Thank you Megan. As usual it was a pleasure working with the RFC Editor. I
am grateful for your professionalism and attention to detail.
-rohan

On Thu, Feb 6, 2025 at 9:39 AM Megan Ferguson <
mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:

> Hi Rohan,
>
> Thanks for pointing that out.  We’ve refreshed and reposted as requested.
>
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> message, we have updated the AUTH48 status page and will move the document
> forward in the publication process at this time.
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>
>
> > On Feb 5, 2025, at 2:58 PM, Rohan Mahy <rohan.m...@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Megan,
> > I have reviewed all four versions of the document just now and the diffs.
> >
> > It appears that the bibxml entry for draft-barnes-mimi-identity-arch was
> cached. If I look at this URL (from the XML file), I see the I-D was
> published in Feb 2025:
> >
> https://bib.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml3/reference.I-D.barnes-mimi-identity-arch.xml
> >
> > Other than refreshing the reference across the text, HTML, and PDF
> versions of the document, everything else is ready for publication.
> > Many thanks,
> > -rohan
> >
> > On Wed, Feb 5, 2025 at 1:34 PM Megan Ferguson <
> mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > Hi Rohan,
> >
> > Thank you for sending along the file.  We have adopted this version with
> a minor update: we lowercased Extended Key Purpose in Section 4 to match
> the other uses in the document.
> >
> > As our other queries were removed from the XML, we believe that you have
> reviewed them and have no further comments/updates related to the queries;
> thus, we have marked them as resolved.
> >
> > With regard to the update to the pagination of the PDF: apologies, but
> we are unable to make a change such as the one you requested at this time.
> >
> > Please review the files below carefully and let us know if you had any
> further updates you’d like to make or approval of the document in its
> current form.
> >
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> >
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> >
> >
> >
> > > On Feb 4, 2025, at 5:07 PM, Rohan Mahy <rohan.m...@gmail.com> wrote:
> > >
> > > FYI: draft-barnes-mimi-identity-arch-02 has been submitted
> > >
> > > Thanks,
> > > -rohan
> > >
> > > On Tue, Feb 4, 2025 at 2:44 PM Rohan Mahy <rohan.m...@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> > > Hi,
> > > Attached is my revised XML file with some minor changes.
> > >
> > > 1) I am updating draft-barnes-mimi-identity-arch so it will no longer
> be an expired draft. I already submitted a PR for my intended changes. My
> co-author should review it today or tomorrow. Once it is submitted, I will
> let you know
> > >
> > > 2) The XML, HTML, and TXT versions look good. The PDF version has the
> section headings for References and Normative References at the end of one
> page with the references starting on the next one. If it is straightforward
> to start Section 6 on the next page, that seems desirable.
> > >
> > > Many thanks,
> > > -rohan
> > >
> > > On Tue, Feb 4, 2025 at 7:46 AM Megan Ferguson <
> mfergu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> > > Thanks for the guidance, Rohan and Russ!
> > >
> > > We will await Rohan’s updated XML file with further changes.
> > >
> > > Thank you.
> > >
> > > RFC Editor/mf
> > >
> > > > On Feb 4, 2025, at 8:16 AM, Russ Housley <hous...@vigilsec.com>
> wrote:
> > > >
> > > > Rohan and RFC Editor:
> > > >
> > > > 1) <!--[rfced] We note a small discrepancy between the ASN.1 snippet
> in
> > > >>      Section 3 and the ASN.1 in Appendix A: the { character at the
> end
> > > >>      of the "id-kp" line in Section 3 is on the following line in
> the
> > > >>      Appendix.  Please review and let us know if/how to make these
> > > >>      consistent.  Might it be possible to simply point the reader to
> > > >>      Appendix A instead of repeating the code?
> > > >>
> > > >> Original (Section 3):
> > > >> id-kp  OBJECT IDENTIFIER  ::= {
> > > >>   iso(1) identified-organization(3) dod(6) internet(1)
> > > >>   security(5) mechanisms(5) pkix(7) kp(3) }
> > > >>
> > > >> id-kp-imUri OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { id-kp TBD1 }
> > > >>
> > > >> Original (Appendix A):
> > > >> id-kp OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::=
> > > >>   { iso(1) identified-organization(3) dod(6) internet(1)
> > > >>     security(5) mechanisms(5) pkix(7) kp(3) }
> > > >>
> > > >>
> > > >> id-kp-imUri OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { id-kp TBD1 }
> > > >>
> > > >> -->
> > > >> I followed the formatting conventions of other similar
> registrations, including RFC9509, which is the most recent registration of
> an Extended Key Purpose. It also places the opening curly brace in a
> different location in the textual definition than it does in the MIB. I
> would tend to keep the status quo unless there is consensus otherwise from
> the chairs and ADs.
> > > >
> > > > Both formats will work.  ASN.1 compilers will be fine with either
> one.
> > > >
> > > > Russ
> > >
> >
>
>
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