Hi Kiran,

Thank you for your review.   We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page 
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9746>. 

Thank you,
RFC Editor/sg


> On Feb 24, 2025, at 9:10 AM, Kiran Nagaraj (Nokia) <kiran.naga...@nokia.com> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Sandy,
> Thank you very much for you work on this. The RFC looks good to me and I 
> approve it for publication.
> 
> Thanks
> Kiran
> 
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> Sent: Monday, February 24, 2025 8:41 AM
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> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746 
> <draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-horizon-11> for your review
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> 
>> On Feb 24, 2025, at 2:57 AM, Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com> 
>> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Sandy,
>> 
>> Looks good.
>> I approve the RFC for publication.
>> 
>> Thanks!
>> Jorge
>> 
>> From: Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
>> Date: Wednesday, February 19, 2025 at 4:31 PM
>> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>
>> Cc: RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>, Kiran Nagaraj (Nokia) 
>> <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>, w...@juniper.net <w...@juniper.net>, 
>> saja...@cisco.com <saja...@cisco.com>, bess-...@ietf.org 
>> <bess-...@ietf.org>, bess-cha...@ietf.org 
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>> van de Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>, 
>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9746 
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>> Hi Jorge,
>> 
>> Thank you for your detailed review.  We have updated the document based on 
>> the replies below, but please review these followup notes.
>> 
>> a) We updated the terms as noted here.  However, we left “Local Bias” and 
>> “Split-Horizon Type” in Table 1, and where the values seemed to refer to the 
>> IANA value or the expansion of SHT.  Please review and let us know if any 
>> adjustments are needed.
>> 
>>> [jorge] Since RFC7432 was the first spec that introduced the concept, we 
>>> should probably use “split-horizon”.
>>> [jorge] if we follow the same reasoning as in (a), we should use 
>>> “local-bias”
>>> [jorge] “Geneve” based on the same reason.
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> b) We updated the text to refer to Table 2.  Please let us know if you 
>> prefer otherwise.
>> 
>>> [jorge] it refers to the multihoming redundancy mode field in table 
>>> 2 (of section 5, IANA considerations)
>> 
>> 
>> 
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>> Please review the updates carefully and let us know if any corrections are 
>> needed or if you approve the RFC for publication.
>> 
>> Thank you,
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>> 
>> 
>> 
>>> On Feb 18, 2025, at 10:40 AM, Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) 
>>> <jorge.rabadan=40nokia....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Dear RFC-editor team,
>>> 
>>> Thank you very much for your work on this.
>>> Please find our comments to your suggestions below with [jorge].
>>> 
>>> Thanks!
>>> Jorge
>>> 
>>> 
>>> From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
>>> Date: Monday, February 10, 2025 at 7:36 PM
>>> To: Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <jorge.raba...@nokia.com>, Kiran Nagaraj 
>>> (Nokia) <kiran.naga...@nokia.com>, w...@juniper.net 
>>> <w...@juniper.net>, saja...@cisco.com <saja...@cisco.com>
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>>> <bess-cha...@ietf.org>, zzh...@juniper.net <zzh...@juniper.net>, 
>>> Gunter van de Velde (Nokia) <gunter.van_de_ve...@nokia.com>, 
>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org<auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
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>>> 
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>>> Authors,
>>> 
>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) 
>>> the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>> 
>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear 
>>> in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] some keywords:
>>> 
>>> EVPN Multihoming, Split Horizon Filtering, Local Bias, ESI, 
>>> encapsulations, SHT
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 2) <!-- [rfced] We see the following terms used in various ways in the RFC 
>>> Series.  This document was consistent in their use of the capitalziation 
>>> for the terms below.  Is this the preferred form for future documents 
>>> related to this subject?
>>> 
>>> a) RFC 7432 uses "split-horizon" (lowercase and hyphenated) when acting as 
>>> an adjective appearing before the noun, while this document uses the 
>>> initial-capitalized form without a hyphen consistently.
>>> 
>>> Examples from this document:
>>> Split Horizon procedure
>>> Split Horizon filtering
>>> Split Horizon method
>>> Split Horizon behavior
>>> Split Horizon Type (SHT)
>>> 
>>> [jorge] Since RFC7432 was the first spec that introduced the concept, we 
>>> should probably use “split-horizon”.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> b) "Local Bias" (this document) vs "local-bias" per RFCs 8365 and 
>>> 9252
>>> 
>>> [jorge] if we follow the same reasoning as in (a), we should use 
>>> “local-bias”
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> c) "GENEVE" (this document) vs "Geneve" per RFC 8926
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] “Geneve” based on the same reason.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions and changes 
>>> regarding the terminology list in Section 1.1.
>>> 
>>> a.) We have made some adjustments for readability and to demonstrate 
>>> 1:1 relationships between abbreviations and their expansions. Please 
>>> carefully review and let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> [jorge] looks good, thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> b.) We were unable to find the "EVPN Ethernet Auto-Discovery per ES route"
>>> explicitly mentioned in RFC 7432. May we update this item as follows 
>>> for accuracy and concision?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>>   *  A-D per ES route: refers to the EVPN Ethernet Auto-Discovery per
>>>      ES route defined in [RFC7432].
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> 
>>>   A-D per ES route:  Auto-Discovery per Ethernet Segment route (as defined 
>>> in
>>>   [RFC7432]).
>>> 
>>> [jorge] yes, that’s the one. Thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> c.) Arg.FE2 is mentioned in RFC 9252; however, RFC 9252 says that 
>>> "the Arg.FE2 notation [is] introduced in [RFC8986]". Would you like 
>>> to update the citation below to RFC 8986?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>>   *  Arg.FE2: refers to the ESI filtering argument used for Split
>>>      Horizon as specified in [RFC9252].
>>> 
>>> [jorge] I’d prefer to keep RFC9252. Although first introduced in RFC8986, 
>>> it’s use is really specified in RFC9252.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> d.) Several abbreviations appear in this document but are not 
>>> included in this terminology list (see some examples below). Please 
>>> review and let us know if you would like to add these or any additional 
>>> terms to this list.
>>> 
>>> Type-Length-Value (TLV)
>>> Route Targets (RTs)
>>> Provider Edge (PE)
>>> Customer Edge (CE)
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] yes please, add those to the terminology list.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] The parentheses in the text below seem to contain a 
>>> mixture of abbreviations and additional context. For clarity and 
>>> readability, may we update as follows?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>>      The ingress Network Virtualization Edge (NVE) device appends a label
>>>      corresponding to the source Ethernet Segment Identifier (ESI label)
>>>      during packet encapsulation.  The egress NVE verifies the ESI label 
>>> when
>>>      attempting to forward a multi-destination frame through a local
>>>      Ethernet Segment (ES) interface.  If the ESI label matches the site
>>>      identifier (ESI) associated with that ES interface, the packet is not
>>>      forwarded...
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> 
>>>       The ingress NVE device appends a label corresponding to the source ESI
>>>       (the ESI label) during packet encapsulation.  The egress NVE verifies
>>>       the ESI label when attempting to forward a multi-destination frame
>>>       through a local ES interface. If the ESI label matches the site
>>>       identifier (the ESI) associated with that ES interface, then the 
>>> packet
>>>       is not forwarded...
>>> 
>>> [jorge] your suggestion is good, please go ahead.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] For clarity and consistency with other list items, 
>>> may we adjust the term "(SR-)MPLS" as seen below?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>>   This document classifies the tunnel encapsulations used by EVPN into:
>>> 
>>>   1.  IP-based MPLS tunnels
>>> 
>>>   2.  (SR-)MPLS tunnels, that is, MPLS and Segment Routing with MPLS
>>>       data plane tunnels
>>> 
>>>   3.  IP tunnels
>>> 
>>>   4.  SRv6 tunnels
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> 
>>>   This document classifies the tunnel encapsulations used by EVPN into:
>>> 
>>>   1.  IP-based MPLS tunnels
>>> 
>>>   2.  MPLS and SR-MPLS tunnels
>>> 
>>>   3.  IP tunnels
>>> 
>>>   4.  SRv6 tunnels
>>> 
>>> [jorge] yes, go ahead please.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> b.) "(SR-)MPLS" also appears in the instances below. For ease of the 
>>> reader, may we update these instances similarly?
>>> 
>>> Originals:
>>> 
>>>   *  (SR-)MPLS tunnels only support ESI Label-based Split Horizon
>>>      filtering
>>> 
>>>   | (SR-)MPLS     | ESI Label filtering     | No         | Yes       |
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] sure
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Please review the artwork in Section 2.1 and let us 
>>> know what "Section 5" refers to and if any other updates are needed. 
>>> Perhaps this refers to Table 3?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>   RED = "Multihoming Redundancy Mode" field (section 5)
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] it refers to the multihoming redundancy mode field in table 
>>> 2 (of section 5, IANA considerations)
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] The figure in Section 2.1 indicates that value 11 is 
>>> "reserved for future use".  However, table 3 (and the IANA registry) 
>>> indicates the value is unassigned.  "Reserved" and "Unassigned" have 
>>> distinct meanings.  Please review "Well-Known Registration Status 
>>> Terminology" in RFC 8126 
>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8126.html#section-6> and let us know 
>>> which is correct.
>>> 
>>> Section 2.1 (double hyphen changed to single hyphen so this comment appears 
>>> correctly in the XML file:
>>> 1 1  -> reserved for future use
>>> 
>>> Table 3:
>>> | 11    | Unassigned                  |           |
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] please change the figure to “Unassigned”
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] How may we adjust the text below to avoid using an 
>>> RFC as an adjective?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>   An egress NVE MUST NOT use an SHT value other than 00 when
>>>   advertising an A-D per ES route with [RFC9012] Tunnel encapsulation
>>>   types of VXLAN (type 8), NVGRE (type 9), MPLS (type 10), or no BGP
>>>   tunnel encapsulation extended community at all.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>>   An egress NVE MUST NOT use an SHT value other than 00 when
>>>   advertising an A-D per ES route with the following tunnel encapsulation
>>>   types from [RFC9012]: VXLAN (type 8), NVGRE (type 9), MPLS (type 10), or 
>>> no BGP
>>>   Tunnel Encapsulation Extended Community at all.
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] your suggestion looks good to me
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] How may we update the citations in the text below? 
>>> We were unable to find either "Tunnel encapsulation type 19" or 
>>> "GENEVE" encapsulation in [RFC9012].  We note that the IANA entry refers to 
>>> RFC 8926 (19  Geneve Encapsulation).
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>>   An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with GENEVE
>>>   encapsulation ([RFC9012], Tunnel encapsulation type 19,
>>>   [I-D.ietf-bess-evpn-geneve]) MAY use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
>>> 
>>> Perhaps:
>>> 
>>>   An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with GENEVE
>>>   encapsulation [RFC9012] (and tunnel encapsulation type 19 [EVPN-GENEVE]) 
>>> MAY
>>>   use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] Hmm.. I think this is more accurate:
>>> 
>>> ORIGINAL:
>>>   An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with GENEVE
>>>   encapsulation ([RFC9012], Tunnel encapsulation type 19,
>>>   [I-D.ietf-bess-evpn-geneve]) MAY use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
>>> 
>>> NEW:
>>> 
>>>   An egress NVE advertising A-D per ES route(s) for an ES with GENEVE
>>>   encapsulation (tunnel encapsulation type 19 in the BGP Tunnel 
>>> Encapsulation attribute [RFC9012]) MAY
>>>   use an SHT value of 01 or 10.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 10) <!-- [rfced] How may we rephrase the title of this section to 
>>> avoid using an RFC as an adjective?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>>     2.4.  Backwards Compatibility With RFC8365 NVEs
>>> 
>>> Perhaps (no RFC mentioned):
>>> 
>>>     2.4.  Backwards Compatibility with NVEs
>>> 
>>> Perhaps (RFC mentioned):
>>> 
>>>     2.4.  Backwards Compatibility with NVEs from RFC 8365
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] use the latter one please – “2.4.  Backwards Compatibility with 
>>> NVEs from RFC 8365”
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] May we make these registry titles plural?
>>> 
>>> Multihoming Redundancy Mode -> Multihoming Redundancy Modes Split 
>>> Horizon Type -> Split Horizon Types
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] I don’t think so, it reads better the way it is
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Because "mode" is part of the registry and column titles, 
>>> does "mode" need to appear in description?
>>> 
>>> From Table 3 and the IANA registry [1]:
>>>        +=======+=============================+===========+
>>>        | Value | Multihoming redundancy mode | Reference |
>>>        +=======+=============================+===========+
>>>        | 00    | All-Active mode             | [RFC7432] |
>>>        | 01    | Single-Active mode          | [RFC7432] |
>>> 
>>> [1] 
>>> https://eur03.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fww
>>> w.iana.org%2Fassignments%2Fbgp-extended-communities%2Fbgp-extended-c
>>> ommunities.xhtml%23multihoming-redundancy-mode&data=05%7C02%7Ckiran.
>>> nagaraj%40nokia.com%7C4f6980c5bf9a4351ccd608dd54f24d2a%7C5d471751967
>>> 5428d917b70f44f9630b0%7C0%7C0%7C638760122149077373%7CUnknown%7CTWFpb
>>> GZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsI
>>> kFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=7XZv%2B8E8kYSZvSG
>>> cFZAMh00gKiO2DkZa5QJEVpFJOjk%3D&reserved=0
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] no, it does not. You can change those values to “All-Active” and 
>>> “Single-Active” and remove the “mode”.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 13) <!-- [rfced] Please review the following questions and changes 
>>> regarding the terminology used in this document:
>>> 
>>> a.) We note that the term "MPLSoX" does not appear in this document 
>>> after it is introduced in Section 1.  May we remove this term from the 
>>> terminology list?
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>>   *  MPLSoX: refers to MPLS over any IP encapsulation.  Examples are
>>>      MPLS-over-UDP or MPLS-over-GRE.
>>> 
>>> [jorge] But it appears in the introduction and it may still help if the 
>>> reader does not know what MPLSoX means in the introduction… I would leave 
>>> it.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> b.) FYI - For consistency with RFCs 8402, 8986, and 9252, we have updated 
>>> the terms below as follows. Please review and let us know any objections.
>>> 
>>> Original:
>>> 
>>> Segment Routing with MPLS data plane (SR-MPLS) Segment Routing with 
>>> IPv6 data plane (SRv6)
>>> 
>>> Current:
>>> 
>>> SR over MPLS (SR-MPLS)
>>> Segment Routing over IPv6 (SRv6)
>>> 
>>> -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] sounds good, thanks.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] The references in this document do not appear to be sorted.
>>> Would you like to order them alphanumerically? -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] yes, please
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
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>>> 
>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this 
>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice. -->
>>> 
>>> [jorge] I checked, but couldn’t identify anything to change.
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
>>> Thank you.
>>> 
>>> RFC Editor
>>> 
>>> 
>>> 
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>>> RFC 9746 (draft-ietf-bess-evpn-mh-split-horizon-11)
>>> 
>>> Title            : BGP EVPN Multi-Homing Extensions for Split Horizon 
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>>> Author(s)        : J. Rabadan, K. Nagaraj, W. Lin, A. Sajassi
>>> WG Chair(s)      : Matthew Bocci, Stephane Litkowski, Zhaohui (Jeffrey) 
>>> Zhang
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>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, John Scudder, Gunter Van de Velde

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