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> On Feb 24, 2025, at 8:24 AM, Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Yang,
> 
> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status 
> page for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9730).
> 
> We will await approvals from the remaining parties listed at the AUTH48 
> status page prior to moving this document forward in the publication process.
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>> On Feb 24, 2025, at 12:55 AM, zhaoyang...@chinamobile.com wrote:
>> 
>> Dear RFC editors,
>> 
>> As one of the authors, I approve the publication of this draft. Please also 
>> mark my approval on the AUTH48 status page.
>> 
>> Thanks
>> 
>> Yang Zhao
>> China Mobile Research Institute
>> From: Sarah Tarrant
>> Date: 2025-02-19 22:25
>> To: xuyun...@caict.ac.cn; zhaoyang...@chinamobile.com; 
>> dieter.bel...@nokia.com
>> CC: Linyi (Yi); rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; teas-...@ietf.org; 
>> teas-cha...@ietf.org; vbee...@juniper.net; james.n.guich...@futurewei.com; 
>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org; Zhenghaomian
>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9730 
>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-17> for your review
>> Authors,
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>> Thank you,
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>>> On Feb 12, 2025, at 10:30 AM, Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
>>> wrote:
>>>> Hi Yi,
>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 
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>>>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9730).
>>>> We await approvals from each of the parties listed at the AUTH48 status 
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>>>> Thank you,
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>>>>> On Feb 12, 2025, at 10:28 AM, Linyi (Yi) <yi....@huawei.com> wrote:
>>>>>> Dear RFC editors,
>>>>>> As one of the authors, I approve the publication of this draft. Please 
>>>>>> also mark my approval on the AUTH48 status page.
>>>> Many thanks for your detailed review on the draft.
>>>>>> B.R.
>>>> Yi LIN
>>>>>> HUAWEI France
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>>>> 主题: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9730 
>>>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-17> for your review
>>>>>> Hi Haomian,
>>>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 
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>>>>>>> On Feb 6, 2025, at 1:58 AM, Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com> 
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>> Dear RFC editors,
>>>>>>>> Thank you for the work, I reviewed the changes and approve the 
>>>>>>>> publication. >>> >>> Best wishes,
>>>>> Haomian
>>>>>>>> -----邮件原件-----
>>>>> 发件人: Sarah Tarrant <starr...@staff.rfc-editor.org>
>>>>> 发送时间: 2025年2月6日 4:38
>>>>> 收件人: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>
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>>>>> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
>>>>> 主题: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9730 >>> 
>>>>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-17> for your review
>>>>>>>> Hi Haomian,
>>>>>>>> Thank you for your reply. We have updated the document accordingly
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>>>>>>>>> On Feb 5, 2025, at 3:20 AM, Zhenghaomian 
>>>>>>>>> <zhenghaomian=40huawei....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>>>>>>>>>> Dear RFC Editors,
>>>>>>>>>> Just back from Chinese spring festival, thank you for the work, 
>>>>>>>>>> please see the responses inline. Could you please help integrate it 
>>>>>>>>>> into the XML?
>>>>>>>>>> Best wishes,
>>>>>> Haomian (on behalf of authors & contributors)
>>>>>>>>>> -----邮件原件-----
>>>>>> 发件人: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>
>>>>>> 发送时间: 2025年1月30日 7:08
>>>>>> 收件人: Zhenghaomian <zhenghaom...@huawei.com>; xuyun...@caict.ac.cn; >>>> 
>>>>>> zhaoyang...@chinamobile.com; dieter.bel...@nokia.com; Linyi (Yi) >>>> 
>>>>>> <yi....@huawei.com>
>>>>>> 抄送: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org; teas-...@ietf.org; >>>> 
>>>>>> teas-cha...@ietf.org; vbee...@juniper.net; >>>> 
>>>>>> james.n.guich...@futurewei.com; auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
>>>>>> 主题: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9730
>>>>>> <draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-17> for your review
>>>>>>>>>> Authors,
>>>>>>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>>>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>>>>>>> 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear 
>>>>>>>>>> >>>> in the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> 
>>>>>>>>>> [Haomian] please help adding keywords: architecture, ACTN, control 
>>>>>>>>>> plane.
>>>>>>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] To make a 1:1 matchup between the acronyms and their 
>>>>>>>>>> expansions, may we remove "protocol" from the definitions below?
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>> IS-IS   Intermediate System to Intermediate System protocol
>>>>>> ...
>>>>>> OSPF    Open Shortest Path First protocol >>>> >>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> IS-IS:   Intermediate System to Intermediate System
>>>>>> ...
>>>>>> OSPF:    Open Shortest Path First
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] Yes, please remove the 'protocol'. >>>> >>>> 3) <!-- [rfced] 
>>>>>> To match Section 3.2, may we add a reference to RFC 7950 after "YANG" in 
>>>>>> the following sentence in Section 3.3?
>>>>>>>>>> Additionally, as "/" can mean "and", "or", or "and/or", may we 
>>>>>>>>>> update the text for clarity?
>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>> For domain 1, the network elements were not enabled with GMPLS so >>>> 
>>>>>> the  control is purely from the controller, via Network Configuration  
>>>>>> >>>> Protocol (NETCONF) [RFC6241] / YANG and/or PCE Communication 
>>>>>> Protocol
>>>>>> (PCEP) [RFC5440].
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> For domain 1, the network elements were not enabled with GMPLS, so >>>> 
>>>>>> the  control is purely from the controller, via Network Configuration 
>>>>>> >>>> Protocol
>>>>>> (NETCONF) [RFC6241], YANG [RFC7950], and/or PCE Communication >>>> 
>>>>>> Protocol (PCEP)  [RFC5440].
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] if we look at the figure 1, NETCONF/YANG ("/" means "and" 
>>>>>> here) is one option while PCEP is another, but the proposal text seems 
>>>>>> there are 3 options. How about following? >>>> NEW
>>>>>> For domain 1, the network elements were not enabled with GMPLS, so >>>> 
>>>>>> the  control is purely from the controller, via Network Configuration 
>>>>>> >>>> Protocol
>>>>>> (NETCONF) [RFC6241] with YANG [RFC7950] data model, and/or PCE >>>> 
>>>>>> Communication  Protocol (PCEP) [RFC5440].
>>>>>>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] To clarify "label inter-domain information", may we 
>>>>>>>>>> update the text as follows?
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>> Once the orchestrator(MD) has
>>>>>> computed the E2E path, RSVP-TE or PCEP can be used in the different  
>>>>>> >>>> domains to set up the related segment tunnel consisting of label  
>>>>>> >>>> inter-domain information...
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> Once the orchestrator(MD) has
>>>>>> computed the E2E path, RSVP-TE or PCEP can be used in the different  
>>>>>> >>>> domains to set up the related segment tunnel consisting of >>>> 
>>>>>> information  about inter-domain labels...
>>>>>> -->   >>>> [Haomian] Yes this is more clear. >>>> >>>> 5) <!--[rfced] In 
>>>>>> the following sentence, is the intention that any topology-related YANG 
>>>>>> module can be used? Or should a specific topology-related YANG module be 
>>>>>> cited here? >>>> >>>> Original:
>>>>>> If the resources of inter-domain links are managed by the  >>>> 
>>>>>> orchestrator(MD), each domain controller can provide to the
>>>>>> orchestrator(MD) the list of available labels (e.g. timeslots if OTN  
>>>>>> >>>> is the scenario) using the IETF Topology YANG model and related  
>>>>>> >>>> technology specific extension.
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> If the resources of inter-domain links are managed by the  >>>> 
>>>>>> Orchestrator(MD), each domain controller can provide to the
>>>>>> Orchestrator(MD) the list of available labels (e.g., time slots if >>>> 
>>>>>> the  OTN is the scenario) using a topology-related YANG module and a 
>>>>>> >>>> specific  technology-related extension.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] The YANG module to be used depends on the network switching 
>>>>>> technology, I think the proposed text this is more clear, but I prefer 
>>>>>> to make it plural.
>>>>>> NEW: >>>> If the resources of inter-domain links are managed by the  
>>>>>> >>>> Orchestrator(MD), each domain controller can provide to the
>>>>>> Orchestrator(MD) the list of available labels (e.g., time slots if >>>> 
>>>>>> the  OTN is the scenario) using topology-related YANG modules and >>>> 
>>>>>> specific  technology-related extensions.
>>>>>>>>>> 6) <!-- [rfced] Table 1: Note that we converted the text table into 
>>>>>>>>>> <table> format.  It seems the notes related to the dotted boxes (in 
>>>>>>>>>> the original text table) appear in the bulleted list after the 
>>>>>>>>>> table.  We have updated the table and notes slightly to fit with the 
>>>>>>>>>> updated <table> format.
>>>>>> Please review and let us know if any corrections are needed.
>>>>>>>>>> In addition, may we remove "(Not applicable)" from the table header, 
>>>>>>>>>> as it seems redundant with the text that follows?
>>>>>>>>>> Current:
>>>>>> Single PCE (Not applicable)
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> Single PCE
>>>>>> -->     >>>> [Haomian] I am good with the change. >>>> >>>> 7) 
>>>>>> <!--[rfced] To improve readability, may we update this sentence as 
>>>>>> follows?
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>> These two models are still possible to be used, although they are >>>> 
>>>>>> not  the main methods.
>>>>>>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>>> It is still possible to use these two models, although they are not  
>>>>>> >>>> the main methods.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] I am good with the change.
>>>>>>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] It appears that [YANG-TE] (draft-ietf-teas-yang-te) 
>>>>>>>>>> does not have a Section 3.3.2. Please review and let us know how 
>>>>>>>>>> this citation should be updated. >>>> >>>> Current:
>>>>>> The Orchestrator(ML) is responsible to decide the creation of  H-LSP 
>>>>>> >>>> in the lower-layer network if it acts as a VNTM.  Then it  requests 
>>>>>> >>>> the L-Controller to create the H-LSP via, for example,  MPI 
>>>>>> interface >>>> under the ACTN architecture.  See Section 3.3.2 of  
>>>>>> [YANG-TE].
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] I see [YANG-TE] removed the original 3.3.2 about "Tunnel 
>>>>>> hierarchical link endpoint", so I would propose to remove the last 
>>>>>> sentence and citation. >>>> >>>> 9) <!-- [rfced] FYI - For reference 
>>>>>> [G.808.1], we added the URL:
>>>>>> https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-G.808.1-201405-I/en. Please let us know if 
>>>>>> there is any objection.
>>>>>>>>>> Original:
>>>>>> [G.808.1] ITU-T, "Generic protection switching - Linear trail and >>>>   
>>>>>>        subnetwork protection", G.808.1, May 2014. >>>> >>>> Current:
>>>>>> [G.808.1]  ITU-T, "Generic protection switching - Linear trail and
>>>>>>          subnetwork protection", ITU-T Recommendation G.808.1, May
>>>>>>          2014, <https://www.itu.int/rec/T-REC-G.808.1-201405-I/en>.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] I am good with the change.
>>>>>>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] FYI - We have added expansions for the following 
>>>>>>>>>> abbreviations per Section 3.6 of RFC 7322 ("RFC Style Guide"). 
>>>>>>>>>> Please review each expansion in the document carefully to ensure 
>>>>>>>>>> correctness.
>>>>>>>>>> Link State Advertisement (LSA)
>>>>>> Representational State Transfer (REST)
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] Yes these are correct.
>>>>>>>>>> 11) <!-- [rfced] Terminology
>>>>>>>>>> a) We have received guidance from Benoit Claise and the YANG Doctors 
>>>>>>>>>> that "YANG module" and "YANG data model" are preferred. We have 
>>>>>>>>>> updated the text to use these forms.  Please review.
>>>>>>>>>> b) Should instances of "LMP protocol" be updated to simply read 
>>>>>>>>>> "LMP" to avoid redundancy (if expanded, "LMP protocol" would read 
>>>>>>>>>> "Link Management Protocol protocol")? >>>> >>>> c) Similarly, should 
>>>>>>>>>> instances of "MPI interface" be updated to simply read "MPI"
>>>>>> (if expanded, "MPI interface" would read "MDSC to PNC Interface 
>>>>>> interface")?
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] I am good with all the 3 changes above. >>>> >>>> 12) <!-- 
>>>>>> [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of >>>> the 
>>>>>> online Style Guide >>>> 
>>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
>>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed.  Updates of this nature 
>>>>>> typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers.
>>>>>>>>>> For example, please consider whether "Man in the Middle" should be 
>>>>>>>>>> updated.
>>>>>> -->
>>>>>> [Haomian] I am not an expert on inclusive language, and I did not find 
>>>>>> anything need to be updated after checking the guideline. >>>> Regarding 
>>>>>> 'Man in the Middle', see 
>>>>>> https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Man-in-the-middle_attack and I don't think 
>>>>>> we can change the term so I personally prefer to keep it. If really 
>>>>>> matters, I am also fine to remove it from the sentence. >>>> >>>> >>>> 
>>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>>>>>>> RFC Editor/st/ap
>>>>>>>>>>>>>> On Jan 29, 2025, at 3:06 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
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>>>>>>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>>> RFC9730 (draft-ietf-teas-gmpls-controller-inter-work-17)
>>>>>>>>>> Title            : Interworking of GMPLS Control and Centralized 
>>>>>>>>>> Controller Systems
>>>>>> Author(s)        : H. Zheng, Y. Xu, Y. Zhao, D. Beller, Y. Lin
>>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Oscar Gonzalez de Dios, Vishnu Pavan Beeram, Lou 
>>>>>> Berger
>>>>>>>>>> Area Director(s) : Jim Guichard, John Scudder, Gunter Van de Velde
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