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Please review mail in this thread and let us know if we can be of assistance during your AUTH48 review. Thank you. RFC Editor/mf > On Dec 2, 2024, at 12:08 PM, Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@amsl.com> wrote: > > Authors, > > Just a friendly reminder that this document awaits author action. > > Please see the AUTH48 status page at http://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9627. > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/mf > > >> On Nov 4, 2024, at 3:54 PM, Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@amsl.com> wrote: >> >> [Removing Ben and adding Zahed and Murray] >> >> Authors, >> >> Please see mail below regarding this document as well as our cluster-wide >> email with questions relating to all three related documents. >> >> This document set has been in AUTH48 since mid-August. Please let us know >> if there is anything we can do to facilitate moving the AUTH48 review >> forward. >> >> Thank you. >> >> RFC Editor/mf >> >>> On Oct 21, 2024, at 9:58 AM, Megan Ferguson <mfergu...@amsl.com> wrote: >>> >>> All, >>> >>> Just a friendly reminder that this document (and its companions) requires >>> further author action. 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It is designed to >>>>>> allow a receiver of a layered media stream to request that one or more >>>>>> of its substreams be refreshed, such that it can then be decoded by an >>>>>> endpoint which previously was not receiving those layers, without >>>>>> requiring that the entire stream be refreshed (as it would be if the >>>>>> receiver sent a Full Intra Request (FIR); [RFC5104] see also >>>>>> [RFC8082]). >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> This memo describes an RTCP [RFC3550] Payload-Specific Feedback >>>>>> Message [RFC4585] "Layer Refresh Request" (LRR), which is designed to >>>>>> allow a receiver of a layered media stream to request that one or more >>>>>> of its substreams be refreshed. As such, it can then be decoded by an >>>>>> endpoint that previously was not receiving those layers, without >>>>>> requiring that the entire stream be refreshed (as it would be if the >>>>>> receiver sent a Full Intra Request (FIR); [RFC5104] see also >>>>>> [RFC8082]). >>>>>> >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions regarding Section 2. >>>>>> Section 2 was titled "Conventions, Definitions, and Acronyms". >>>>>> It contains the BCP 14 boilerplate and a single subsection that >>>>>> is titled "Terminology". >>>>>> >>>>>> a) There is no list of acronyms in this section. Please review our >>>>>> updates to the title of this section and let us know any objections >>>>>> (of if a list of abbreviations was missing). >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> Conventions, Definitions and Acronyms >>>>>> >>>>>> Current: >>>>>> Conventions and Terminology >>>>>> >>>>>> b) We see several terms throughout the document that it may be useful >>>>>> to include in this section (as they are seemingly introduced in >>>>>> sections that follow). For example: >>>>>> >>>>>> temporally nested >>>>>> Layer Index >>>>>> temporal ID >>>>>> layer ID >>>>>> >>>>>> Please let us know if you'd like to add any terms to the Terminology >>>>>> section. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 4) <!--[rfced] Please review if the slash in the following to see if >>>>>> "and", "or", or "and/or" might be clearer. >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> A sender MAY request an upgrade in both temporal and spatial/quality >>>>>> layers simultaneously. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 5) <!-- [rfced] Please review whether any of the notes in this document >>>>>> should be in the <aside> element. It is defined as "a container >>>>>> for content that is semantically less important or tangential to >>>>>> the content that surrounds it" >>>>>> (https://authors.ietf.org/en/rfcxml-vocabulary#aside). >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] In the text below, are you referring to the title of the >>>>>> document? >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> If the payload also specifies how it is used with the Frame Marking >>>>>> RTP Header Extension [I-D.ietf-avtext-framemarking], the syntax MUST >>>>>> be defined in the same manner as the TID and LID fields in that >>>>>> header. >>>>>> >>>>>> Perhaps: >>>>>> If the payload also specifies how it is used with "Video Frame Marking >>>>>> RTP Header Extension" [RFC9626], the syntax MUST be defined in the >>>>>> same manner as the TID and LID fields in that header. >>>>>> >>>>>> Or perhaps: >>>>>> If the payload also specifies how it is used with the [Video?] Frame >>>>>> Marking RTP Header Extension described in [RFC9626], the syntax MUST >>>>>> be defined in the same manner as the TID and LID fields in that >>>>>> header. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 7) <!--[rfced] Section 3.7 of RFC 7656 is not titled "RTP Taxonomy" but >>>>>> instead "Layered Multi-Stream". Please review this citation for >>>>>> clarity/accuracy. >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> The RTP Taxonomy [RFC7656] Section 3.7 defines three mechanisms: >>>>>> Single RTP Stream on a Single Media Transport (SRST), Multiple RTP >>>>>> Streams on a Single Media Transport (MRST), and Multiple RTP Streams >>>>>> on Multiple Media Transports (MRMT). >>>>>> >>>>>> Perhaps (caps also edited to match RFC 7656): >>>>>> Section 3.7 of "The RTP Taxonomy" [RFC7656] defines three mechanisms: >>>>>> Single RTP stream on a Single media Transport (SRST), Multiple RTP >>>>>> streams on a Single media Transport (MRST), and Multiple RTP streams >>>>>> on Multiple media Transports (MRMT). >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 8) <!--[rfced] In the following, please clarify the antecedent of "it". >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> For MRMT, it is sent on the RTP session on which this stream is sent. >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] We note that only Figure 9 has a title. Please review if >>>>>> you would like all figures to have titles (and supply them) or >>>>>> if the title of Figure 9 should be removed for consistency. --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to the >>>>>> abbreviations and initialisms used throughout the document: >>>>>> >>>>>> a) In the following equation, will it be clear to the reader what TO >>>>>> and TN refer to? >>>>>> >>>>>> TID = TO and target TID = TN >>>>>> >>>>>> If these are abbreviations, they should be expanded on first use (per >>>>>> RFC 7322). >>>>>> >>>>>> b) We see: >>>>>> >>>>>> CLID - Current Layer ID >>>>>> >>>>>> and also Current Layer Index (or current layer indices or layer >>>>>> indices) >>>>>> >>>>>> Please review these occurrences and let us know if they should be made >>>>>> uniform. >>>>>> >>>>>> c) We have expanded these abbreviations as follows. Please let us >>>>>> know any objections. >>>>>> >>>>>> FCI - Feedback Control Information >>>>>> SSRC - Synchronization Source >>>>>> PLI - Picture Loss Indication >>>>>> NAL - Network Abstraction Layer >>>>>> PACSI - Payload Content Scalability Information >>>>>> IDR - Instantaneous Decoding Refresh >>>>>> SDP - Session Description Protocol >>>>>> >>>>>> d) We will update the following to be consistent with the first line >>>>>> (below) in capping and initialism formation throughout the document. >>>>>> We will remove the citations after the first use (outside the >>>>>> Abstract). Please let us know any objections. >>>>>> >>>>>> RTCP Payload-Specific Feedback Message >>>>>> RTCP [RFC3550] Payload-Specific Feedback Message [RFC4585] >>>>>> RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) [RFC3550] payload-specific feedback message >>>>>> RTP Control Protocol (RTCP) [RFC3550] payload-specific feedback message >>>>>> [RFC4585] >>>>>> >>>>>> e) FYI: We've updated the usage of "LRR" by adding an article (i.e., >>>>>> "the" or "an") before it for consistency with the majority of uses in >>>>>> this >>>>>> document (primarily in Sections 3.2 and 4). Please let us know if this >>>>>> is in error. >>>>>> >>>>>> Original: >>>>>> Upon reception of LRR, the encoder MUST send a.. >>>>>> ... >>>>>> In order for LRR to be used with a scalable codec >>>>>> ... >>>>>> Senders which support receiving LRR for non-temporally-nested streams >>>>>> MUST... >>>>>> >>>>>> Updated: >>>>>> Upon reception of an LRR, the encoder MUST send a.. >>>>>> ... >>>>>> In order for an LRR to be used with a scalable codec >>>>>> ... >>>>>> Senders that support receiving LRRs for non-temporally-nested streams >>>>>> MUST... >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We had the following questions related to the terminology >>>>>> used throughout the document. >>>>>> >>>>>> a) Please review the way field names are treated with regard to >>>>>> capitalization and quotation and let us know if/how they should be >>>>>> made uniform. >>>>>> >>>>>> For example, we see: >>>>>> >>>>>> "R" field >>>>>> "RES" field >>>>>> layer index field >>>>>> LayerId field vs. layer ID field vs. LID field (see related cluster >>>>>> query) >>>>>> "media source" field >>>>>> "Current Temporal Layer ID (CTID)" and "Current Layer ID (CLID)" fields >>>>>> payload type field >>>>>> "SSRC of packet sender" field >>>>>> DID, QID, and TID fields >>>>>> --> >>>>>> >>>>>> >>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the >>>>>> online Style Guide >>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> >>>>>> and let us know if any changes are needed. 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