Agreed - the linked PDF does not show any redlined changes. Was the wrong version of the PDF posted?
-C > On Mar 23, 2021, at 8:17 AM, Martin Hannigan <[email protected]> wrote: > > > > Did you mean to say that there was a markup "red line" showing the changes? > If there is, I don't see it or anything that lets someone easily ascertain > what's being proposed change wise. > > > > On Tue, Mar 23, 2021 at 11:11 AM ARIN <[email protected] <mailto:[email protected]>> > wrote: > On 18 March 2021, the ARIN Advisory Council (AC) classified "ARIN-2020-9: > Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and Related Provisions" as an Editorial > Change to the Number Resource Policy Manual (NRPM). > > > > The text is below and can be found at: > > > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/ARIN_edit_2020_9/> > > > The process for Editorial Changes is found in Part One, Section 3.1, > paragraph 3 of the Policy Development Process (PDP): > > > > "Changes to policy that are purely editorial and non-substantial in nature > are outside the scope of the full Policy Development Process and may only be > made with 30 days public notice followed by the concurrence of both the ARIN > Advisory Council and ARIN Board of Trustees that the changes are > non-substantial in nature." > > > > Your feedback on this Editorial Change is encouraged. The review period will > close on 22 April 2021. > > > > The Number Resource Policy Manual is available at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/nrpm/> > > > The PDP is available at: > > https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/ > <https://www.arin.net/participate/policy/pdp/> > > > Regards, > > > > Sean Hopkins > > Senior Policy Analyst > > American Registry for Internet Numbers (ARIN) > > > > > > > > Editorial Change ARIN-edit-2020-9: Editorial Clean-up of NRPM Section 4 and > Related Provisions > > > > Problem Statement: > > > > ARIN staff have identified some areas of potential editorial clean-up of > section 4 of the NRPM. Building on those recommendations the ARIN AC NRPM > Clean-up Working Group undertook an editorial review of section 4. > > > > The focus of the review was to clarify and simplify language, employ > consistent and more up to date terminology throughout and renumber the > sections after removing section numbers that were no longer being utilized. > In the course of this work, we discovered the need for certain changes to > sections 2, 3, and 6. We included those that are editorial in nature in this > proposal. > > > > Other changes to those three sections will be addressed in subsequent > proposals. We are also proposing that the NRPM Table of Contents be updated > to reflect the editorial changes to the NRPM contents contained in this > proposal. > > > > Policy Statement: > > > > The changes proposed to be made in this editorial proposal are too numerous > to list individually. Accordingly, a document is provided at > http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf > <http://www.arin.net/participate/policy/drafts/pdf/arin_edit_2020_9_v2.pdf> > that shows the changes being proposed as mark-up text relative to the version > of the NRPM in effect when the editorial work of the Working Group started. > > > > Timetable for Implementation: Immediate > > > > Anything Else: > > > > This proposal is intended to be editorial in nature. > > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected] > <mailto:[email protected]>). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > <https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml> > Please contact [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> if you experience any > issues. > _______________________________________________ > ARIN-PPML > You are receiving this message because you are subscribed to > the ARIN Public Policy Mailing List ([email protected]). > Unsubscribe or manage your mailing list subscription at: > https://lists.arin.net/mailman/listinfo/arin-ppml > Please contact [email protected] if you experience any issues.
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