On 4/17/23 18:30, juan via agora-discussion wrote:
> New version. Fixed most things people mentioned in response to the
> previous version, plus changed a bit how the thing works.
>
> Now, instead of Golems activating by themselves and acting on behalf of
> people, we have players activating the golems and doing the acting. This
> still allows chains of activations and fun gameplay.
>
> Also, there is space for more types of golems, with different effects
> (not only acting on behalf). The ones I included are just examples,
> and suggestions are welcome (and requested).
>
> Finally: should I repeal promises and pledges?
>
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> DRAFT: The World's Enchantment
> Author: juan
> A.I.: 3.0
>
> 1. Create the following rules:
"in the order listed"
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> Title: Golems
> Power: 2.5
>
> The Xaman is an Office.
>
> Clay is a currency tracked by the Xaman.
>
> Golems are entities tracked by the Xaman. Golems have a Mind, a Body,
> and a Soul, which are documents.
"Text" or "strings" rather than documents. A document is a specific
published instance of text, rather than the text itself.
"Tracking" isn't defined for "entities" at large, only assets and switches.
> A player CAN destroy a Golem by announcement if the conditions in its
> Soul are clearly and unambiguously met, or without objections.
"without objection". This might also be clearer as two sentences.
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> Title: Avatar
> Power: 1.0
>
> Avatar are a type of Golem. A Player CAN create an Avatar by paying a
> fee of 2 Clay and specifying its Mind, Body and Soul.
"Avatars"? Or is "Avatar" plural?
> When an Avatar is activated, the activator performs the actions in its
> Body on behalf of the Avatar's creator.
This can't be done at power 1.
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> Title: Totems
> Power: 1.0
>
> Totems are a type of Golem. When a Totem is activated, the activator wins.
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Why enact this if it can't be created without a rule or proposal?
General comments on below: please avoid using email quotation in
proposals (prefer {braces} or equivalent), and "amend" has one m.
> 2. Repeal Rule 1742 “Contracts”.
>
> 3. Ammend Rule 2608 “The Notary” by deleting
>
>> 2. every contract, with its title, full provisions, and parties; and
>
> and replacing
>
>> 3. every promise, along with its title, text, creator, and bearer.
> with
>
>> 2. every promise, along with its title, text, creator, and bearer.
"and renumbering the list accordingly".
> 5. Ammend Rule 2519 “Consent” by deleting
>
>> 2. e is party to a contract whose body explicitly and unambiguously
>> indicates eir consent;
> and replacing '3. ' by '2. ' and '4. ' by '3. '.
"and renumbering the list accordingly".
>
> 6. Ammend Rule 2166 “Assets” by deleting “Contracts have Mint Authority.”
>
> 7. Ammend Rule 2576 “Ownership” by deleting “and contracts,”
This will result in "By default, ownership of an asset is restricted to
Agora, players, but an asset's...". It's more clear and less likely to
result in a mistake to replace a whole clause or sentence.
> 8. Ammend Rule 2581 “Official Patent Titles” by deleting
>
>> - Terms of Service, awardable by the Notary to any player who creates
>> multiple Contracts that achieve fun gameplay and significantly
>> impacts Agora as a whole
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