Further win indirection: "with." Not sure if this causes Outshines the Sun to fail. "by as a single amendment" pretty sure the comma is not necessary here, but, just checking! (I can a lime ribbon legitimately as well... :'( )
"correctly specifying the amount" what's to stop a player from just specifying a bunch of times, because the correct amount is slightly unknown for whatever reason? Land Epochs: "If a proposal entitled "Further win indirection" submitted in the 24 hours before this proposal was submitted has been adopted" -- if for any reason, the adoption of that proposal succeeds but the changes to the rule fail, then this will update Light Overexposure anyways. I can't find anything truly substantially wrong though... :'( <https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaign=sig-email&utm_content=webmail> Virus-free.www.avast.com <https://www.avast.com/sig-email?utm_medium=email&utm_source=link&utm_campaign=sig-email&utm_content=webmail> <#DAB4FAD8-2DD7-40BB-A1B8-4E2AA1F9FDF2> On Tue, Nov 11, 2025 at 11:45 AM Janet Cobb via agora-business <[email protected]> wrote: > > Ahhhhhhh, sorry. I'm trying my best, I swear. > > I withdraw the proposal I have in the Proposal Pool (if any) entitled > "Further win indirection". I withdraw the proposal I have in the > Proposal Pool (if any) entitled "Land epochs". > > [Note that there are two proposal submissions in the message.] > > > I submit a proposal with the below-quoted attributes: > > > Title: Further win indirection > > Author: Janet > > Coauthors: > > Adoption index: 1.5 > > > > { > > > > Amend Rule 2656 ("Radiance") by, as a single amendment (failing as a > > whole if any step fails), in order: > > > > * Replacing ", e wins the game" with. ", e Outshines the Sun.". > > > > * Deleting the text after (but not including) "Outshines the Sun." > > through the end of the paragraph containing that text. > > > > * Inserting the following paragraph after the paragraph beginning "Upon > > a correct announcement": > > > > { > > > > When a player Outshines the Sun, e wins the game. When a player wins the > > game this way, the following happen in order: > > > > * Eir radiance is set to 0. > > > > * The radiance of each other player is set to half its current value > > (rounded down). > > > > } > > > > [Follow the convention of having a separate action for winning and > > ensure that radiance does not reset if the win is prevented (e.g. due to > > blots).] > > > > > > Amend Rule 2659 ("Stamps") by as a single amendment (failing as a whole > > if any step fails), in order: > > > > * Replacing "Any active player CAN win" with "Any active player CAN > > Profligately Pursue Philately". > > > > * Appending to the paragraph beginning "Any active player CAN > > Profligately" the following text: " When e does so, e wins the game.". > > > > [Similarly follow the convention here. This is less necessary, but we've > > tried to avoid having winning itself be fee-based on in the past.] > > > > } > > > I submit a proposal with the below-quoted attributes: > > > Title: Land epochs > > > > Author: Janet > > > > Coauthors: ais523 > > > > Adoption index: 1.0 > > > > { > > > > Amend Rule 2709 ("The Growth Cycle") by replacing the paragraph > > beginning "At the end of each Crop Season" with the following paragraphs: > > > > { > > > > When the Fields Wither, all unharvested Crops are lost. For the > > avoidance of doubt, the previous paragraph notwithstanding, a player > > CANNOT harvest a Crop planted before the most recent time the Fields > > Withered. > > > > At the end of each Crop Season, the Fields Wither. > > > > } > > > > > > > > Enact a new Rule at power 1 entitled "Light Overexposure" with the > > following text: > > > > { > > > > When a player wins the game as a result of a correct announcement from a > > player that eir radiance is 100 or more (correctly specifying the > > amount), the following happen in order: > > > > * All Pyrite is destroyed. > > > > * The Fields Wither. > > > > * All Hectares are destroyed. > > > > * Each player is granted 16 Hectares. > > > > } > > > > > > If a proposal entitled "Further win indirection" submitted in the 24 hours > > before this proposal was submitted has been adopted, amend the Rule just > > enacted by replacing "When a player wins the game as a result of a > > correct announcement from a player that eir radiance is 100 or more > > (correctly specifying the amount)" with "When a player wins the game as > > a result of Outshining the Sun". > > > > } > > > -- > Janet Cobb > > Assessor, Rulekeepor > -- 4ˢᵗ wearing Jester's Cap Uncertified Bad Idea Generator
