On 6/13/22 16:51, Forest Sweeney via agora-business wrote:
> I submit the following proposal:
> {
> Title: Ministry of Vagabonds
> Adoption Index: 1.0
> Author: 4st
> Co-author(s): nix, Madrid, secretsnail9, Jason


As written, this proposal does nothing or something close to it. It
would need to enact/amend rules to have lasting effect.


> Ministry Location (or just Location) is a secured active player switch,
> tracked by the Ministor in eir monthly report,
> with possible values Ministry of Vagabonds (the default) and any Ministry.


It does not seem like a good idea to have two completely separate groups
both called Ministries.


> An active player CAN Plan to Flip eir own Ministry Location,
> specifying any valid value for eir Ministry Location, by announcement.
> When the rules state that it's the wandering,
> every active player's Ministry Location is set to the value e most
> recently specified by Planning to Flip. If a player did not Plan to Flip
> eir Ministry Location switch since the last wandering, it not Flipped.
>
> It's the wandering at the beginning of each month.


Others may disagree with me on this, but I don't particularly like the
phrasing of "It's the wandering", particularly the contraction.


> A player is considered Freshly Ministrated when eir Location Flips.
> A player is considered Reministrated when a wandering occurs and eir
> Location is not flipped, and e is not Freshly Ministrated.
> A player is considered Refreshedly Ministrated when e is Reministrated,
> or if e is Freshly Ministrated.


"Freshly Ministrated" and "Refreshedly Ministrated" with subtly
different meanings seems rather confusing to me. Also, these statuses
need to have an explicit time bound.


> The following rules apply, with e referring to a player with that Location:


"The following apply to each active player based on that player's
Ministry Location:"


> - Ministry of Victories:
>   If e is the only player with eir Location as the
>   Ministry of Victories, e CAN, once by announcement, win. If e
>   wins in this way, eir Location is Flipped to the Ministry of Vagabonds.
>   When e is Freshly Ministrated, e CAN, once by announcement, gain 10
> points.


We've standardized on players not being able to win by announcement, but
instead perform some other action by announcement, which results in them
winning. This is due to regulated actions, iirc.


> - Ministry of Minting:
>   When e is Refreshedly Ministrated, e CAN,
>   once by announcement, grant 5 stamps of eir own print to emself.


Stamps have types, not prints.


> - Ministry of Justice:
>   When e is Refreshedly Ministrated, e CAN,
>   once by announcement, remove up to 4 blots from emself.

"Expunge", not "remove", is conventional for blots.


> - Ministry of Vagabonds:
>   When e is Reministrated,  e can no longer Plan to Flip eir own Location,
>   but instead simply Flips eir own Location,
>   specifying any valid value for eir Location, once by announcement.
>   Once e has Flipped Locations in this way,
>   e must once again Plan to Flip Locations
>   instead of simply Flipping Locations.


"When e Plans to Flip eir Ministry Location, it is immediately flipped
to the specified value, if possible."


> - Ministry of Engineering:
>   E can Flip the Device to either on or off with Agoran Consent.
>   E can act on behalf of the device to take any
>   action the device may take by announcement.


This seems extremely dangerous. We've intentionally limited
acting-on-behalf of the device to an accountable officer.


> - Ministry of Beasts:
>   E can buy bird food by paying a fee of 3 boatloads of coins.
>   E can buy a Beast Permit by paying a fee of 40 boatloads of coins
> instead.
>   E can renew a Beast Permit by paying a fee of 20 boatloads of coins
> instead.


Don't need "instead" here, it's a separate method.


> - Ministry of Gardens:
>   Once per stone collection period, e can pay a fee of N boatloads of
> coins,
>   specifying one stone e owns, and that stone has their escape chance
>   reduced by N%, to a minimum of 0%,


"Stone collection period" is not defined. This should end in a period,
not a comma. Also this would need to be phrased as a continuous effect.


> - Ministry of Power: Eir Voting Strength is 1 greater.
> }
>
> (My intent here is to provide specialization, but also the game of Chicken,
> who is willing to leave the Ministry of Victories alone?
> Who wants sweet sweet points? Suggestions, etc, are welcome.)


Overall, I have some concerns. These don't seem particularly balanced
and may be overly specific. I'm not even sure if I want to go back to a
focus-based game immediately.

-- 
Jason Cobb

Arbitor, Assessor, Rulekeepor, S​tonemason

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