registry titles plural?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Multihoming Redundancy Mode -> Multihoming Redundancy Modes
> > > >>>> Split
> > > >>>> Horizon Type -> Split Horizon Types
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] I don’t think so, it reads better the way it is
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Because "mode" is part of the registry and
> > > >>>> column titles, does "mode" need to appear in description?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> From Table 3 and the IANA registry [1]:
> > > >>>>       +=======+=============================+===========+
> > > >>>>       | Value | Multihoming redundancy mode | Reference |
> > > >>>> +=======+=============================+===========+
> > > >>>>       | 00    | All-Active mode             | [RFC7432] |
> > > >>>>       | 01    | Single-Active mode          | [RFC7432] |
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [1]
> > > >>>> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https*3A*2F*2Fww__;JSUl!!NEt6yMaO-
> > > >>>> gk!ErqyiwcvobhfZGnddynq4nkgc3FEiFen7Wf9AQFlv2wWv11b0vnmwSP7OnDfhEUrx3WCFM-
> > > >>>> b8rfBd5vR2IYPsDg$
> > > >>>> w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fbgp-extended-communities%2Fbgp-
> > > >>>> extended-c
> > > >>>> ommunities.xhtml%23multihoming-redundancy-
> > > >>>> mode&data=05%7C02%7Ckiran.
> > > >>>> nagaraj%40nokia.com%7C4f6980c5bf9a4351ccd608dd54f24d2a%7C5d471751967
> > > >>>> 5428d917b70f44f9630b0%7C0%7C0%7C638760122149077373%7CUnknown%7CTWFpb
> > > >>>> GZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI
> > > >>>> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=7XZv%2B8E8kYSZvSG
> > > >>>> cFZAMh00gKiO2DkZa5QJEVpFJOjk%3D&reserved=0
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] no, it does not. You can change those values to “All-
> > > >>>> Active” and “Single-Active” and remove the “mode”.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions and
> > > >>>> changes
> > > >>>> regarding the terminology used in this document:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> a.) We note that the term "MPLSoX" does not appear in this
> > > >>>> document
> > > >>>> after it is introduced in Section 1.  May we remove this term
> > > >>>> from the terminology list?
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>  *  MPLSoX: refers to MPLS over any IP encapsulation.
> > > >>>> Examples are
> > > >>>>     MPLS-over-UDP or MPLS-over-GRE.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] But it appears in the introduction and it may still
> > > >>>> help if the reader does not know what MPLSoX means in the
> > > >>>> introduction… I would leave it.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> b.) FYI - For consistency with RFCs 8402, 8986, and 9252, we
> > > >>>> have updated the terms below as follows. Please review and let
> > > >>>> us know any objections.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Original:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Segment Routing with MPLS data plane (SR-MPLS) Segment Routing
> > > >>>> with
> > > >>>> IPv6 data plane (SRv6)
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Current:
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> SR over MPLS (SR-MPLS)
> > > >>>> Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] sounds good, thanks.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] The references in this document do not appear
> > > >>>> to be sorted.
> > > >>>> Would you like to order them alphanumerically? -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] yes, please
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language"
> > > >>>> portion of
> > > >>>> the online Style Guide
> > > >>>> <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-
> > > >>>> editor.org/styleguide/part2/*inclusive_language__;Iw!!NEt6yMaO-
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> > > >>>> b8rfBd5vRPqqoIkQ$ >
> > > >>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this
> > > >>>> nature typically result in more precise language, which is
> > > >>>> helpful for readers.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but
> > > >>>> this
> > > >>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. -->
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> [jorge] I checked, but couldn’t identify anything to change.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Thank you.
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> RFC Editor
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> On Feb 10, 2025, at 7:28 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
> > > >>>>
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> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Thank you for your cooperation,
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> RFC Editor
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> --------------------------------------
> > > >>>> RFC 9746 (draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-horizon-11)
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Title            : BGP EVPN Multi-Homing Extensions for Split
> > > >>>> Horizon Filtering
> > > >>>> Author(s)        : J. Rabadan, K. Nagaraj, W. Lin, A. Sajassi
> > > >>>> WG Chair(s)      : Matthew Bocci, Stephane Litkowski, Zhaohui
> > > >>>> (Jeffrey) Zhang
> > > >>>>
> > > >>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, John Scudder, Gunter Van de
> > > >>>> Velde
> > > >
> > >
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