On Thu, May 20, 2021 at 11:12 AM ARIN <[email protected]> wrote: > * ARIN-2021-1: ASN Clarifications to Sections 2 and 8
Howdy, Would the proposal authors offer a couple examples where the changed language clarifies the policy, explaining why the prior policy could be interpreted to mean something different than the new one? I see you moved a lot of words around but they seem to me to be the same words providing the same meanings to the same components of each sentence. For "purely editorial" policy changes there are two things I'd personally like to see in the proposal: 1. A redline version of the impacted policy sections showing the struck and replaced text so it can be readily understood in context. 2. A change-by-change explanation of what was wrong with the old version that the new version fixes. Is it poor grammar? A possible misinterpretation? Esthetically offensive? What specifically does the change correct? If someone in the community expressed confusion about what a sentence meant, what did they say and how does the new text resolve that concern? Regards, Bill Herrin -- William Herrin [email protected] https://bill.herrin.us/ _______________________________________________ ARIN-PPML You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues.
