HI Owen,
> On Oct 5, 2024, at 9:07 AM, Owen Friel (ofriel) <ofr...@cisco.com> wrote:
>
> Thanks Mahesh.
>
>
>
> [mj] I see that you have changed most instances of “Pledge" to “pledge" while
> changing “owner” to “Owner”, and keeping “Registrar" with a capital letter. I
> would have expected that you would have made all instances of “pledge”
> “Pledge” to distinguish it from the word “pledge”, meaning a promise. At the
> same time, I can see that you have used lowercase “pledge” and “registrar” in
> the [BRSKI] specification.
>
> To clean this out, choose one of the capitalizations (uppercase would be my
> preference, but I will let you decide), and apply it uniformly across the
> document. For example, in the terminology section, Figures 1 and 2, I see
> “Pledge” and in Section 9.1 title “Security Updates for the Pledge”.
>
> [ofriel] https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/172
> <https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/172> opened to track this and
> close it off.
>
>
> I will admit I have not gone through the BRSKI specification. What happens if
> the URI of the Cloud Registrar is shutdown or moved? Is that covered by
> BRSKI, or is that outlined somewhere in this document?
>
> [mj] I was looking for text that addresses this question in the updated
> document. Could you point me to it?
>
> [ofriel] Michael addressed this in this PR
> https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/169/files
> <https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/169/files> which is at
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-10#section-5
>
> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-10#section-5>.
> Is this text sufficient, or do you feel this point needs further
> clarification?
Ahh! Thanks for pointing it out.
If the manufacturer wishes to change the URL, or discontinue the service, then
the manufacturer will need to arrange for a firmware update where appropriate
changes are made.
“… where appropriate changes are made”. I would have expected a little more
color to this statement, but I can understand that it would span the gamut of
possible changes. As such, I am letting it go.
Cheers
Mahesh Jethananndani
mjethanand...@gmail.com
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