Thanks Mahesh.


[mj] I see that you have changed most instances of “Pledge" to “pledge" while 
changing “owner” to “Owner”, and keeping “Registrar" with a capital letter. I 
would have expected that you would have made all instances of “pledge” “Pledge” 
to distinguish it from the word “pledge”, meaning a promise. At the same time, 
I can see that you have used lowercase “pledge” and “registrar” in the [BRSKI] 
specification.

To clean this out, choose one of the capitalizations (uppercase would be my 
preference, but I will let you decide), and apply it uniformly across the 
document. For example, in the terminology section, Figures 1 and 2, I see 
“Pledge” and in Section 9.1 title “Security Updates for the Pledge”.

[ofriel] https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/issues/172 opened to track 
this and close it off.


I will admit I have not gone through the BRSKI specification. What happens if 
the URI of the Cloud Registrar is shutdown or moved? Is that covered by BRSKI, 
or is that outlined somewhere in this document?

[mj] I was looking for text that addresses this question in the updated 
document. Could you point me to it?

[ofriel] Michael addressed this in this PR 
https://github.com/anima-wg/brski-cloud/pull/169/files which is at 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-anima-brski-cloud-10#section-5.
 Is this text sufficient, or do you feel this point needs further clarification?

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