I approve,

Thanks everyone for working this out and catching it before the RFC went
out.

Paul

On Thu, Dec 5, 2024 at 12:45 PM Karen Moore <kmo...@amsl.com> wrote:

> Hi Mike and *Paul (AD),
>
> Thanks for providing the updated XML file. The changes are now reflected
> in our files. Hannes and Orie, we will assume your assent to these changes
> unless we hear otherwise.
>
> *Paul, please review the following changes and let us know if you approve
> (we updated item 3 and added item 4; see Mike’s explanation for the new
> changes in the thread below). The updates can also be viewed here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html.
>
> 1) Section 5.1
>
> OLD:
>   The COSE Key Thumbprint is a digest of the essential parameters required
>   to represent the key as a COSE Key, rather than any additional data that
>   might accompany the key.
>
> NEW:
>   The COSE Key Thumbprint is a digest of the ordered essential
>   parameters needed to represent a COSE Key, with all other
>   parameters excluded.
>
> ...
> 2) Section 5.3
>
> OLD:
>   Any party in possession of a key that is represented as a COSE Key can
>   use the COSE Key Thumbprint.
>
> NEW:
>   The only prerequisites are that the COSE_Key representation
>   of the key be defined and the party creating the COSE Key Thumbprint
>   be in possession of the necessary key material.
>
> …
> 3) Addition of Section 5.5
>
> NEW:
>   5.5 Relationship to JSON Web Key Thumbprints
>
>    The ckt of a COSE Key, as described in Section 7 of [RFC9052], and
>    the jkt of a JSON Web Key, as described in Section 4 of [RFC7517],
>    are different even when the underlying cryptographic key material is
>    the same.
>
>    This document does not register a JWT confirmation method [RFC7800]
>    for using "ckt" as a confirmation method for a JWT or a CWT
>    confirmation method [RFC8747] for using "jkt" as a confirmation
>    method for a CWT.
>
> ...
> 4) Section 5.6 - please review the file for the changes to this section.
>
> …
> 5) Section 8
>
> OLD:
>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
>   JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
>
> NEW:
>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
>   JWT Confirmation Method Name: (none)
>
>
> —FILES (please refresh)—
>
> The updated XML file is here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.xml
>
> The updated output files are here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.txt
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.pdf
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.html
>
> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html
>
> These diff files show only changes made during the last edit round:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastdiff.html
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastrfcdiff.html
>
> This diff file shows all changes made to date:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-diff.html
>
> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9679
>
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/kc
>
>
> > On Dec 4, 2024, at 3:08 PM, Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > Folks, I hate to do this, but in reviewing the newly added section, I
> realized that it was incorrectly using the term "claim".  In both RFC 7800
> and RFC 8747, "cnf" is a claim, whereas the JWT and CWT confirmation
> members are referred to as "members" - not "claims".  Then I realized there
> other places in the draft this the term "claim" was incorrectly used.
> >
> > The attached updated source file makes the needed corrections.  For
> easier reviewing, a diff from the RFC Editor's source also follows.
> >
> > RFC Editor, please apply these edits and send out a new draft for review.
> >
> >                                Thanks,
> >                        -- Mike (writing as a COSE chair)
> >
> > diff rfc9679.xml rfc9679_mbj.xml
> > 46c46
> > <     <date year="2024" month="October"/>
> > ---
> >>    <date year="2024" month="December"/>
> > 284,285c284,288
> > <    This document does not register a JWT claim for using ckt as a
> confirmation
> > <    method for a JWT or a CWT claim for using jkt as a confirmation
> method for a CWT.
> > ---
> >>   This document does not register
> >>   a JWT confirmation method <xref target="RFC7800"/>
> >>   for using "ckt" as a confirmation method for a JWT
> >>   or a CWT confirmation method <xref target="RFC8747"/>
> >>   for using "jkt" as a confirmation method for a CWT.
> > 293,294c296,297
> > <         <t>The proof-of-possession key is identified using the "ckt"
> claim,
> > < the COSE Key Thumbprint claim. This claim contains the value of
> > ---
> >>        <t>The proof-of-possession key is identified using the "ckt"
> member of
> >> the CWT confirmation claim "cnf". This member contains the value of
> > 299c302
> > < claim. In this approach, the issuer of a CWT declares that the
> > ---
> >> member. In this approach, the issuer of a CWT declares that the
> > 302c305
> > <       of the key by including a "ckt" claim in the CWT.</t>
> > ---
> >> of the key by including a "ckt" CWT confirmation method member in the
> CWT.</t>
> > 304c307
> > <         <t>The following example demonstrates the use of the "ckt"
> claim
> > ---
> >>        <t>The following example demonstrates the use of the "ckt" member
> > 319,320c322,323
> > <         <t><xref target="IANA"/> registers the "ckt" claim and the
> confirmation method.
> > < The "ckt" claim is expected to be used in the "cnf" claim.</t>
> > ---
> >>        <t><xref target="IANA"/> registers the "ckt" CWT confirmation
> method member.
> >> The "ckt" member is used in the "cnf" claim.</t>
> > 510a514
> >>        <xi:include href="
> https://bib.ietf.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.7800.xml%22/>
>
>
> > On Dec 4, 2024, at 12:12 PM, Karen Moore <kmo...@amsl.com> wrote:
> >
> > Hi Orie and *Paul (AD),
> >
> > We have updated the text with your additional suggested edits; the
> changes are now reflected in our files (links below). We now await
> approvals from Hannes and Paul.
> >
> > *Paul, please review the following changes and let us know if you
> approve. The updates can also be viewed here:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html.
> >
> > 1) Section 5.1
> >
> > OLD:
> >   The COSE Key Thumbprint is a digest of the essential parameters
> required
> >   to represent the key as a COSE Key, rather than any additional data
> that
> >   might accompany the key.
> >
> > NEW:
> >   The COSE Key Thumbprint is a digest of the ordered essential
> >   parameters needed to represent a COSE Key, with all other
> >   parameters excluded.
> >
> > ...
> > 2) Section 5.3
> >
> > OLD:
> >   Any party in possession of a key that is represented as a COSE Key can
> >   use the COSE Key Thumbprint.
> >
> > NEW:
> >   The only prerequisites are that the COSE_Key representation
> >   of the key be defined and the party creating the COSE Key Thumbprint
> >   be in possession of the necessary key material.
> >
> > …
> > 3) Addition of Section 5.5
> >
> > NEW:
> >   5.5 Relationship to JSON Web Key Thumbprints
> >
> >   The ckt of a COSE Key, as described in Section 7 of [RFC9052], and the
> jkt of a JSON Web Key,
> >   as described in Section 4 of RFC 7517,  are different even when the
> underlying cryptographic
> >   key material is the same.
> >
> >   This document does not register a JWT claim for using ckt as a
> confirmation
> >   method for a JWT or a CWT claim for using jkt as a confirmation method
> for a CWT.
> >
> > …
> > 4) Section 8
> >
> > OLD:
> >   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >   JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >
> > NEW:
> >   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >   JWT Confirmation Method Name: (none)
> >
> >
> > —FILES (please refresh)—
> >
> > The updated XML file is here:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.xml
> >
> > The updated output files are here:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.txt
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.pdf
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.html
> >
> > This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html
> >
> > These diff files show only changes made during the last edit round:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastdiff.html
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastrfcdiff.html
> >
> > This diff file shows all changes made to date:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-diff.html
> >
> > For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9679
> >
> > Thank you,
> > RFC Editor/kc
> >
> >
> >> On Dec 4, 2024, at 7:26 AM, Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> wrote:
> >>
> >> Thank you!
> >>
> >> "cose key" should be "COSE Key",
> >>
> >> We could add "COSE Key as described in Section 7 of RFC9052" and "JSON
> Web Key, as described in Section 4 of RFC7517"
> >>
> >> If the citations are helpful... This is a style nit.
> >>
> >> I approve of the changes.
> >>
> >> On Tue, Dec 3, 2024 at 3:48 PM Karen Moore <kmo...@amsl.com> wrote:
> >> Authors,
> >>
> >> Thank you for the discussion and suggested changes.  Our files now
> reflect the updates below (see <
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastrfcdiff.html> for a
> snapshot of the changes). Please review and let us know if these changes
> are agreeable or if any further updates are needed. We will then ask the AD
> to approve them.
> >>
> >> 1) Section 5.3
> >>
> >> OLD:
> >>   Any party in possession of a key that is represented as a COSE Key can
> >>   use the COSE Key Thumbprint.
> >>
> >> NEW:
> >>   The only prerequisites are that the COSE_Key representation
> >>   of the key be defined and the party creating the COSE Key Thumbprint
> >>   be in possession of the necessary key material.
> >>
> >> ...
> >> 2) Addition of New Section. Note that we made “json web key” uppercase
> for consistency.
> >>
> >> NEW:
> >>   5.5 Relationship to JSON Web Key Thumbprints
> >>
> >>   The ckt of a cose key and jkt of a JSON Web Key are different, even
> when
> >>   underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> >>
> >>   This document does not register a JWT claim for using ckt as a
> confirmation
> >>   method for a JWT or a CWT claim for using jkt as a confirmation
> method for a CWT.
> >>
> >> ...
> >> 3) Section 8
> >>
> >> OLD:
> >>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>   JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >>
> >> NEW:
> >>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>   JWT Confirmation Method Name: (none)
> >>
> >>
> >> —FILES (please refresh)—
> >>
> >> The updated XML file is here:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.xml
> >>
> >> The updated output files are here:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.txt
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.pdf
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679.html
> >>
> >> This diff file shows all changes made during AUTH48:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html
> >>
> >> These diff files show only changes made during the last edit round:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastdiff.html
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastrfcdiff.html
> >>
> >> This diff file shows all changes made to date:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-diff.html
> >>
> >> For the AUTH48 status of this document, please see:
> >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9679
> >>
> >> Thank you,
> >> RFC Editor/kc
> >>
> >>> On Dec 3, 2024, at 7:55 AM, Hannes Tschofenig <
> hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Thanks for the insightful comment, Orie. I agree with your proposed
> edits for the IANA consideration section and the extra text before the
> section on relationship to certificate thumbprints.
> >>>
> >>> I am also fine with the additional text Mike proposed.
> >>>
> >>> It is indeed too late to add new functionality at this point in time.
> >>>
> >>> Ciao
> >>> Hannes
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> On Tue, Dec 3, 2024 at 3:13 AM Michael Jones <
> michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com> wrote:
> >>> I support adding the section that Orie proposed.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> However in reviewing related text, I unfortunately found a problem.
> Reading
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06#section-5.3,
> it differs from https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7638#section-3.5 in a
> counterproductive and overly restrictive way.  Please change:
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Any party in possession of a key that is represented as a COSE Key can
> >>>
> >>> use the COSE Key Thumbprint.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> to:
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> The only prerequisites are that the COSE_Key representation
> >>>
> >>> of the key be defined and the party creating the COSE Key Thumbprint
> >>>
> >>> be in possession of the necessary key material.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> That way it will be more actionable and will parallel the
> corresponding RFC 7638 text.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>                                                                Thanks
> all,
> >>>
> >>>                                                                -- Mike
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> From: Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> >>> Sent: Monday, December 2, 2024 5:55 PM
> >>> To: Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>
> >>> Cc: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com>; Hannes
> Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net>; RFC Editor <
> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Isobe Kohei <isobeko...@gmail.com>;
> cose-...@ietf.org; Cose Chairs Wg <cose-cha...@ietf.org>; Paul Wouters <
> paul.wout...@aiven.io>; auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679
> <draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06> for your review
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Let's add a section to the document, before the section on
> relationship to certificate thumbprints.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> 5.5 Relationship to JSON Web Key Thumbprints
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> The ckt of a cose key, and jkt of a json web key are different, even
> when underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> This document does not register a JWT claim for using ckt as a
> confirmation method for a JWT, or a CWT claim for using jkt as a
> confirmation method for a CWT.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Dec 2, 2024, 6:26 PM Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> I agree, let's just stick with the simple (none) solution.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Hannes can you approve or suggest changes to the clarifying text that
> makes it clear this is not an oversight?
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Mike, do you object to that clarifying text assuming we take you
> change to the IANA considerations section?
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> OS
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Dec 2, 2024, 5:56 PM Michael Jones <
> michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> I’m either fine with Orie’s proposed change to the registration
> wording or the following one:
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> From:
> >>>
> >>>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>>   JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >>>
> >>> To:
> >>>
> >>>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>>   JWT Confirmation Method Name: (none)
> >>>
> >>> For the record, I’m not OK trying to add a ckt JWT “cnf” method as an
> AUTH48 action (despite me appreciating Orie’s discussion of the
> possibility).
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>                                                                Cheers,
> >>>
> >>>                                                                -- Mike
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> From: Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> >>> Sent: Monday, December 2, 2024 2:55 PM
> >>> To: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com>
> >>> Cc: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net>; RFC Editor <
> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Isobe Kohei <isobeko...@gmail.com>;
> cose-...@ietf.org; Cose Chairs Wg <cose-cha...@ietf.org>; Michael Jones <
> michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>; Paul Wouters <paul.wout...@aiven.io>;
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >>> Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679
> <draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06> for your review
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> This is indeed a bug, for extra assurance that it is a problem:
> >>>
> >>> How would you use a ckt to verify a JWT that was using "cnf"?
> >>>
> >>> Here is a more complete fix for the bug:
> >>>
> >>>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06#section-5.3
> >>>
> >>> Note that the ckt of a cose key, and jkt of a json web key are
> different, even when underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> >>>
> >>> ckt is a binary string and jkt is always a base64url string encoded as
> described in section 6.1 of RFC9449.
> >>> To use a ckt claim inside a JWT, the ckt claim value MUST be base64url
> encoded.
> >>> The example provided in section 6.1 of RFC9449 is modified to
> distinguish confirmation with a CKT instead of JKT:
> >>> {
> >>>  "sub":"some...@example.com",
> >>>  "iss":"https://server.example.com";,
> >>>  "nbf":1562262611,
> >>>  "exp":1562266216,
> >>>  "cnf": {
> >>>    "ckt":"SWvYr63zB-WwjGSwQhv53AFSijRKQ72oj63RZp2iU-w"
> >>>  }
> >>> }
> >>>
> >>> I used the same base64url encoded thumbprint the draft already used
> for extra clarity.
> >>>
> >>> ckt would also need to be added here:
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/jwt/jwt.xhtml#confirmation-methods
> >>>
> >>> This kind of change might need to be taken to the relevant lists for
> review... and maybe another WGLC.
> >>>
> >>> ... we could leave the "ckt" in JWT cnf registration to another
> document, but I think at a minimum we need something added to section 5.3
> to the effect of:
> >>>
> >>> Note that the ckt of a cose key, and jkt of a json web key are
> different, even when underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> >>> ckt is a binary string and jkt is always a base64url string encoded as
> described in section 6.1 of RFC9449.
> >>>
> >>> ^ If we are comfortable with this change alone, we still have a
> problem with the registration template:
> >>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8747.html#name-registration-template
> >>>
> >>> """
> >>> CWT claims should normally have a corresponding JWT claim. If a
> corresponding JWT claim would not make sense, the designated experts can
> choose to accept registrations for which the JWT Claim Name is listed as
> "N/A".
> >>> """
> >>>
> >>> The logical JWT claim is "ckt"... not "jkt"... so N/A... does not make
> sense... and leaving it blank also does not make sense.
> >>>
> >>> There is also the x5t claim which sets the precedent that ckt is for
> cose key, jkt is for json web key, and x5t is for x.509 certs.
> >>>
> >>> I propose:
> >>>
> >>> From:
> >>>
> >>>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>>   JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >>>
> >>> To:
> >>>
> >>>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>>   JWT Confirmation Method Name: Not assigned by RFCXXXX ( not to be
> confused with x5t or jkt )
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> OS
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> On Mon, Dec 2, 2024 at 4:14 PM Hannes Tschofenig <
> hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com> wrote:
> >>>
> >>> Thanks for the work on the draft and sorry for the slow response.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> I read through the draft carefully today and in general the edits look
> good but I noticed a possible bug.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> In the IANA consideration section we say that the ckt confirmation
> method maps to the jkt JWT configuration method. I double-checked RFC 9449,
> which defines the jkt, and it defines the computation as follows:
> >>>
> >>> "
> >>> The value of the jkt member MUST be the base64url encoding
> >>>
> >>> of the JWK SHA-256 Thumbprint.
> >>> "
> >>>
> >>> In draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06 we define the ckt thumbprint as
> the hash of the deterministic encoding of the COSE_Key structure.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> So, the question to me is whether we can even map the ckt to the jkt
> since the underlying structure that is hashed is different: JWK vs.
> COSE_Key structure.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> For that reason I believe it would be more correct to change the IANA
> consideration section by omitting the JWT Confirmation Method Name.
> >>>
> >>> Here is the proposed change:
> >>>
> >>> From:
> >>>
> >>>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>>   JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> To:
> >>>
> >>>   Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >>>   Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >>>   JWT Confirmation Method Name:
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Do you agree with me?
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Sorry for noticing this issue only now.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Ciao
> >>>
> >>> Hannes
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Betreff:
> >>>
> >>> AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 <draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06> for your
> review
> >>>
> >>> Datum:
> >>>
> >>> Mon, 21 Oct 2024 14:30:59 -0700 (PDT)
> >>>
> >>> Von:
> >>>
> >>> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org
> >>>
> >>> An:
> >>>
> >>> isobeko...@gmail.com, hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net,
> orie@transmute.industries
> >>>
> >>> Kopie (CC):
> >>>
> >>> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org, cose-...@ietf.org, cose-cha...@ietf.org,
> michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com, paul.wout...@aiven.io,
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> >>>
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> *****IMPORTANT*****
> >>>
> >>> Updated 2024/10/21
> >>>
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> >>> --------------------------------------
> >>> RFC9679 (draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06)
> >>>
> >>> Title : CBOR Object Signing and Encryption (COSE) Key Thumbprint
> >>> Author(s) : K. Isobe, H. Tschofenig, O. Steele
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