Hi Chris, Martin, and PPML, Staff will generate a marked-up document that mirrors the proposed language changes in http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf. I will update the list once complete.
Sean Hopkins Senior Policy Analyst American Registry for Internet Numbers > On Mar 23, 2021, at 5:26 PM, Chris Woodfield <[email protected]> wrote: > > Agreed - the linked PDF does not show any redlined changes. Was the wrong > version of the PDF posted? > > -C > >> On Mar 23, 2021, at 8:17 AM, Martin Hannigan <[email protected]> wrote: >> >> >> >> Did you mean to say that there was a markup "red line" showing the changes? >> If there is, I don't see it or anything that lets someone easily ascertain >> what's being proposed change wise. >> >> >> >> On Tue, Mar 23, 2021 at 11:11 AM ARIN <[email protected]> wrote: >> On 18 March 2021, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) classified "ARIN-2020-9: >> Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and Related Provisions" as an Editorial >> Change to the Number Resource Policy Manual (NRPM). >> >> >> >> The text is below and can be found at: >> >> >> >> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/ >> >> >> >> The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, >> paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP): >> >> >> >> "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature >> are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only be >> made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the ARIN >> Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are >> non-substantial in nature." >> >> >> >> Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged. The review period will >> close on 22 April 2021. >> >> >> >> The Number Resource Policy Manual is available at: >> >> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/ >> >> >> >> The PDP is available at: >> >> https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ >> >> >> >> Regards, >> >> >> >> Sean Hopkins >> >> Senior Policy Analyst >> >> American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN) >> >> >> >> >> >> >> >> Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and >> Related Provisions >> >> >> >> Problem Statement: >> >> >> >> ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential editorial clean-up of >> section 4 of the NRPM. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM >> Clean-up Working Group undertook an editorial review of section 4. >> >> >> >> The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ >> consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the >> sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized. >> In the course of this work, we discovered the need for certain changes to >> sections 2, 3, and 6. We included those that are editorial in nature in this >> proposal. >> >> >> >> Other changes to those three sections will be addressed in subsequent >> proposals. We are also proposing that the NRPM Table of Contents be updated >> to reflect the editorial changes to the NRPM contents contained in this >> proposal. >> >> >> >> Policy Statement: >> >> >> >> The changes proposed to be made in this editorial proposal are too numerous >> to list individually. Accordingly, a document is provided at >> http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf >> that shows the changes being proposed as mark-up text relative to the >> version of the NRPM in effect when the editorial work of the Working Group >> started. >> >> >> >> Timetable for Implementation: Immediate >> >> >> >> Anything Else: >> >> >> >> This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature. >> >> _______________________________________________ >> ARIN-PPML >> You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to >> the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). >> Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: >> https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml >> Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. >> _______________________________________________ >> ARIN-PPML >> You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to >> the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). >> Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: >> https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml >> Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. > > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues. _______________________________________________ ARIN-PPML You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues.
