Rohan,
While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the
following questions, which are also in the XML file.
1) <!--[rfced] We note a small discrepancy between the ASN.1 snippet in
Section 3 and the ASN.1 in Appendix A: the { character at the end
of the "id-kp" line in Section 3 is on the following line in the
Appendix. Please review and let us know if/how to make these
consistent. Might it be possible to simply point the reader to
Appendix A instead of repeating the code?
Original (Section 3):
id-kp OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= {
iso(1) identified-organization(3) dod(6) internet(1)
security(5) mechanisms(5) pkix(7) kp(3) }
id-kp-imUri OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { id-kp TBD1 }
Original (Appendix A):
id-kp OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::=
{ iso(1) identified-organization(3) dod(6) internet(1)
security(5) mechanisms(5) pkix(7) kp(3) }
id-kp-imUri OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { id-kp TBD1 }
-->
2) <!--[rfced] Might it be beneficial to the reader to replace "This"
with the antecedent? If so, we will also use the necessary <tt>
marking in the xml.
Original:
This extended key purpose does not introduce new security risks but
instead reduces existing security risks by providing means to identify
if the certificate is generated to sign IM identity credentials.
Perhaps:
The KeyPurposeId id-kp-imUri does not introduce new security risks;
instead, it reduces existing security risks by providing means to
identify if the certificate is generated to sign IM identity
credentials.
-->
3) <!-- [rfced] We had the following questions regarding the IANA
Considerations section:
a) Please review the citation to the Security Considerations section
in the following text:
Original:
IANA is requested to register the following OIDs in the "SMI Security
for PKIX Extended Key Purpose" registry (1.3.6.1.5.5.7.3). These OIDs
are defined in Section 4.
Section 3 defines the "KeyPurposeId id-kp-imUri". We will update
unless we hear objection.
b) We note that the first paragraph of the IANA Considerations spoke
of OIDs (plural), but we see only one registration in the IANA
registry mentioned. We have updated to use the singular. Please
review that this is as intended.
-->
4) <!--[rfced] We had the following comments regarding abbreviation use
in this document:
a) Please note that we have expanded the following abbreviations.
Please review and let us know any objections.
XMPP - Extensible Messaging and Presence Protocol
b) Please note that we have updated frequently used expanded
abbreviations to remove their expansions after first use in accordance
with the guidance at
https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#exp_abbrev.-->
5) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "type" attribute of each sourcecode
element in the XML file to ensure correctness. If the current
list of preferred values for "type"
(https://www.rfc-editor.org/rpc/wiki/doku.php?id=sourcecode-types)
does not contain an applicable type, then feel free to let us
know. Also, it is acceptable to leave the "type" attribute not
set.
Particularly, note that we have updated an <artwork> tag in Section 3
to instead appear as <sourcecode>. Please review and let us know any
objections.
-->
6) <!--[rfced] Please note that we have added a single pair of <tt> tags
around a use of id-kp-imUri for consistency. Please let us know
any objections.-->
7) <!--[rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the
online Style Guide
<https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this
nature typically result in more precise language, which is
helpful for readers.
Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this
should still be reviewed as a best practice.
-->
Thank you.
RFC Editor/mf
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RFC9734 (draft-ietf-lamps-im-keyusage-04)
Title : X.509 Certificate Extended Key Usage (EKU) for Instant
Messaging URIs
Author(s) : R. Mahy
WG Chair(s) : Russ Housley, Tim Hollebeek
Area Director(s) : Deb Cooley, Paul Wouters
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